MAI BHARAT HOO

by NETRAPAL on May 23, 2009, 06:03:54 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 25, 2009, 04:02:21 AM »
Kya khoob likha hai Netra Ji
Wah Wah kya rekhaen khinchi hain, kya tasvir banai hai aapne, very nice

NEETI DHARM SATSANG SHEEL SAB MULYA AAJ BEKAAR HUE
MANDIR MASJID GIRJE SATTA PAANE KA HATHIYAR HUE
TAQAT KA HI KHEL YAHAN YEH EK ARAAJAK BASTI HAI
SAHMI JAATI SHARM MAGAR BESHARMI KHULKAR HANSATI HAI
MARYADA PURSHOTTAM AAO MARYADA KA PAATH PADHAO
TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR KARUNA KE GHAN GHIR KAR AAO

SARVESH RASTOGI


bahoot khoob sir jee kammal kaa reply hai aapka bahoot khoob

Netra...
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«Reply #16 on: May 25, 2009, 04:03:38 AM »
Wah Netra ji... Wonderful... Applause Applause

Shally dear... Jain ji and Sarvesh Rastogi ji aap sab ne bu bahut accha likha hai. Daad hazir hai.



thanks roja ji....thanks for reply

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«Reply #17 on: May 25, 2009, 04:05:18 AM »
Wah wah Bahoot bahoot Umda Netrapal ji.. Daad Kabool kijiye.....

Very Well replied Shally , Jain Ji & Sarvesh ji.. bahoot Khoob

thanks sophi ji.....

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«Reply #18 on: May 25, 2009, 09:20:50 AM »
Kya khoob likha hai Netra Ji
Wah Wah kya rekhaen khinchi hain, kya tasvir banai hai aapne, very nice

NEETI DHARM SATSANG SHEEL SAB MULYA AAJ BEKAAR HUE
MANDIR MASJID GIRJE SATTA PAANE KA HATHIYAR HUE
TAQAT KA HI KHEL YAHAN YEH EK ARAAJAK BASTI HAI
SAHMI JAATI SHARM MAGAR BESHARMI KHULKAR HANSATI HAI
MARYADA PURSHOTTAM AAO MARYADA KA PAATH PADHAO
TARAS RAHA HAI MAN-MAYUR KARUNA KE GHAN GHIR KAR AAO

SARVESH RASTOGI


Nice One Sarvesh Bhai Again,.
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«Reply #19 on: May 25, 2009, 12:36:58 PM »
Shukriya Roja Ji
Shukriya Sophi Ji
Shukriya Netra Ji
Shukriya Azeem Ji
Jab original work itna khubsurat ho to reply to khubsurat hoga hi, very well Netra Ji.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #20 on: May 26, 2009, 06:04:23 AM »
thanks sarvesh ji vastav me achaa likhaa hai aapne...

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«Reply #21 on: June 01, 2009, 11:49:58 PM »
Bohot umda, sabhi ne achha likha he.
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«Reply #22 on: June 04, 2009, 03:42:00 PM »
Waah bahut khub Netra ji....bahut hi dard bhare andaj me aapne bharat ki marmik dristi par rosni daali hai....bahut bahut khub Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Shally ji..Jain ji...sarvesh ji aap sab ne bhi acha sath diya hai... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #23 on: June 05, 2009, 03:54:42 AM »
thanks jannatjahan ji...

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