jihaad ke naam par:Shairy-E-Watan

Pooja

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Yah kavita ek Yoindia member ne likhi hai, pata nahi kyun wo khud isse post nahi kar pa raha/rahi.

So main yah uske liye post kar rahi hu:

Sochta hoon un hadso ke baare mein to neend mein chilla uthte hai sapne,
Marne waali mein kahi na kahi koi na koi the hamare apne,

Kyu samjhte nahi log ke maarne waalo ka koi dharm koi imaan nahi hota,
Agar hota unka koi khuda to unke haatho mein maut ka saaman nahi hota,

Yeh aise log hai jo paak-e-quaran ko chhod napaak insaan ki sunte hai,
Aur jihaad ki naam par namaz ko chhod hathyaar ko chunte hai...


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Rajbir

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Re: jihaad ki naam par

«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2008, 02:10:46 AM »

Pooja,

Jis member ne bhi yeh rachna likhi hai

usko meri taraf se salaam notworthy


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Pooja

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Re: jihaad ki naam par

«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2008, 02:12:37 AM »

Quote from: Rajbir on December 28, 2008, 02:10:46 AM

Pooja,

Jis member ne bhi yeh rachna likhi hai

usko meri taraf se salaam notworthy

veer ji I am sure he/she can read here all comments for his/her creation!!

Mujhe bhi yah kavita behad pasand aai hai.. simple shabdo main bahoot gahra aor ach amsg dene ki koshish ki hai. Good work dear!!!!


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pankshivam

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Re: jihaad ki naam par

«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2008, 02:24:43 AM »

Bahoot khoob Likha hai
Har labz me sachhayi hai
Jisne bhi likha hai Bahoot hi Sahi Likha hai


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Pooja

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Re: jihaad ki naam par

«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2008, 02:26:51 AM »

us insaan ki taraf se bahoot bahoot shukaria Raj ji and Pank ji!!


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Deepati

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Re: jihaad ki naam par

«Reply #5 on: December 28, 2008, 02:35:25 AM »

Sach mein jisne bhi likha hai, bahut hii khoob likha hai...

Applause


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cara

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Re: jihaad ki naam par

«Reply #6 on: December 28, 2008, 03:21:15 AM »

gar jihaadi yo ke dil mein khuda hota ,
toh haatho mein hathiyar na hota.
gar yeh padhthe koran,
toh maar the nahin insaan.

poojaji jis ne bhi likha hain bahut hi achaa likha hain.....

likh ne wallo ke naam se kya hota hain,
jo bhi likha hain uske kaam se hota hain.


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Pooja

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Re: jihaad ki naam par

«Reply #7 on: December 28, 2008, 03:28:08 AM »

agree with cara and Deepati..

bahoot achi lines likhi hai apne cara ji


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sunilmsn

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Re: jihaad ki naam par

«Reply #8 on: December 28, 2008, 05:35:07 AM »

wah wah kaya khub likha hai Clapping Smiley


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Pooja

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #9 on: December 28, 2008, 06:31:51 AM »

likhne wale ki taraf se bahoot bahoot shukaria sunil ji


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #10 on: December 28, 2008, 07:12:49 AM »

Kuch kehte hue sharam aati hain to kehta q hain
Quran aur namaz ki batein karne wala parde me rehta q hain
Kahi tujhe is baat pe afsos to nahi ke tu musalman hain
Hame din-o-duniya ki batein gairo se sunata q hain

-Yeh maine likha hain-


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Pooja

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #11 on: December 28, 2008, 07:18:29 AM »

Bahoot acha likha hai SG ji,

shayad jis ne mujhse likhwaya uske liye main gair nahi hu..

baki her kisi ki apni nature hoti hai aor reason bhi.


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Shikha12

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2008, 07:32:17 AM »

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 28, 2008, 07:12:49 AM

hhmm... I agree to first two lines Sajid Ji..

Ki.. Kuch kehte hue sharam aati hai to kehta q hai,
Quran aur namaaz ki baatein karne waala parde mein rehta q hai.. ??

Quote from: Pooja on December 28, 2008, 07:18:29 AM

Bahoot acha likha hai SG ji,

shayad jis ne mujhse likhwaya uske liye main gair nahi hu..

baki her kisi ki apni nature hoti hai aor reason bhi.

Ab apno se aisi bhi kya majboori (reason), kya humse aisi pardedaari (nature),
Maana ki humein gair maanta hai woh shaksh, lekin sare-aam jataata q hai.. ??


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Pooja

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #13 on: December 28, 2008, 07:38:15 AM »

wow maine socha bhi nahi tha yah post karne se pahle ki itni choti si baat koi is tarah bantgar banaya jayega.

kisi ke vicharo ko is tarah quraan aor namaj ke shabdo ko uchal kar sharminda kiya jayega.

meri request yomembers se ki wo is insaan ki likhi achi bhawna ko parre... na ki kuch shabdo ka sahara laker baat ka bantgar banaye.


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #14 on: December 28, 2008, 07:43:51 AM »

pooja tumhara kam tha sirf is rachna ko post karna so tumne kar diya ab yaha jo bhi likha ja raha hain uska reply dene ka adhikar sirf rachna ke writer ko hain tumko nahi.

and dont use batangar watangar type of word.


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