Gaon gaya tha, gaon se bhaaga

by vipinbox on April 03, 2006, 06:54:51 AM
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Gaon gaya tha gaon se bhaaga
rone laga dil Gaon dekhkar.
Ramraj ka haal dekhkar
panchayat ki chaal dekhkar.
Aagan mein deewar dekhkar
sirr per aati daal dekhkar.
Nadi ka paani laal dekhkar
aur aankh mein baal dekhkar.

...Gaon gaya tha
gaon se bhaaga

Sabhi jagah tha sookha-shooka
aur pet tha bada hee bhooka.

Khaane ko roti bhi nahin thi
milne ki bhi aas nahin thi.

Tann dhakne ko kapda kamm tha
mausam bhi tow sard bada tha.

Jal rahi thi Gaon ki laasein
kamm par gayi thi kuch saasein.

Aaj shehar yeh Gaon kha gaya
Gaon pe apni jeet pagaya.
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2006, 12:20:36 PM »
Waah Vipin Bahoot Khoob,..

Aaj Sheher Ye Gaon Khaa Gaya,..

Ye Lines Bade Touching Hain,..
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«Reply #2 on: February 19, 2008, 07:41:33 PM »
wah kaya baat hai!! bahoot khoob vipin!! her ek line bahoot hi achi likhi hai!!
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