Insaan Bane To Koi

by syednaami on August 16, 2008, 01:11:31 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 23, 2008, 08:07:01 AM »



Iqdaar-e-insaniyat ko samjhe to koi,
Chhod ke bhed bhao gale mile to koi,

Mazhab men sikhate hain insaniyat pahle,
Kabhi khol ke ved aur quran padhe to koi,

Khoon ek jaisa rangon men daor raha,
Nasal parasti ki aag se nikle to koi,

Ek Rab sab ka saanjha sab kahte hain,
Tukhm-e-vilaadat kya hai samjhe to koi,

Beraham ho gaya hai insaan haivan jaise'
Haivanon se hi ekta seekhe to koi,

Nafaa hai jinko aaj insaniyat bech kar,
Unke khilaaf awaaz utha ke badhe to koi,

Insaan dosti ke naare to lagaate hain,
Par sach men insaan ban ke dekhe to koi,

Na Mohan Das bane aur na koi Molana Azad,
Angrez se jo lade aisa Hindustani bane to koi. -



**Syed Naami**

BAHOOT KHOOB Sami behad umda likha hai aapne aur aaj ke halaat par kathor vyangy bhi hai........
bahoot achche.....
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«Reply #16 on: August 23, 2008, 08:10:05 AM »


Bahut Bahut Khoob Naami saab..bahut hi acha likha hai aapne Applause Applause Applause

Kaagzi Kuch Kashtiyan Nadiyo Mein Tairaate Rahe,
Azaadi Ki Jung Mein Fateh PAAKAR bhi hum maat khaate rahe...

Swaabhimaani Zindagi Jeene Ke Apradhi Hai Hum Sab,
Auro Par Hi Hamesha Ungliyan Uthathe Rahe....

Shaheedo Ne Jaan De Kar Paayi Thi AZAADI,
Sach kaha jaaye to Azaadi Ke sahi maayne bhi na samaj sake hum Log!!!
par Azaadi Ke Din,jashn saara Din manaate rahe....

Khwaab Mein Aate Rahe woh sab Shaheedane watan,
Marte-Marte bhi jo VANDE MATRAM gaate rahe.....







aapka pryaas bhi srahneey raha khwaish ji
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«Reply #17 on: August 24, 2008, 07:15:59 AM »

Iqdaar-e-insaniyat ko samjhe to koi,
Chhod ke bhed bhao gale mile to koi,

Mazhab men sikhate hain insaniyat pahle,
Kabhi khol ke ved aur quran padhe to koi,

Khoon ek jaisa rangon men daor raha,
Nasal parasti ki aag se nikle to koi,

Ek Rab sab ka saanjha sab kahte hain,
Tukhm-e-vilaadat kya hai samjhe to koi,

Beraham ho gaya hai insaan haivan jaise'
Haivanon se hi ekta seekhe to koi,

Nafaa hai jinko aaj insaniyat bech kar,
Unke khilaaf awaaz utha ke badhe to koi,

Insaan dosti ke naare to lagaate hain,
Par sach men insaan ban ke dekhe to koi,

Na Mohan Das bane aur na koi Molana Azad,
Angrez se jo lade aisa Hindustani bane to koi. -



**Syed Naami**

Syed ji...... Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne..
Mujhe pehle line se last line tak bahut bahut pasand aaya hai.
wah wah waaaaaahhh Syed ji.....
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«Reply #18 on: August 24, 2008, 07:26:36 AM »


Bahut Bahut Khoob Naami saab..bahut hi acha likha hai aapne Applause Applause Applause

Kaagzi Kuch Kashtiyan Nadiyo Mein Tairaate Rahe,
Azaadi Ki Jung Mein Fateh PAAKAR bhi hum maat khaate rahe...

Swaabhimaani Zindagi Jeene Ke Apradhi Hai Hum Sab,
Auro Par Hi Hamesha Ungliyan Uthathe Rahe....

Shaheedo Ne Jaan De Kar Paayi Thi AZAADI,
Sach kaha jaaye to Azaadi Ke sahi maayne bhi na samaj sake hum Log!!!
par Azaadi Ke Din,jashn saara Din manaate rahe....

Khwaab Mein Aate Rahe woh sab Shaheedane watan,
Marte-Marte bhi jo VANDE MATRAM gaate rahe.....



Khwaish ji... bahut khoob...
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«Reply #19 on: August 26, 2008, 06:37:45 AM »
BAHOOT KHOOB Sami behad umda likha hai aapne aur aaj ke halaat par kathor vyangy bhi hai........
bahoot achche.....

Bekarar bhai, aap ki duaen saath hain aor bhi achha likhenge. Koshish ki thi aage bhi aajkal ke haalaat par likhunga, So nice of you, thanks you so much.

Syed ji...... Bahut bahut accha likha hai aapne..
Mujhe pehle line se last line tak bahut bahut pasand aaya hai.
wah wah waaaaaahhh Syed ji.....

Roja ji, aap ka tah-e-dil se shukrguzaar hun, bas aap se hi seekh rahen hain. Mahirbaani.
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«Reply #20 on: September 02, 2008, 04:54:35 PM »
toda addition mein bhi kerti hu syednaami

janam se nahi banta koe insan
mile jab sahi shiksha or gyan,

shiksha to he per nahi he samadhan
pir kese banega janvar se ye insan,

gyani bhi hen or dikhte hen anjan
unku to bech ke gyan banna he dhanvan,

sab ne luti meryada or des ka maan
kabi to jage ga nind se koe murda insan.
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«Reply #21 on: October 08, 2008, 08:08:24 AM »
Wah Kanta jee wah, mashaAllah kya bahatreen ghazal se nawaaza aapne, bahut badhiya. Bilkul, haqeeqat ki akaasi ki hai.  Applause
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Roja
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«Reply #22 on: October 08, 2008, 09:15:15 AM »
toda addition mein bhi kerti hu syednaami

janam se nahi banta koe insan
mile jab sahi shiksha or gyan,

shiksha to he per nahi he samadhan
pir kese banega janvar se ye insan,

gyani bhi hen or dikhte hen anjan
unku to bech ke gyan banna he dhanvan,

sab ne luti meryada or des ka maan
kabi to jage ga nind se koe murda insan.

Kanta bahut bahut accha likha hai tumne.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #23 on: October 08, 2008, 09:44:52 AM »
bohat khoob naami jee
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Talat
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«Reply #24 on: October 08, 2008, 09:52:55 AM »
Very nice Kanta !
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syednaami
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«Reply #25 on: October 08, 2008, 11:00:08 AM »
bohat khoob naami jee

Bahut shukriya Sajid miyan.
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Muhammed
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«Reply #26 on: November 04, 2008, 09:30:04 AM »

Iqdaar-e-insaniyat ko samjhe to koi,
Chhod ke bhed bhao gale mile to koi,

Mazhab men sikhate hain insaniyat pahle,
Kabhi khol ke ved aur quran padhe to koi,

Khoon ek jaisa rangon men daor raha,
Nasal parasti ki aag se nikle to koi,

Ek Rab sab ka saanjha sab kahte hain,
Tukhm-e-vilaadat kya hai samjhe to koi,

Beraham ho gaya hai insaan haivan jaise'
Haivanon se hi ekta seekhe to koi,

Nafaa hai jinko aaj insaniyat bech kar,
Unke khilaaf awaaz utha ke badhe to koi,

Insaan dosti ke naare to lagaate hain,
Par sach men insaan ban ke dekhe to koi,

Na Mohan Das bane aur na koi Molana Azad,
Angrez se jo lade aisa Hindustani bane to koi. -


**Syed Naami**

Syed bhai aub koi angez nahi Rahaa Hind Mein....!!!
To aub Hidnustani Kis se Ladegaa ??
BataeeaiN ??


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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #27 on: December 31, 2008, 07:01:13 AM »
Bahut shukriya Rajesh saahib aap ka tareef ka andaaz bahut khoobsurat hai.

Aaj kal ki kya karen baat,
Bas kahna hai dil ka ahvaal.

Kanta jee, aap ka bhi abhari hun jo aap yahan aaye aor pasand kia. Shukriya -
Thanx syednaami Ji
Bohot khoob S. Naami and Khwaish.....bohot khoob Applause Applause Applause

Nice lines Rajesh
Thanks Celmira Ji
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Sonia01
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«Reply #28 on: December 31, 2008, 07:39:22 AM »
Syed bhai aub koi angez nahi Rahaa Hind Mein....!!!
To aub Hidnustani Kis se Ladegaa ??
BataeeaiN ??


Topic ka heading "Insaan Bane Toh Koyi"
us topic link ko chodkar hum hind and hindustan ke bare mein
kyu charchit kare jii?
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syednaami
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«Reply #29 on: February 09, 2009, 09:19:03 PM »
Syed bhai aub koi angez nahi Rahaa Hind Mein....!!!
To aub Hindustani Kis se Ladegaa ??
BataeeaiN ??




Raza bhai sahib,
Yun to meri likhi shayiri men hi matan mil jata hai, phir bhi wazaahat talab hai to bayaan kar deta hun...
Albata angrez to bhaag gaye par jo anaparasti, laalach, mafaad parasti, capitalism, maashi badhaali ke jaraseem phaila gaye, ek tarah se maazoor karke gaye, matlab angrez na sahi par ab bhi unke asraat-o-baaqiyaat ko khatam karna phir kis ka kaam hai...
Bas, issi liye jab talak hum ek sache insaan dost nahin banenge angrez bar-e-saghir me na ho kar bhi apni haakmiyat ko musallat karta rahega...
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