kabhi aazad kabhi giraftar dekhta hoon.... soudagar

by soudagar on August 15, 2012, 09:33:46 AM
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Kabhi khud ko aazad dekhta hoon kabhi khud ko girftar dekhta hoon
kabhi lagta hai mulazim hoon main, kabhi khud ko gunahagar dekhta hoon

mere samne masoomon ka khoon bahaya ja raha hai shahi talwaro se
tadap tadap ke dum tod rahe hai sab unke bich khada main lachar dekhta hoon

koi sar par chhat ke liye tras raha hai, koi bhukh se mar raha hai yahan
nahi kar pa raha kuch bhi main, ye sab khada ek taraf main bekar dekhta hoon

sochta tha ek jaruratmand ki madad kar jannat paa lunga  main magar
har taraf bilakhte tadpate logo se madad ki guhar ke hath dekhta hoon

kaise pathar dil hain wo log jinhein raham nahi aata masoomon par
har tarf kate masoomon ke sir, zalimo ke hath mein sani talwar dekhta hoon

pahle to zakhm pe zakhm dete hai phir zehar ka marham lagate hai humdard bn
apne hi humdard sathiyon ke waqt ke sath badalte chehre ke naqab dekhta hoon

mere gaon, mere sahar, mere desh ka kya koi badal payega yeh bhayanak chehra
puchha jab sabse to karodon mein chand hi logo ki bani kataar dekhta hoon

desh ke liye sochta h desh ko likhta hai ye soch bada fakr hota hai SOUDAGAR ko
aaine ke samne dekh waisa hi humdard chehra khud ko hi bada sharmshaar dekhta hoon
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2012, 10:23:28 AM »
ati uttam ati sunder bahut bahut badhaaiyaan
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2012, 10:31:20 AM »
Bahut khoob Saudagar jee
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2012, 10:51:12 AM »
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Saudagar ji...

Dard Se Bhari Peshkah Hai..

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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2012, 01:03:34 PM »
very good nice, good one ,
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2012, 03:58:02 AM »
Bahut bahut umda qalaam soudagar ji daad qabool kariye.Clapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2012, 07:23:52 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya saini ji
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2012, 10:59:56 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut khoob Soudagar ji... bahut achcha likha hai aapne.. abhi kuch seconds pehle main ek aisi hi news padh raha tha aur aate hi aapka ye post dikha ....  bahut abhut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2012, 10:26:01 AM »
bahut khoob likha hai , soudagar ji.bahut mubarakbad aur duaaein.
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2012, 05:20:16 PM »
bahut  bahut shukriya mkv ji
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«Reply #10 on: August 19, 2012, 02:42:01 AM »
bahut khub
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«Reply #11 on: August 19, 2012, 03:25:35 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya khawahish ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 20, 2012, 03:02:48 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya aarish bhai
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«Reply #13 on: August 20, 2012, 04:31:02 PM »
baht bahut bahut dhanywad pankaj ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 21, 2012, 05:33:18 PM »
shukriya hriday ji.......... aaj ka mahol aisa hi hai kabhi kbhi aisa feel hota hai
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