is aatankwad ka..

by shraddha the poetess on August 11, 2013, 10:55:02 PM
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ghar atank machaya par kiski hui jeet,,
kis kitab mei likhi hai ye kroor reet..

kya laakhon begunahon ka khoon bahana hai mazhab se preet...?
ladtey hue samjhhate hue...varshon gye beet...

aatankiyon k khauf se aaj ho rahe hain sabhi bhaybet...
aisi ghinoni hrkat krne walon ka bnta nahi khuda bhi meet....

woh bhyanak narsanghaar ..
.tarek 26/11 din tha budhwaaar...

achank maut aa jayegi ye kisi ne na jana tha...
chhin gaye apne,mankr bhi man na maana tha...
aakhir un aatankiyon ko is trh kya paana tha..


par ab apnon...k rakt ka hm sb lenge pratishodh...
'iss aatankwad ka' milkar karenge virodh...

detein hain chunauti har atanki ko...
ja rok sake to rok......
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2013, 11:57:59 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Waah waah shraddha jee nek khayal, umda bayaan, bahut jaroorat hai iss masle ke khilaf ekta ki..dhero daad iss umda post par..happy9
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2013, 11:59:28 PM »
thank u......
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2013, 02:03:45 AM »
wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2013, 08:41:59 AM »
sunder bahut sunder
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2013, 09:13:23 AM »
bahut khoob, dhero daad
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2013, 01:29:36 PM »
very nice
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2013, 05:13:05 PM »
thanks rajan ji..  ,  sk saini sir... , nand babu ji and prashad ji..........
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«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2013, 10:50:42 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2013, 11:02:37 PM »
thanx...hriday ji...
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«Reply #10 on: August 15, 2013, 02:32:54 PM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #11 on: August 15, 2013, 03:01:41 PM »
thanx...
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«Reply #12 on: August 15, 2013, 03:43:40 PM »
Very nice...dheron daad is post par... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 15, 2013, 03:58:28 PM »
thanx nishi ji.......
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