****Ek tukdaa Roti**** -Panna 2:Shairy-E-Watan

pandit

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«Reply #15 on: June 18, 2009, 10:09:04 PM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on June 11, 2009, 08:29:55 AM

Is jahan ki taqdeer
Aansuon se gili maati
aur ek Tukda Roti...

hai suru bhi yahi
aur ant bhi
anginat ho armaan
aur ichayen anant bhi
sapno ke chadar me yun hi
jeevan rupi raat kati...

is jahan ki taqdeer
aansuon se gili mati
aur ek tukda roti

asafal har banda
safalta ki raah me
din gujarta hansi thitholi me
aur raatein karaah me
fanse hue hai sabhi iski jaal me
is taqdeer ki bas yahi hai paripati

is jahan.............

bhagta ja raha insaan
par manjil kanhi koi nisaan
bebasi ne todi simayen
khamosi ne kholi jubaan
ek roti ki khatir hi to
insaan noch raha insaan ki boti....

is jahan .............

kothi pe kothi banwayee
aur mehlon pe sajaye mehlein
aadambar se bhara hai jeevan
jhapatata hai kyun Roti pe pehle
ye Roti hi to hai jisne
sabke labon pe khusiyaan baanti..

is jahan ki taqdeer
aansuon se gili mati
aur ek tukda Roti......

bahut acche jannat....


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pandit

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #16 on: June 20, 2009, 10:49:11 PM »

BAHUT ACCHE JANNAT JEE..


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jannatjahan

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #17 on: June 22, 2009, 05:59:05 AM »

Quote from: Sophi on June 13, 2009, 05:29:54 PM

Wah Wah sweta sis bahoot bahoot Khoob!

Hey Thanks Dear Sophi..... Usual Smile


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jannatjahan

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #18 on: June 22, 2009, 06:03:31 AM »

Quote from: MHussain on June 18, 2009, 10:00:18 PM

Appreciable work, nice to read.

Thanks Hussain ji...aap kabhi kabhi mere thread par aate ho
jab bhi aate ho achha lagta hai..


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jannatjahan

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #19 on: June 22, 2009, 06:10:38 AM »

Quote from: pandit on June 20, 2009, 10:49:11 PM

BAHUT ACCHE JANNAT JEE..

Shukriyaa pandit ji....


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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #20 on: June 22, 2009, 06:22:41 AM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Shwetaji..

Bahut khoobsurat Soch..


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jannatjahan

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #21 on: June 22, 2009, 06:30:47 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on June 22, 2009, 06:22:41 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob Shwetaji..

Bahut khoobsurat Soch..

Shukriyaa khwaish ji.....


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Safi Yani

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #22 on: June 23, 2009, 09:35:31 AM »

Nice creation,Jannat

Garaan(mehgi) hai jab har ek shay is jahaan mein
To sasta hai gareebon ka lahoo kyon

Hai garaan tadfeen(dafan karna)bhi is dar mein
Muflisi(Gareebi) mein maut bhi dushwaar hai

Safi Yani


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poppoetry

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #23 on: June 23, 2009, 11:51:24 AM »

bahut umda....bahut gehri soch k sath likha h aapne
bahut hi khub jannat ji...... Clapping Smiley


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MHussain

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #24 on: June 23, 2009, 12:29:28 PM »

My pleasure Ms. Jannat


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santosh bhosale

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #25 on: June 26, 2009, 09:59:04 AM »

Quote from: jannatjahan on June 11, 2009, 08:29:55 AM

lajawb very very touchable


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sbechain

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Re: ****Ek tukdaa Roti****

«Reply #26 on: July 21, 2009, 10:19:59 AM »

NICE ONE JANNAT JI Applause


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