Mein tuje chor ke ja raha hu Maa

by Kanta on September 01, 2008, 06:04:02 PM
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«Reply #30 on: October 29, 2008, 07:01:05 PM »
desh mein kyu nahi rukte log hen
pardes jane mein kyu ye vyast hen
peiso ki lobh mein sab mer rahe
jane kyu maa ki seva se tang hen

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«Reply #31 on: October 29, 2008, 07:05:49 PM »
paisa he nahi aor bhi kaaran hote hai
jab tak na beete khud per, log sote hai
ladki ka janam, ab jaana kyun dukh daai hai
kai logo ne yah judai, apni jaan bachane ko bhi paai hai
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«Reply #32 on: October 29, 2008, 08:14:39 PM »
karan hen anek malum he sabku
lakshmi ne banaya swarthi he jinku
mile ider tora ker desh ki seva
videshi tukro pe palna he inku

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«Reply #33 on: November 02, 2008, 01:42:42 PM »
Nice One Kanta Ji,.
Pooja Sis,.
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«Reply #34 on: November 02, 2008, 01:43:34 PM »
Chordkar Jaaoon Bhi To Kahaan Jaaoon Tere Daaman Ko,.
Meri To Duniya Hi Tu Hai Maa,.
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«Reply #35 on: November 13, 2008, 11:53:12 PM »
nice wordings lil bro
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«Reply #36 on: May 15, 2009, 10:02:10 PM »
pooja tum nahi likhi koch n thank u azeem 4 nice lines
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«Reply #37 on: May 26, 2009, 05:03:43 PM »
desh mein kyu nahi rukte log hen
pardes jane mein kyu ye vyast hen
peiso ki lobh mein sab mer rahe
jane kyu maa ki seva se tang hen

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ahaaa Kya khoob likha hai Kanta dear...

Jane kyu maa ki seva se tang hai... wah wah.....
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«Reply #38 on: July 05, 2009, 01:24:36 AM »
mein to esa hi likti roja tum se prerna li na
thank u dear
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«Reply #39 on: July 13, 2009, 10:06:22 PM »
roja tum kider ho, reply me
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«Reply #40 on: July 13, 2009, 10:27:58 PM »
pooja tum nahi likhi koch n thank u azeem 4 nice lines

Likhne ko likh chuki aor ab kaya karan samjhau
koi ayye ghar bachane, kisi ko sirf shokiya paau
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«Reply #41 on: July 13, 2009, 10:43:49 PM »
gar bech ker bhi ate hen
kkud pe kesa setam date hen
yadi hue safal to kalyan
nahi to ider uder dakke kate hen

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«Reply #42 on: March 26, 2010, 10:12:02 PM »
Behtareen aur aasaan shabdo me bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne Kanta ji. Bahut bahut pyaari kavita hai.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Par ye to lagbhag der saala pehle ki hai. Kuch aapke abhi k latest kavitaayen bhi padhwa dijiye hume. Hume intezaar rahega aapki nayi kavitaon ka. Bahut achcha likhte hain aap. Likhte rahiye. Thumbs UP
 
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