FOJEE:Shairy-E-Watan

NETRAPAL

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Wo bhookha thaa
Fir bhee ladtaa thaa
Wo ghayal tha
Fir bhee n ruktaa thaa
Liye jakhm jism pe apne
Wo aage hee aage badhtaa thaa

Pathreelee chattano par
Liye bandook kandhe par
Durgam se durgam path par
Wo n thaktaa thaa n ruktaa tha
Bas aagee hee aage wo
Badhtaa hee rahtaa tha

Toofaanee nadiyo me
Barfeele toofaano me
bas wo muskaataa rahtaa tha
kabhee bantaa saharaa pal bhar kaa
kabhee kisee kee jaan bachaa
wo maseehaa saa lagtaa thaa
woe k fojee thaa jo bas
aage hee badhtaa thaa…

khoon se sane sabj wardee me
wo jo kadardaan tha tirange ka
n thaktaa tha chilchilaatee dhoop me
laga sar pe topee
bas khawaab aman ka dekhtaa tha
wo bhookaa tha
fir bhee ladtaa thaa…

bhool gayaa tha us massom ko
apne iklote naye naye pyaar ko
maa baap bhee yaad nahi hai use
yaad kartaa hai bas bhaart maa ko..

saamne dushman ke wo toofaan
kabhee masoom to kabhee haiwaan
dum hilaataa tha duhsmaan bhee
jab sher ban wo dahaadtaa thaa
bas ladtaa hee jataa thaa……
wo bas badhtaa hee jataataa thaa..


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madhuwesh

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2009, 06:22:30 AM »

:icon_salut:Nethra ji aapko ek faujee ka dard mehsus hua ,
lafz hi nahi kaise tareef karu.
excellent creation,very touching. Clapping Smiley


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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2009, 06:25:51 AM »

Netra Bhai Aapka Har Kalaam, Dil Choo Jaata Hai, Bohat Achche Taqreekhe Se Aapne Fauji Ki Kahani Bayaan Ki Hai,.

Great JOb,.


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NETRAPAL

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2009, 09:47:20 AM »

thanks madhuvesh ji.....

Netra..


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NETRAPAL

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2009, 09:48:11 AM »

thanks ajeem bhaayee....

Netra...


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Rajbir

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2009, 09:56:48 AM »

Netra,

Bravo ! Excellent once again ! Applause

Keep going


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NETRAPAL

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2009, 12:18:51 PM »

thanks rajbir ji.....

Netra...


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Talat

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2009, 12:42:34 PM »

Bohot Khoob Netra Ji

Desh ke saare faujiyon ko humara salam icon_salut


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2009, 02:53:46 PM »

Bohat khoob Netra tumhare is kalam ko Ghayel ka salam......kash main bhi aisa kuch likh sakta.


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salil2002

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2009, 02:55:34 PM »

bahut achche netra bhai............


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2009, 05:27:06 PM »

Wah wah Netra Ji
Bahut khoob, kamaal kiya hai
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Roja

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #11 on: June 10, 2009, 02:17:59 AM »

Bahut bahut khoob Netra ji ...

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Toofaanee nadiyo me
Barfeele toofaano me
bas wo muskaataa rahtaa tha
kabhee bantaa saharaa pal bhar kaa
kabhee kisee kee jaan bachaa
wo maseehaa saa lagtaa thaa
woe k fojee thaa jo bas
aage hee badhtaa thaa…

BAHUT SAHI LIKHA....

Padte padte.. Yeh Song Yaad aaya... Yahan share kar rahi hu....

itanii shakti hame.n de na daataa
manakaa vish{}vaas kamazor ho naa
ham chale.n nek raaste pe hamase
bhuulakar bhii koI bhuul ho naa...

har taraf zulm hai bebasii hai
sahamaa-sahamaa-saa har aadamii hai
paap kaa bojh ba.Dhataa hii jaaye
jaane kaise ye dharatii thamii hai
bojh mamataa kaa tU ye uThaa le
terii rachanaa ka ye ant ho naa...
ham chale...

duur aGYaan ke ho andhere
tU hame.n GYaan kii raushanii de
har buraaii se bachake rahe.n ham
jitanii bhii de, bhalii zindagii de
bair ho naa kisIkaa kisiise
bhaavanaa man me.n badale kii ho naa...
ham chale...

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NETRAPAL

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2009, 05:45:46 AM »

thanks celmira ji....

Netra...


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NETRAPAL

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2009, 05:47:51 AM »

thanks sajid bhaayee...

Netra...


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NETRAPAL

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Re: FOJEE

«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2009, 05:57:31 AM »

thanks shahil bhayee for reply....

Netra...


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