MAI BHARAT HOO

by NETRAPAL on May 23, 2009, 06:03:54 AM
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Mai sisak rahaa hoo
Ldkhadaa rahaa hoo
Khadaa bhee nhai ho paataa haoo
Bas sarkak rahaa hoo
Mai Bharat hoo……

Dhoond rahaa hoo manjil apnee
Bas andheraa hee andheraa hai
N jane kahaa chalaa gayaa hai suraj
Bas mai bhatak rahaa hoo
Mai Bharat hoo..

Kin kandho kaa sahraa loo mai apaahij
Sab toote se najar ate hai
Jise pakdayaa tha daaman mane
Kisee or ke daaman thame najar ate hai.
Chakrwyoo me ulajh kar rah gayaa hoo
Mai Bharat hoo…

Swapn sundar saa maine bhee dekhaa tha
Bediyaa toot jayengee wo khwaab bhee dekhaa tha
Aaj meraa dam ghutaa hai
Bediyo kaa bandhan ab jyadaa masoos hotaa hai
Mai aaj bhee kyaa aajaad hoo…
Mai bhaarat hoo…

Gandgee me agyaantaa kee sad rhaa hoo
Dadal me bhrstaachaar ke dhas rhaa hoo
Kisse aashaa karo phoolo ke guldasto kee
Maalee se bagiyaa ujadtee dekhaa hoo.
Mai bhaarat hoo..


Netra..
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k.shael
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2009, 06:16:54 AM »
Wah Wah Wah Bahut Umda Bahut Behtreen lajawab Kalaam,
Daad kabool kare Netra Ji... Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Laakho log rehte hai mujhme,
Laakho ka mein dharti mein aasmaan hoon,
Palte hai badte hai bache mujhme aur aage
bhadne ke liye chod jaate hai jise mein wo
Bharat Mahan Hoon,

Fasal paida karo jameen pe to sab roti khaye
Aasmaan-Jameen dekar bhi jo viraan hoon,
Kuch saalo me behad pyaar mohabbat lekar matlab
ke liye tanha choot jao mein wo Bharat Mahan Hoon,

Nayi peedi ka saath har kadam pe doon unke har
padaav ki shaan hoon,
Hote hue bhi ek nav-urja ke bhoode desh wasiyon pe
bojh ban jao mein wo Bharat Mahan Hoon.

Shally.
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2009, 07:31:34 AM »
bahoot khoob likhaa hai

behad umda jawab....

Netra...
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k.shael
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2009, 07:42:42 AM »
bahoot khoob likhaa hai

behad umda jawab....

Netra...

Shukriya Netra Ji,

Shally.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2009, 08:02:35 AM »
very very nice netrapal ji and shally ji. Applause Applause
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Nishika
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2009, 08:20:59 AM »
its realy varry good puri bharat ka present & dikha diya i wish futute aesa nahi no
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jaindost
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2009, 09:39:03 AM »
Haan mai BHARAT hu,
21vi saadi ka majboot Bharat,
Naujwano ka jawan BHARAT,
Pashchim se ab Behtar BHARAT,
Ek aam aadmi ka main khaas BHARAT,
Su-Bhavishya ko agarsar BHARAT,
BHAGAT ki kalpana ka main BHARAT,
Majboot bal-budhi wala main BHARAT,
Duniya ko vinamarta sikhlata main BHARAT,
Ab khush-gawah, khubsoorat main BHARAT,
Rakhna sanjoy mujhe ab tum,
Nahi ban-na mujhe fir se bhrisht wo BHARAT..........

-JAIN DOST
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2009, 12:25:16 PM »
very very thanks for madhuvesh ji, nishika ji, kash ji for reply

Netra...
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2009, 12:29:39 PM »
BohatAchche Netra Bhai,Shally And Jain Bhai,.
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2009, 12:31:08 PM »
Haan mai BHARAT hu,
21vi saadi ka majboot Bharat,
Naujwano ka jawan BHARAT,
Pashchim se ab Behtar BHARAT,
Ek aam aadmi ka main khaas BHARAT,
Su-Bhavishya ko agarsar BHARAT,
BHAGAT ki kalpana ka main BHARAT,
Majboot bal-budhi wala main BHARAT,
Duniya ko vinamarta sikhlata main BHARAT,
Ab khush-gawah, khubsoorat main BHARAT,
Rakhna sanjoy mujhe ab tum,
Nahi ban-na mujhe fir se bhrisht wo BHARAT..........

-JAIN DOST

good reply jaindost.....

Netra...
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vitasta
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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2009, 12:31:47 PM »
very nicely written netra ji, jain ji aur shally ji! Applause
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #11 on: May 23, 2009, 12:32:35 PM »
BohatAchche Netra Bhai,Shally And Jain Bhai,.

thanks azeem bhaayee..

Netra...
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SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #12 on: May 23, 2009, 02:33:31 PM »
Kya khoob likha hai Netra Ji
Wah Wah kya rekhaen khinchi hain, kya tasvir banai hai aapne, very nice

NEETI DHARM SATSANG SHEEL SAB MULYA AAJ BEKAAR HUE
MANDIR MASJID GIRJE SATTA PAANE KA HATHIYAR HUE
TAQAT KA HI KHEL YAHAN YEH EK ARAAJAK BASTI HAI
SAHMI JAATI SHARM MAGAR BESHARMI KHULKAR HANSATI HAI
MARYADA PURSHOTTAM AAO MARYADA KA PAATH PADHAO
TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR KARUNA KE GHAN GHIR KAR AAO

SARVESH RASTOGI
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Roja
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«Reply #13 on: May 23, 2009, 02:56:24 PM »
Wah Netra ji... Wonderful... Applause Applause

Shally dear... Jain ji and Sarvesh Rastogi ji aap sab ne bu bahut accha likha hai. Daad hazir hai.

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deepika_divya
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«Reply #14 on: May 23, 2009, 04:29:53 PM »
Wah wah Bahoot bahoot Umda Netrapal ji.. Daad Kabool kijiye.....

Very Well replied Shally , Jain Ji & Sarvesh ji.. bahoot Khoob
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