EK CHOTEE SEE BOOND

by NETRAPAL on July 19, 2006, 05:52:48 AM
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MAINE DEKHEE THEE GHAAS PAR EK CHOTI SEE BOOND
OS KEE THEE YAA THEE BARSAAT KEE, MAGAR
AASMA KI  GOD SE NIKAL KAR AYEE HAI WO THANDEE SEE BOOND

MANJIL KA PATAA NAHI THAA BAS NIKAL PADEE
BHOOL GAYEE THEE VAJOOD MIT JAATAA OOSKA
GAR RET KE AASHIYAANE ME PAHOOCH JATEE WO BOOND

BACH GAYEE THE WO, RET SE PAHALE AUR BHI AASHIYANE THE
OOCHE DARKHOTO TAK KE DIL OOSE APNANE KO VYAAKUL THE
PAR YE AASHIYANAA NAHI THA OONKA SWARTH THAT
KUCH PALO MAI OONKEE PYAAS MITA JAAGI WO CHOTI SE BOOND

VAJOOD BACH JAATA OOSKAA GAR SEEP MAI GIR JAATEE
SEEP MAI GIR KAR EK MOTI BAN JATEE WO PYAREE SE BOOND





 


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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2006, 01:27:20 PM »
Bahoot Sundar Kavitha Hai Netrapal Ji,..
Nice One,..
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2006, 07:05:34 AM »
BHOOT BHOOT DHANYAAD JI

PUCH LINE AAP SE BHI CHAHTAA HOO

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«Reply #3 on: July 20, 2006, 12:40:02 PM »
Yaar Tum Bahoot Acha Likhte Ho,..
Inshallah Iska Jawaab Soch Kar Deta Hoon..
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«Reply #4 on: November 13, 2008, 11:59:12 PM »
bahoot khoob Netra ji
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«Reply #5 on: November 18, 2008, 09:22:11 AM »
bahut purani kavita ko aaj fir dekh kar achaa lagaa thanks aap kaa pooja ji

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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2008, 09:45:09 AM »
Gud netra..

But one more thing which i want to share....

Woh Boond hi thi jisne hume rulaya tha..
Woh Boond hi thi jisne hume jalaya tha..
Woh Boond hi thi jisne hume bachaya tha..
Woh Boond hi thi jisne hume jeena sikhaya tha..

Boond Boond se hi humne shayar likhi,
Boond ne hi in ankhon me sapne todana sikhaya tha...



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«Reply #7 on: November 18, 2008, 10:41:42 AM »
wonderful netra ji Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 18, 2008, 11:16:58 AM »
Gud netra..

But one more thing which i want to share....

Woh Boond hi thi jisne hume rulaya tha..
Woh Boond hi thi jisne hume jalaya tha..
Woh Boond hi thi jisne hume bachaya tha..
Woh Boond hi thi jisne hume jeena sikhaya tha..

Boond Boond se hi humne shayar likhi,
Boond ne hi in ankhon me sapne todana sikhaya tha...





thanks sudhir ji

achaa reply hai aapkaa or ak anokee vyakya boond kee

netra...
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«Reply #9 on: November 18, 2008, 11:18:17 AM »
wonderful netra ji Applause

thanks bhawani ji ye maine tab likhee thee jab maine yaha join kiya tha achanak fir saamne aa gaye ye line....

netra...
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«Reply #10 on: November 18, 2008, 11:43:15 PM »
nice lines Sudhir
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«Reply #11 on: November 19, 2008, 11:45:13 AM »
Thanks Pooja...

Par sach kahu to aaj bhi is Boond ne mujhe jeene nahi diya..

Aankhon se giri woh Boond thi,
Palkon pe saji woh Boond thi,
Damaan me rachi woh Boond thi,
Boond hi jeene nahi deti hume..
Ab kya kahu Pooja ji... Ye kaisi Boond thi...
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«Reply #12 on: December 09, 2008, 10:25:46 PM »
nice lines again sudhir ji!!
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«Reply #13 on: December 25, 2008, 10:21:47 AM »
Thank u pooja ji...
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