KAISI UDAASI .................................... HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: September 28, 2013, 02:56:02 AM »
wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #16 on: September 28, 2013, 11:14:34 AM »
is dard bhare afsaane par dheron daad bhaijaan
Shukrguzar hoon  saini saheb
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«Reply #17 on: September 28, 2013, 01:17:50 PM »

Kaisi   udaasi   chhayi   hamaare   chaman   pe   hai
Bulbul  haiN  AashyaaN  meiN , na Titli  suman  pe  hai


Bus  firqa - waariyat  ki  hi  baateiN  haiN  in  dino
Naare  haiN  Qatl-o-khooN  ke , siyaasat  Kafan  pe  hai


Mahfooz   BetiyaaN   ,  na  koi  Maa  Bahan   hai   aaj
Yaa   Rabb !  Azaab   kaisa   ye   mere   Watan   pe  hai


Phir   aa   gaya   hai  waqt   Chaman   ke   nikhar  ka
Daar - o - madaar  saara   abb  Ahl - e - Chaman   pe  hai


Sangam   hamaare   pyaar   ka    qaaim    rahe    'Hasan'
Yeh   zimmedaari   Waadi - e - Gang - o - Jaman   pe   hai


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कैसी    उदासी    छाई   हमारे    चमन   पे   है
बुलबुल  हैं  आशियाँ में , न  तितली  सुमन  पे  है


बस  फ़िर्क़ा - वारियत   की  ही  बातें  हैं  इन  दिनों
नारे  हैं क़त्ल-o-खूं   के  ,  सियासत  कफ़न  पे है


महफूज़   बेटियाँ  ,  न  कोई  माँ  बहन   है  आज
या   रब्ब !  अज़ाब  कैसा  ये   मेरे  वतन   पे  है


फिर  आ  गया  है   वक़्त  चमन  के  निखार  का
दार-ओ-मदार   सारा    अब   अहले -  चमन  पे है


संगम   हमारे   प्यार  का   क़ाएम   रहे   ' हसन'
ये   ज़िम्मेदारी   वादि-ए - गंग-ओ-जमन   पे   है


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«Reply #18 on: September 28, 2013, 04:58:59 PM »
lajawaab.....
Bus  firqa - waariyat  ki  hi  baateiN  haiN  in  dino
Naare  haiN  Qatl-o-khooN  ke , siyaasat  Kafan  pe  hai


Mahfooz   BetiyaaN   ,  na  koi  Maa  Bahan   hai   aaj
Yaa   Rabb !  Azaab   kaisa   ye   mere   Watan   pe  hai
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«Reply #19 on: September 28, 2013, 06:39:22 PM »
Matla behad khoobsurat hai..jaise door kaheen vaadion se ruk ruk ke aati aawaaz..

Phir   aa   gaya   hai  waqt   Chaman   ke   nikhar  ka
Daar - o - madaar  saara   abb  Ahl - e - Chaman   pe  hai


Sangam   hamaare   pyaar   ka    qaaim    rahe    'Hasan'
Yeh   zimmedaari   Waadi - e - Gang - o - Jaman   pe   hai

Sach kaha Sir
kaash ye soch har dil ka junoon ban jaaye.
aur watanparasti ki aawaaz jubaan se nahee dil se nikle.

Housla afzai aur hamkhayaali k liye
mamnoon hoon, Mukesh ji .Bahut duaaaein .
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«Reply #20 on: September 28, 2013, 10:32:22 PM »
kya kahne is Gazal ke Hasan Sahab, bahut hi beshkimati lafzon se piroya hai aapne ise, dheron daad ...bahut khoob ..Applause Applause Applause
thanks , Biswajeet ji . God bless you .
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«Reply #21 on: September 29, 2013, 02:51:11 AM »
thanks , Zaif saheb.
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«Reply #22 on: September 29, 2013, 10:35:24 AM »
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Behad umda aur aalaa peshkash hasan ji... badi khoob kalaam hui.. ek rau ke saath dili daaaaaaaaad qubool kijiyega...

Mahfooz   BetiyaaN   ,  na  koi  Maa  Bahan   hai   aaj
Yaa   Rabb !  Azaab   kaisa   ye   mere   Watan   pe  hai


Phir   aa   gaya   hai  waqt   Chaman   ke   nikhar  ka
Daar - o - madaar  saara   abb  Ahl - e - Chaman   pe  hai
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aapki housla afzai ke liye bahut shukrguzar hoon Aqsh ji . Dheron duaaein.
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«Reply #23 on: September 29, 2013, 05:49:34 PM »
कैसी    उदासी    छाई   हमारे    चमन   पे   है
बुलबुल  हैं  आशियाँ में , न  तितली  सुमन  पे  है


Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applauseबस  फ़िर्क़ा - वारियत   की  ही  बातें  हैं  इन  दिनों
नारे  हैं क़त्ल-o-खूं   के  ,  सियासत  कफ़न  पे है


Kya bat hai,,,HASAN Jee.
THANKS RAVINDER JI . BLESSINGS.
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«Reply #24 on: September 29, 2013, 09:32:40 PM »
महफूज़   बेटियाँ  ,  न  कोई  माँ  बहन   है  आज
या   रब्ब !  अज़ाब  कैसा  ये   मेरे  वतन   पे  है


फिर  आ  गया  है   वक़्त  चमन  के  निखार  का
दार-ओ-मदार   सारा    अब   अहले -  चमन  पे है

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan Sir,
Behad umdaa khayaalaat se bharpoor ghazal kahi hai aapne.Really mujhe bahut pasand aayee.Is khoob kalaam per deron dili daat qabool kijiye.

Bahut shukrguzar hoon , Sudhir ji .
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«Reply #25 on: September 30, 2013, 04:14:57 PM »

excellent,sir
thanks ,MB saaheb
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«Reply #26 on: September 30, 2013, 08:29:40 PM »
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thanks saxena ji . khush rahye .
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«Reply #27 on: October 01, 2013, 01:49:14 AM »

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah :clap: Applause Applause Applause Applause
thanks adil bechain saheb.
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«Reply #28 on: October 01, 2013, 10:36:21 PM »
waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasan sir bahut hi umda ghazal.
shukriya iftakha saheb.
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«Reply #29 on: October 02, 2013, 01:24:06 AM »
thanks ambalika ji .
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