Ghabra raha~~~~ Saahil

by salil2002 on May 19, 2009, 08:38:03 AM
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doston aaj kasab kii halaat par pad raha tha toh doston men usko lekar baatein chal rahi thiunhi baaton ko apne lahje mnein dhaal kar likh raha hoon......yeh ek kavita k saath sawaal bhi hai...apne jawaab jaroor de


qatl karta rehta tha woh sabka
aaj aapne qatl hone k khayal se ghabra raha

dekho jo rakhta tha haiwaniyat apne chehre par
aaj kis kadar insaano k dekh ghabra raha

maangi logon ne isse zindgi kabhi apni
aaj yeh oonke saamne gidgida raha

taras khyega kya yeh mulk aise shaitaan pe
jo majhab k naam par hai ladwa raha

aaj isko hai yaad aaya hai apna parivaar
aaj yeh oonse milne kii zid hai laga raha

na socha isne kabhi qatl karte huye
kis tarah arthiyo pe arthiya jalwa raha

maaf kar de kya isko tum bolo AWAAM- E -HIND
jo dahsaatgardi ka alaam har aur hai bikhra raha
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2009, 10:26:02 AM »
Bohot Khoob Salil  Applause Applause Applause

...and very nice reply Kaash Ji...mera bhi yahi jawab hota !
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2009, 01:42:07 PM »
Bahut Khoob Salil Ji. Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 20, 2009, 02:54:11 PM »
shukriya kash a beautiful reply fom u.......and thnks talat di and sammual
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«Reply #4 on: May 22, 2009, 10:30:24 AM »
Bohat Achchi Peshkash Salil Bhai,.
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2009, 02:34:40 AM »
doston aaj kasab kii halaat par pad raha tha toh doston men usko lekar baatein chal rahi thiunhi baaton ko apne lahje mnein dhaal kar likh raha hoon......yeh ek kavita k saath sawaal bhi hai...apne jawaab jaroor de


qatl karta rehta tha woh sabka
aaj aapne qatl hone k khayal se ghabra raha

dekho jo rakhta tha haiwaniyat apne chehre par
aaj kis kadar insaano k dekh ghabra raha

maangi logon ne isse zindgi kabhi apni
aaj yeh oonke saamne gidgida raha

taras khyega kya yeh mulk aise shaitaan pe
jo majhab k naam par hai ladwa raha

aaj isko hai yaad aaya hai apna parivaar
aaj yeh oonse milne kii zid hai laga raha

na socha isne kabhi qatl karte huye
kis tarah arthiyo pe arthiya jalwa raha

maaf kar de kya isko tum bolo AWAAM- E -HIND
jo dahsaatgardi ka alaam har aur hai bikhra raha

Salil ji aapne kavita bahut khoob likha...  Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2009, 05:43:16 AM »
bhaoot khoob sir jee.

bahut achaa topic liya hai aapne or likhaa bhee achaa hai....

Netra...
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salil2002
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2009, 12:17:16 PM »
thanks a lot netrapal. roja and azeem
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MHussain
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«Reply #8 on: May 26, 2009, 07:51:51 AM »
This is such an excellent work.
Well written
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salil2002
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«Reply #9 on: May 31, 2009, 06:00:26 AM »
thnks mhussain
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