jihaad ke naam par -Panna 2:Shairy-E-Watan

Pooja

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«Reply #15 on: December 28, 2008, 07:47:20 AM »

Quote from: Mahiya on December 28, 2008, 07:32:17 AM

hhmm... I agree to first two lines Sajid Ji..

Ki.. Kuch kehte hue sharam aati hai to kehta q hai,
Quran aur namaaz ki baatein karne waala parde mein rehta q hai.. ??

Ab apno se aisi bhi kya majboori (reason), kya humse aisi pardedaari (nature),
Maana ki humein gair maanta hai woh shaksh, lekin sare-aam jataata q hai.. ??

Quote from: sajid_ghayel on December 28, 2008, 07:43:51 AM

pooja tumhara kam tha sirf is rachna ko post karna so tumne kar diya ab yaha jo bhi likha ja raha hain uska reply dene ka adhikar sirf rachna ke writer ko hain tumko nahi.

and dont use batangar watangar type of word.

let's discuss in PM,

Maine yah post shuru ki hai, so main apni jimmedari samjhati hu agar yaha per koi bhi negtive comments atte hai. comments kavita ke liye ho ya us insaan ke liye, jis per trust kar ke maine uski jagah post ki hai.

kisi ko kuch kahna hai, PM me. Do Not spoil this thread!!


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baadal102

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #16 on: December 28, 2008, 08:02:01 AM »

bahut hi khoob bahut hi sachai ko likha hai. in bahut kam sabdo mai har baat ko samjhaya gaya hai.


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_Vicky_

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«Reply #17 on: December 28, 2008, 10:29:07 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 28, 2008, 02:07:01 AM

Yah kavita ek Yoindia member ne likhi hai, pata nahi kyun wo khud isse post nahi kar pa raha/rahi.

So main yah uske liye post kar rahi hu:

Sochta hoon un hadso ke baare mein to neend mein chilla uthte hai sapne,
Marne waali mein kahi na kahi koi na koi the hamare apne,

Kyu samjhte nahi log ke maarne waalo ka koi dharm koi imaan nahi hota,
Agar hota unka koi khuda to unke haatho mein maut ka saaman nahi hota,

Yeh aise log hai jo paak-e-quaran ko chhod napaak insaan ki sunte hai,
Aur jihaad ki naam par namaz ko chhod hathyaar ko chunte hai...

Pooja Ji Subse Pahale to Main aapka Shukriya Ada Karna chahunga Ki aapne Yeh Kalaam hum Sab ke saamne la kar rakha... Aur Jisne Bhi yeh Likha Hai.. Aaj Ke haalaat ko dekhte Hue Likha Hai.. suchaai se Bhare Lafz Hain, Jazzbaat Hain.. Lajawab Alfaaz Hain..!!

Maarne Walon Ka Koi Dharam, Koi Imaan nahi Hota yeh Line Waqai Bahut Acchi lagi..!! Applause

Yeh Kalaam Likhne wale ko Tahe Din Se Mann Ki Taraf se WAH WAH WAH.!! icon_salut

Bahut Bahut Khoooob..!!Daad kubool karen..!

**~** Mann **~**


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Sonia01

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #18 on: December 28, 2008, 12:13:29 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 28, 2008, 02:07:01 AM

bahut badiya kavita likha hai hamari yoindian member ne.
unhone khud yahan post nahi ki koyi baat nahi. but aapne
is behtareen rachna ko yahan share kiya... bahut accha
kiya didi...

Jinhone likha/likhi yeh kavita... unko mere taraf se b salaam.


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abdbundeli

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #19 on: December 28, 2008, 01:07:31 PM »

Dosto!
Shayar ney jo kahaa hai galt naheen hai! Alfaaz par naheen unmein chhupey ma'anii par nuktahcheenee ki jaanee chaahiye!
Mein koyee khaas jaankaar hoon, yah to naheen kahtaa, par, Quraan Pak key tarjumeyn meiney bhi padhhey hain! Beygunaahoun key qatl-o-khoon ko kaheen bhi sahee naheen thhahraayaa gayaa hai! Namaaz insaan ki bhalaayi key liye padhhi jaati hai, tabaahii key liye naheen! Insaaf ki paabandagee sikhaatee hai quraan! Dahshatgardee sey us kaa koyi ta'alluq naheen hai! Dahshatgard kisee mazhab key paaband naheen hotey! Unhain bargalaa kar kuchh log apnaa ulloo sheedhaa kar rahey hain, isey samajhney ki zaroorat hai! Aisey logoun ki pahichaan ki jaanee chaahiye, aur unhain karhaa dand diyaa jaanaa chaahiye! Aisey log insaaniyat mein phail rahey cancer ki tarah hain, jis kaa jald sey jald ilaaj kiyaa jaanaa chaahiye!
Poet key tasawwur ko samajhnaa chaahiye! Adab key lafzoun ki rooh ko padhhnaa chaahiye, unkee shaql-o-soorat ko naheen, aisa meyraa khayaal hai!
- abd bundeli


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honeyrose

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #20 on: December 28, 2008, 05:13:35 PM »

wonderfull creation ...


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Rajesh Harish

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«Reply #21 on: December 29, 2008, 12:09:24 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 28, 2008, 02:07:01 AM

Jo kuch bhi likha hai sachchai hi hai
Logon ko dharam ke naam par dannga nahi karni chahaiye

Nice post Pooja Ji


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Pooja

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #22 on: December 29, 2008, 01:43:07 AM »

Quote from: baadal102 on December 28, 2008, 08:02:01 AM

bahut hi khoob bahut hi sachai ko likha hai. in bahut kam sabdo mai har baat ko samjhaya gaya hai.

bahoot bahoot shukaria Baadal ji


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Pooja

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«Reply #23 on: December 29, 2008, 01:43:57 AM »

Quote from: Mann on December 28, 2008, 10:29:07 AM

Yeh Kalaam Likhne wale ko Tahe Din Se Mann Ki Taraf se WAH WAH WAH.!! icon_salut

Bahut Bahut Khoooob..!!Daad kubool karen..!

**~** Mann **~**

shukaria Mann ji


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Pooja

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«Reply #24 on: December 29, 2008, 01:44:58 AM »

Quote from: Sonia01 on December 28, 2008, 12:13:29 PM

Thanks Sonia ji


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Pooja

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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #25 on: December 29, 2008, 01:45:44 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on December 28, 2008, 01:07:31 PM

bahoot he sahi likh hai apne Abd ji...bahoot bahoot shukaria!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #26 on: December 29, 2008, 01:46:17 AM »

Quote from: honeyrose on December 28, 2008, 05:13:35 PM

wonderfull creation ...

thanks Honey!!


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Pooja

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«Reply #27 on: December 29, 2008, 01:46:56 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 29, 2008, 12:09:24 AM

Jo kuch bhi likha hai sachchai hi hai
Logon ko dharam ke naam par dannga nahi karni chahaiye

Nice post Pooja Ji

Rajesh ji yah post meri likhi hui nahi hai. magar jis ne bhi likhi hai, bahoot achi likhi hai..


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abdbundeli

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«Reply #28 on: December 29, 2008, 04:37:59 AM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 29, 2008, 01:45:44 AM

bahoot he sahi likh hai apne Abd ji...bahoot bahoot shukaria!!

You're welcome!
I'm happy you have posted the poem! Such creations must be promoted, so that a wide Consensus against the misuse and misrepresentation/misinterpretation of scriptures could be checked, at least to some extent!
- abd bundeli


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Re: jihaad ke naam par

«Reply #29 on: December 29, 2008, 07:32:31 PM »

Waah Jisne Bhi Likha Hai Bohat Hi Achcha Likha Hai,.
Magar Mere Doston Quraan Aur Islaam Se Dehshatgard Ki Pehchaan Nahi Hai,.

Ye Shayari Jisne Likhi Hai Uski Main Kadar Karta Hoon,.
Magar Islaam Ka Naam Hai Aman,.
Islaam Means Peace,.

Aur Jo Aman Ka Raasta Chord De Wo Us Manzil Ka Musaafir Nahi,.
Hamaare Nabi-e-Kareem{SAWS} Ne Kabhi Talwaar Ke Bal Par Islaam Nahi Phailaaya Na Hi Kisi Muslim Baadshaa Ne,.
Islaam Phailaa Hai Pyaar Aur Mohabbat Se,.

Main Nahi Maanta Ke Aataank Wo Islaam se Jordaa Jaaye,.
Islaam Ko Badnaam Karne Ki Ye Saazish Hai,.
Aur Ye Log Islaam Ko Badnaam Kar rahe Hain,.

Inhe aap Islaam se Na Jordein,.
Please,.

Kyunki Hamara Mazhab Wafaadaari Ka sabak Seekhaata Hai,.
Aur Jo Ye Nahi Karte Wo Musalmaan Nahi,.
Jinhone Quraan Aur Namaaz Par Amal Kiya Hai, Aap Unki Tarah Nazar Daalkar dekhiye,.

Khwaja Gareebun Nawaaz,.
Baba Haji Ali,.
Aur Bohat Se Hain, Allah Ke Bande,.
Inhone Quraan Par Amal Kiya Aur Ye Mohabbat Ki Aaj Bhi Missal Dete Hain,.
Non Muslims Bhi Inki Mazaaron Par Maatha Taik Te Hain,.
ye hai Asli Islaam,.
Jo Quraan Aur Namaaz Pardhte Hain Wo Kabhi Kisi Ki Jaan Nahi Lete,.

Quraan Mein Ek Suraah {Chapter} Hai,.
Jiska Naam Nahal Hai,.
Jisme Allah Ne Chinti Ka Zikar Kiya Hai,.
Hamaare Islaam Kisi Maasoom Cheez Ko Noksaan Pahoonchaane Ki Ijaazat Nahi Deta,.

Jo Ispar Nahi Chalte Wo Musalmaan Nahi..

Bas Itna Hi Kahoonga Main,.


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