hum pardesi logon ko tub desh ki yaad satati h

by mistufer on April 29, 2008, 10:27:57 PM
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hum pardesi logon ko tub desh ki yaad satati hai

barish jab barsey hai rim jhim hota hai man beqaaboo
miTTi se aane lagtee hai sondhi sondhi see Khushboo
sawan bhaadoN ki ritu meN jab koyal geet sunaati hai
hum pardesi logoN ko tub desh ki yaad satati hai

sawan ke woh jhoole jin per sakhiyaN jhoola kartee theeN
pyare pyare mausam thE woh aur nazaarey thE rangeeN
raat diyoN se Deevaali ke raushan jab ho jati hai
hum pardesi logoN ko tub desh ki yaad satati hai

mandir se “Hari Om” ka nara aaker hemeN jagata tha
Guru Duware ke duwar pe koii, Church meN koyii jaata tha
Jab aawaaz azaan ki aaker kaanoN se Takraatee hai
hum pardesi logon ko tub desh ki yaad satati hai

burf ki chaadar meN lipTee thee desh ki har sunder waadi
rung biraNge chunchul pholoN se mehki thee har kyaree
aaj bhi jab pholoN ki Khushboo tun-mun ko mehkaati hai
hum pardesi logon ko tub desh ki yaad satati hai

kaise bhooleN maaN-Baba ko sub kuch unse paaya hai
Bhaii ka hath bhi yaad aata hai raakhi bin jo soona hai
Jab apnon ka zikr chaley jab apnoN ki baat aati hai
hum pardesi logon ko tub desh ki yaad satati hai

apne desh ko lauT ke jaayeN dil meN yehee tamnaa hai
ai pardes meN rahne waaloN apna desh phir apna hai
apne desh ki koii bhi cheez jab apne haath meN aati hai
hum pardesi logon ko tub desh ki yaad satati hai

Nira
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: April 29, 2008, 10:56:08 PM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Nira ji!!!
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mistufer
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2008, 12:18:12 PM »
wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Nira ji!!!

pooja aapka bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaaa
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syednaami
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2008, 12:46:47 PM »
Amazing poetic valor seen in this poem Nira ji, kamaal ka dard aur watan ki muhabbat ka sabaq diya hai. Shayari-e-watan men aap ne kamaal dikhaya hai.
Wonderful. Bravo!!
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mistufer
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2008, 01:25:56 PM »
Amazing poetic valor seen in this poem Nira ji, kamaal ka dard aur watan ki muhabbat ka sabaq diya hai. Shayari-e-watan men aap ne kamaal dikhaya hai.
Wonderful. Bravo!!



syednaami ji
aapne padha aur sraha iss. hausla afzayi ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon.

nira
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2008, 01:34:12 PM »
Waaah...bohot hi khooob Nira.....aapne to India ki yaad dila di....aapke alfaaz manzar ban ke aankhon ke saane ghoomne lage...Applause


p.s. Since its a patriotic poetry, I am moving th thread to Shayari-e-Watan.

Celmira
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syednaami
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2008, 01:35:49 PM »
You are Welcome Nira Saahiba, Keep the spirit up.


syednaami ji
aapne padha aur sraha iss. hausla afzayi ka dilse shukriya adaa karti hoon.

nira

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mistufer
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2008, 01:38:41 PM »
Waaah...bohot hi khooob Nira.....aapne to India ki yaad dila di....aapke alfaaz manzar ban ke aankhon ke saane ghoomne lage...Applause


p.s. Since its a patriotic poetry, I am moving th thread to Shayari-e-Watan.

Celmira

thankssssss Calmira
aapko pasand aayi meri rachna, plz move kar lain jahan thik hai.
saath dene ka shukriya.
nira
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mistufer
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2008, 12:21:34 AM »
You are Welcome Nira Saahiba, Keep the spirit up.


ek baar fir aapka shukriya adaa karti hoon
nira
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syednaami
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2008, 12:44:33 AM »
Hum bhi aap ke mashkoor hain phir se.
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mistufer
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2008, 12:56:49 AM »
Hum bhi aap ke mashkoor hain phir se.

fir toh din raat shukriya karte mein hi guzaar jayegi
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syednaami
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2008, 03:02:31 AM »
fir toh din raat shukriya karte mein hi guzaar jayegi

Well said, impressed me.

Okay let's move to other things.
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