Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil:Shairy-E-Watan

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doston aaj kasab kii halaat par pad raha tha toh doston men usko lekar baatein chal rahi thiunhi baaton ko apne lahje mnein dhaal kar likh raha hoon......yeh ek kavita k saath sawaal bhi hai...apne jawaab jaroor de

qatl karta rehta tha woh sabka
aaj aapne qatl hone k khayal se ghabra raha

dekho jo rakhta tha haiwaniyat apne chehre par
aaj kis kadar insaano k dekh ghabra raha

maangi logon ne isse zindgi kabhi apni
aaj yeh oonke saamne gidgida raha

taras khyega kya yeh mulk aise shaitaan pe
jo majhab k naam par hai ladwa raha

aaj isko hai yaad aaya hai apna parivaar
aaj yeh oonse milne kii zid hai laga raha

na socha isne kabhi qatl karte huye
kis tarah arthiyo pe arthiya jalwa raha

maaf kar de kya isko tum bolo AWAAM- E -HIND
jo dahsaatgardi ka alaam har aur hai bikhra raha


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Talat

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Re: Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2009, 10:26:02 AM »

Bohot Khoob Salil Applause

...and very nice reply Kaash Ji...mera bhi yahi jawab hota !


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Sammual

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Re: Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2009, 01:42:07 PM »

Bahut Khoob Salil Ji. Applause


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salil2002

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Re: Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 02:54:11 PM »

shukriya kash a beautiful reply fom u.......and thnks talat di and sammual


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Re: Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2009, 10:30:24 AM »

Bohat Achchi Peshkash Salil Bhai,.


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Roja

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Re: Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2009, 02:34:40 AM »

Quote from: salil2002 on May 19, 2009, 08:38:03 AM

Salil ji aapne kavita bahut khoob likha...


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NETRAPAL

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Re: Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2009, 05:43:16 AM »

bhaoot khoob sir jee.

bahut achaa topic liya hai aapne or likhaa bhee achaa hai....

Netra...


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salil2002

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Re: Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2009, 12:17:16 PM »

thanks a lot netrapal. roja and azeem


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MHussain

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Re: Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2009, 07:51:51 AM »

This is such an excellent work.
Well written


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salil2002

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Re: Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2009, 06:00:26 AM »

thnks mhussain


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