Hum Sher Hain Kutton Se Lada Nahi Karte

by abdulqadeer on January 03, 2009, 11:35:39 AM

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abdulqadeer

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«Reply #15 on: January 06, 2009, 11:19:20 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on January 06, 2009, 09:33:06 AM

Bahut achchhaa likhaa hai; khaas tour sey yah char sheir!
Aakhiree laain mein 'kuttoun' kaa isteymaal na hotaa to beyhtar hotaa! 'Kuttaa' gaalee samjhee jaatee hai; 'Geedarhoun' sey kaam chal saktaa thaa, kyoun ki geedarh 'kaayar' bhi hotaa hai, aur saamney aaney sey dartaa bhi hai!
- abd bundeli

Shukriya Bhai jaan Is Izzath Afza-e-ka !! kya karoon qussa rook nahi paya isiliye khuch wahiyath likhne ko mann kiya aur likh diya inshallah agge se qayal rakhonga ke insaniyath ka naam badla na jaye !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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Re: Hum Sher Hain Kutton Se Lada Nahi Karte

«Reply #16 on: January 06, 2009, 12:17:11 PM »

Bohat khoob qadeer Maza aa gaya.... do mamuli line aapke kalam se mutassir hoker likhi hain kabool kare.

Main qatra hu mujme hausla samundaro jaisa
Mujme kitne dard doob jate hain, hum gila nahi karte

-SG-


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Hum Sher Hain Kutton Se Lada Nahi Karte

«Reply #17 on: January 06, 2009, 12:21:03 PM »

Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 05, 2009, 04:05:27 AM

Meri ghazaloon me koi ayeb dhoond ne laga !!
jalake mera shaher mera ghar dhoond ne laga !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Masha_allah Qadeer bato bato me bohat ucha sher keh diya tumne khuda tumhe lambi umar de AAMEEN


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abdulqadeer

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Re: Hum Sher Hain Kutton Se Lada Nahi Karte

«Reply #18 on: January 06, 2009, 01:16:42 PM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 06, 2009, 12:17:11 PM

Tahe dil Se Shukriya Ada karta hon Sajid bhai !! Apki is izath ufza-e- ka ahetram karke inshalla hamesha apne qatam ti taqath ko badane ki koshish karonga !!

Qadeer Toopchi


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abdulqadeer

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Re: Hum Sher Hain Kutton Se Lada Nahi Karte

«Reply #19 on: January 06, 2009, 01:24:21 PM »

Main qatra hu mujme hausla samundaro jaisa
Mujme kitne dard doob jate hain, hum gila nahi karte

-SG-[/b]

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Bahoth Qoob Likha Sajid bhai apne !!masha alla !!

Tera yahi Hausla Eak din Tujhe Sikander kar dega !!
khud ko qatra na likho "Ghayal"agar wo josh me aya to samandar kardega!!