HAAL MERE DESH KAA (SAMLANGIKTAA)

by NETRAPAL on July 15, 2009, 07:09:32 AM
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NETRAPAL
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haall mer dil kaa ye
kya ho gayaa hai,
desh ke hallat se aaj ye
gyaal ho gyaa hai
rishto kee bgiyaa me
kushbee bahut thee
rishton kaa hee aaj
chaman ujad gayaa hai..
haal mere desh kaa
aaj ye kaya ho gay hai …

bhog ko bhee yog
samjhaa jaataa tha jhaa
aaj yahee  yog hee
 uphaas ban gayaa hai…..
guruon ne banaayee thee
sanskartee  kabhee
usee sanskartee kaa
saree aam blaatkaar
ho gayaa hai…….

Rishton ke bandhano me
samaaj dikhtaa tha
Rishton hee se khandit
samaaj ho gayaa hai
Garv karte the jis vidhaan  pe ham…….
Aaj vidhaan  maryaadaa se
aage nikal gayaa hai

Aadam or eev kaa
Milan hooaa tha kabhee
Saimlaingiktaa kaa aaj
Milan ho gayaa hai.

lailaa se majanoo,
sheeree se farhaad
kaa milan thaa yahaa
aaj farhaad ka majnoo,
lailaa kaa sheeree kaa
Milan ho gayaa hai
Haal mere desh kaa
Aaj ye ky ho gayaa hai..


Netrapal Singh....
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2009, 09:38:01 AM »
Nice one Netrapal Ji
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shayara
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2009, 01:52:38 PM »
Netrapal Ji,

Bohot bohot khoob
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2009, 01:54:21 PM »
Bohot bohot khoob Netra Ji Applause Applause Applause
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2009, 04:16:25 AM »
thanks rajesh ji, shayara ji, clemeria ji or kash ji

Netra....
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2009, 04:23:24 AM »
Wah bahut khoob Netrapal ji,kamaal ka likha aapne,very beautiful creation. icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2009, 04:30:35 AM »
thanks madhu ji,

 ab aapko sir kahne ke galtee nahi karunga........

Netra...
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punam
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2009, 04:52:46 AM »
Netra  ji bahut khoob...aap ki likhi huyi har kalam ek se badh ke ek ...
tareef jitna bhi karun kam hai....
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2009, 05:51:54 AM »
tareef kaa bahut bahut dhanyad poonam jee...

Netra...
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2009, 06:09:46 AM »
Sach kaha aapne Netra Ji
halaat kharab hi hain
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2009, 03:59:49 AM »
sahee kahaa aapne bhee sarvesh haalat kafee kharab ho gaye

netra...
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sbechain
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«Reply #11 on: July 21, 2009, 10:14:58 AM »
WAAW VERY NICE NETRAPAL JI Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #12 on: July 21, 2009, 10:23:22 AM »
thanks sheba ji....

Netra....
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Roja
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«Reply #13 on: July 22, 2009, 03:48:40 AM »
Wonderful Creation Netra ji  Applause Applause Applause

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Aadam or eev kaa
Milan hooaa tha kabhee
Saimlaingiktaa kaa aaj
Milan ho gayaa hai.
Haal mere desh kaa
aaj ye kay ho gaya hai……

lailaa se majanoo,
sheeree se farhaad
kaa milan thaa yahaa
aaj farhaad ka majnoo,
lailaa kaa sheeree kaa
mere desh me aaj
Milan ho gayaa hai
Haal mere desh kaa
Aaj ye ky ho gayaa hai..

Bahut bahut sahi aur accha likha hai aapne Netra ji ...  Thumbs UP



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cara
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«Reply #14 on: July 22, 2009, 04:31:59 AM »
kya baat hai netra ji ......

haal mere desh ka aaj yeh hogaya hai,
ladki aur ladko ka milan kam hogaya hai.
ladke bhi aaj ladke par fida horahe hai,
aur ladkiyan bhi ladkiyon ko chahene lagi hain.

shayad pasand nahin karte hai pati-patni ka rishta,
ghar-baar chalaane ka bojh lagta hai, inko yeh rishta.

qudrat ka bana kya milan hai ladki aur ladke ka,
jis ka parinaam duniya ko milta hai "INSAAN"
agar qudrat ke niyam ko tod kar,milan karne lagega har insaan,
socho kya hoga anjaam,kaise badegi yeh duniya,jab aur paheda nahin hoga "INSAAN".
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