Duniyaa badi bedhangi hai

by jannatjahan on April 26, 2009, 10:21:46 AM
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Mai apni ye kavita share karne se pehle apne un sabhi doston se maafi maangna chhahungi jo ise padh kar hurt feel karein...plz ise deeply na lein...maine sirf duniyaa ki aur duniyaa waalon ki sachhi tasveer rakhne ki kosis kari hai..plz dont feel hurt to read this poem.....

Kyaa kahein yaar ye duniyaa badi bedhangi hai
upar se to sab kuchh dhaka hua sa hai
par haqeeqat ye hai ki puri tarah nangi hai
kyaa rahishh kya bhikhmange
 alag alag karte hain dange
kyaa neta kya daroga
dono ka kehar janta ne bhoga
doctor ka aala hai matwala
sune usi ki dil ki dhadkan
jiski jeb se rupyaa bola
is duniyaa me to bhaiyaa
koi sangi na saathi hai
isiliye to kaha hai
Duniyaa badi bedhangi hai
Bharat ki raajdhani delhi
jo udwaati hai sabki khilli
aasiyaana jiska chennai
sabke dilon me chubhote wo suee
calcutta ki baat nirali
har janta lagti sawaali
aur kya kahein Mumbai ki
filmon ki nagari filmistaan
sabke dilon ke kone me chhup kar
baitha rahta hai shaitaan
gaur se dekho to janoge
sabke dil dorangi hai
isiliye to kaha hai bhaiyaa
Duniyaa badi bedhangi hai
Hindu muslim skh isaai
aapas me hai bhai bhai
par peeth piche sab ek duje ki
karte rahte hain kheenchai
dambh bharte hain ki
hum sab hai hindustaani
par baaj nahi aate hain karne se ye be-imani
kehte hain hum bete purab ke
par paschimi sabhyata apnaate hain
gale lagate videshi rang dhang ko
apni sanskriti thukraate hain
saat rang se saji dhaji ye
lagti to hai satrangi
par haqeeqat to yahi hai bhaiyaa
hai ye duniyaa badi bedhangi


HUM HINDUSTAANIYON KA EK ROOP YE BHI HAI
YE SACH HAI....SAAYAD KOI ISE NAKARANA NAHI CHAHEGAA.
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salil2002
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2009, 11:14:43 AM »
bahut achche jannat aapne ek aaina dikhane kii koshish kii hai......... aapne qafi asaan shabdo main likha hai magar meaning bahut deep hai........ is par comment na karna aapne aap se bemani hoga......keep it up gud wrk
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2009, 12:12:05 PM »
good work jannat ji keep it up
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2009, 12:17:33 PM »
Bilkul Bilkul Sach Kaha Hai Tumne, Shweta, Good Job Yaar,.
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MHussain
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2009, 07:20:52 AM »
Don't think like a pessimist, dear, if you are passionate and worry about the world, try to shape it better collectively.
Well you wrote nice.
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2009, 07:36:20 AM »
Nice one Jannat Ji
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2009, 04:03:07 AM »
bahoot achaa vyang hai har pahaloo par aapne achaa vyang kassa hai good work jannat ji.....

netra....
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salma786
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2009, 04:21:06 AM »
Bahoot khoob Shwetha sis.... Apne sachaai ki jhalak dikhayi hai...
Kip it up dear Usual Smile
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syednaami
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2009, 06:48:12 AM »
Very good...
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: May 01, 2009, 10:48:20 AM »
Bahut sahi aur accha bayan kiya aapne Jannat dear... Thumbs UP
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