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ye chand line un parivaaro ko shrdhaa sahit arpit hai jo apne kaleje ka tukdo desh kee rakshaa ke liye foj me bhej dehe fir chahe wo unkee iklotee ladkee hee kyo na ho or unkee shadaahat pe garv se muskarate hai....
Aise bhee hai, janak desh me
Moh bandhan me fans jate hai
Ataa hai jab samay sankat kaa
Muhh fer khade ho jaate hai..
Naman meraa un maat pita ko
Pathaar see chaatee kar lete hai
Iklote se anmol pushp ko
Matrbhoomee pe arpit kar dete hai
Kar dete hai vida shaheed ko
Wo maa aysee hee hotee hai
Bas chand aansoo le kar ankho me
Shradhaa se sheesh jhuka letee hai
Kya khanaa us veer pita ko
Budhe se jawaa ho jate hai
Nahee jhukte hai kande ta unke
Shadaahat ko kandha jab dete hai…
Dekh saheed kee bahanaa ko
Ankhe bhee nam ho jatee hai
Kartee hai abheeman bhaayee pe
Jab chatee pe goli patee hai….
Naman tumhe aye veer vadhu
Sadhvaa ban kar jeenaa chatee ho
Nahi karte tum gilaa tanik bhee
Jab vidhwaa. saheed ki ho jatee ho..
Dekh kurbaane un maat pita kee
Us bholee see komal bahnaa kee
Ham shradaa se jhuk jate hai
Jab unke nikale ashroo anksho se
Ham daaman apnaa failaalete hai….
Neta....
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«Reply #1 on: May 19, 2009, 06:53:46 AM » |
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very very nice netrapal ji.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #2 on: May 19, 2009, 07:22:02 AM » |
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Netrapal Jee aapki is rachna ko mera koti koti pranam......kuch kalam aise hote hain jinke aage "Bohat khoob" lafz bhi bohat chota nazar aata hain......bas aap hamare beech hain yeh hamara saubhagya hain.
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #3 on: May 19, 2009, 07:28:18 AM » |
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very very nice netrapal ji.
thanks madhuwesh ji..... Netra.... |
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #4 on: May 19, 2009, 07:29:17 AM » |
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Netrapal Jee aapki is rachna ko mera koti koti pranam......kuch kalam aise hote hain jinke aage "Bohat khoob" lafz bhi bohat chota nazar aata hain......bas aap hamare beech hain yeh hamara saubhagya hain.
Sajid Bhayee, Hosla afjaayee ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa........ Netra... |
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«Reply #6 on: May 19, 2009, 07:59:36 AM » |
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I have no good knowledge of Hindi, but I can understand the feelings.
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #7 on: May 19, 2009, 09:41:56 AM » |
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thanks sophi ji..... Netra.. |
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2009, 09:43:14 AM » |
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I have no good knowledge of Hindi, but I can understand the feelings.
Hussain sahib bahut bahut shukriyaaa aapka... Netra.... |
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2009, 09:44:32 AM » |
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Behad acha likha hai aapne Netra ji behad sachhe jazbaat aur bhawnaon me samahit hoke...every ash'aar is touchy  kaash jee thanks for reading and reply... Netra... |
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punam
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«Reply #10 on: May 19, 2009, 10:07:54 AM » |
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Netra ji jeetna bhi tareef karun kam hai..kya khoob likha hai...aap ke khayaalon ki bayaangee me kaafi safaai aur khoobsooratii hai..gr8...
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«Reply #11 on: May 19, 2009, 10:14:11 AM » |
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Bohot Khoob Netra Ji...Humesha ki tarah !
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #12 on: May 19, 2009, 11:36:27 AM » |
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Netra ji jeetna bhi tareef karun kam hai..kya khoob likha hai...aap ke khayaalon ki bayaangee me kaafi safaai aur khoobsooratii hai..gr8...
thanks poonam jee aapko hamaree rachnaa pasand ayee.. Netra... |
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2009, 11:37:32 AM » |
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talat jee aapkaa bahut bahut dhanwaad
Netra...
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2009, 12:05:11 PM » |
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Netra, Ek baar phir se, ek aur dil ko choo jaane wali rachna !  Keep the burning torch of revolutionary poetry alight  |
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on eTI community..
