Is mitti ka karj hai mujh par..soudagar

by soudagar on June 29, 2012, 01:58:39 PM
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Mujhe jang par jana hai, maa mujhe apna farz nibhana hai
meri dharti maa mujhe pukar rahi hai, mujhe har haal mein jana hai

is mitti par janma hoon main, is mitti  par khela hoon main
is mitti ka karz hai mujhpar, maa mujhe wo karz chukana hai

dushman hai lalkaar raha, dharti maa ki ijjat taad raha
dhari maa ki laaj bachakar, dushman ko maar bhagana hai

dushman ho chahe taqatwar, nahi bachega is zameen par aakar
apne lahu ki aakhri boond bhi maa ki charno mein chadhana hai

ho gya hai ab jung ka aagaz, ab gunjenge veero ke hathiyaar
is mitti ki kasam hai mujhko, dusman ke seene pe tiranga lehrana hai

maa mere sir par hath rakh de, apne khuda se yeh dua kar de
loutunga to tiranga lehrakr,nahi to saheed hi mujhe kehlana hai...





Yeh meri sabse pehli koshish thi jo kargil ke time school mein maine likhi thi aaj wo copy mili to socha ise bhi yoindia faimle se share karun......
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«Reply #1 on: June 29, 2012, 03:40:36 PM »
achhe ehsaasaat ka izhar kiya hai.
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«Reply #2 on: June 29, 2012, 06:33:45 PM »
sir bohot khub likha hai.......
achha kia yeh share krke....
aapke lie respect aur badh gyi hai..
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«Reply #3 on: June 30, 2012, 12:36:04 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya siddiqui sir./
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«Reply #4 on: June 30, 2012, 12:58:38 AM »
bahut he deshprem se ot prot raachnaa main is par aapko hardik badhaai detaa hoon
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«Reply #5 on: June 30, 2012, 02:42:34 AM »
Quote from: soudagar on June 29, 2012, 01:58:39 PM
Mujhe jang par jana hai, maa mujhe apna farz nibhana hai
meri dharti maa mujhe pukar rahi hai, mujhe har haal mein jana hai

is mitti par janma hoon main, is mitti  par khela hoon main
is mitti ka karz hai mujhpar, maa mujhe wo karz chukana hai

dushman hai lalkaar raha, dharti maa ki ijjat taad raha
dhari maa ki laaj bachakar, dushman ko maar bhagana hai

dushman ho chahe taqatwar, nahi bachega is zameen par aakar
apne lahu ki aakhri boond bhi maa ki charno mein chadhana hai

ho gya hai ab jung ka aagaz, ab gunjenge veero ke hathiyaar
is mitti ki kasam hai mujhko, dusman ke seene pe tiranga lehrana hai

maa mere sir par hath rakh de, apne khuda se yeh dua kar de
loutunga to tiranga lehrakr,nahi to saheed hi mujhe kehlana hai...



Yeh meri sabse pehli koshish thi jo kargil ke time school mein maine likhi thi aaj wo copy mili to socha ise bhi yoindia faimle se share karun......


wah beta bahut khoob likha. shuru se aakhiri line tak bahut accha laga padkar. really nice
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«Reply #6 on: June 30, 2012, 04:03:27 PM »
Bahut umda saudagar jee
isi tarah likhte rahiye aur bazm kee shaan badhaaiye.
Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 30, 2012, 04:38:36 PM »
bahut achha desh bhakti ka jazba bhi kamal hai Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 01, 2012, 04:15:12 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya aakash sharma ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 02, 2012, 12:23:45 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya suman aunty ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 02, 2012, 02:20:34 PM »
bahut achhe saudagar ,very nice creation
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«Reply #11 on: July 03, 2012, 02:42:57 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya mkv ji
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«Reply #12 on: July 06, 2012, 02:44:27 AM »
bahut  bahut shukriya ripan devj i
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«Reply #13 on: July 06, 2012, 11:05:14 AM »
shukriya ahuja ji......
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«Reply #14 on: August 15, 2012, 03:40:03 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya all readers
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