KISE KHUDA KAHOON MAI

by NETRAPAL on September 08, 2009, 03:40:49 AM
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ehsaas chahat ka
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«Reply #15 on: September 12, 2009, 03:46:07 AM »
marvellous
bohot hi umda likha aap ne
keep writing
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #16 on: September 12, 2009, 04:36:32 AM »
ehsaas ji bahut bahut dhanywaad aapkaa....

Netra...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #17 on: September 14, 2009, 04:58:42 AM »

all respected members,

maine ek saamajik buraayee ko uthaate hooe ye rachnaa likhee hai isme shaamil kuch sbadon ke kaaran shaayad kuch logon kee bhaawnaao chod pahunchee jike liye tahe dil se mai chamaa chaataa hoon or un shabdon ko hataa kar dubaaraa aap kee khidmat me pesh hai...........

shukriyaa...



Netrapal......
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Roja
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«Reply #18 on: September 14, 2009, 03:25:19 PM »

all respected members,

maine ek saamajik buraayee ko uthaate hooe ye rachnaa likhee hai isme shaamil kuch sbadon ke kaaran shaayad kuch logon kee bhaawnaao chod pahunchee jike liye tahe dil se mai chamaa chaataa hoon or un shabdon ko hataa kar dubaaraa aap kee khidmat me pesh hai...........

shukriyaa...



Netrapal......


Aisi koyi baat nahi hai Netra ji. Bahut accha aur sahi likha hai aapne. Isliye sorry kehna zaruri nahi. Aapne apni dil ki baat kahi hai wo bi poetic way mein. Jo rachna aapne yahan racha hai it is marvellous.  Thumbs UP

Keep writing.. Usual Smile
 

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Sayyid Randeri
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«Reply #19 on: September 14, 2009, 04:40:18 PM »
Netrapal ji. ye aap ki mahanta hai jo aap ne sab ke jazbaaton ka khyaal rakha, allah aapka khayal rakhe.. Aameen.
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«Reply #20 on: September 15, 2009, 09:17:06 AM »
thanks Roja ji, or Sayyid ji for reply

Netra....
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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: September 15, 2009, 11:31:42 AM »

Kise khudaa kahoo mai
Kahoo kisko mai jisas
Dikhtaa nahi naanak kahi
Kise iishawar kahoo mai

Sab mitee hai, kankad pathar hai
fir bhee kahee masjid hai kahi mandir hai
Gurudware hai  kahi girjaaghar hai
Sab hai par wo nahi hai
Jiske liye har insaan dukhee  hai

Sikh hai, hindu hai
Isaayee bhee yahee hai
Pooja hai, namaaj hai
Ardaas bhee yahee hai
Sabkuch hai yahaa
Bas dharm hee nahi hai….

Dhamaake roj kyo hote hai
Kyo girtee hai laashe har gali me
Kohraam har ghar machtaa hai,
Kyon sajtee hai roj maayte,
Roj samshaan kyo sulagte hai...

Sajtee hai dukaane har gali me
Mandiro me masjido me
Pandito me molviyo me,
Kodiyo ke bhaav. Dharm biktaa hai
Mandir me masjid me

Dekhtaa hoo mai bebas
Bas yahee sochtaa hoon
Kise khudaa kahoon mai
Kise kahoo mai jijas
Eeshwar kise kahoon mai

Netrapal.....



Bohot Khoob Netra Ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: September 16, 2009, 06:46:06 AM »
thanks celmiera ji..

Netra....
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #23 on: September 28, 2009, 05:34:47 PM »
Netrpal ji kya khoob likha h apne Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #24 on: October 01, 2009, 09:47:53 AM »
thanks rishi bhayee

Netra....
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Vikk
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«Reply #25 on: October 01, 2009, 10:20:45 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Bahut hi umda netra ji
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