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pyaar, mohabbat aur dard .... bas inhi vishayon pe likhta hoon main... socha is baar kuch alag likhne ki koshish karun...


bachpan me kabhi suna tha ki mera bharat mahaan hai,
aajkal koi ye nahi kehta ki sach mein desh mahaan hai,

bhool k jung san sattawan ki bhool gaye sab balidaan hai,
dharm k naam pe baant k aaj ek bharat ek pakistan hai,

kal tak ye suna tha ki hamara ek hi hindustan hai,
aaj usi ke tukde hoke koi punjab koi rajasthan hai,

aaj dharm k naam pe uth raha har taraf toofaan hai,
koi hai hindu, koi hai sikh, koi hota musalman hai,

koi bible, koi bhagwat geeta , kisi ka naam quraan hai,
kehne ko sab kitaaben hain par sabka alag alag naam hai,

dharam k naam pe bhed bhaw q karta aaj insaan hai,
ek gagan k niche hi rehte, sabka ek bhagwaan hai,

insaano k khoon ka pyaasa ban gaya aaj insaan hai,
kal tak jisko nar kehte the aaj bana haiwaan hai,

kal tak naari maata thi, aaj karte uska apmaan hain,
zulm-o-sitam wo seh nahi paati, deti wo apne praan hai,

takshashila naalanda tha kal, aaj yahaan agyaan hai,
pita ki jama punji ko lutana aaj bachcho ki shaan hai,

chhote me kabhi suna tha humne maata pita bhagwaan hain,
aaj vriddhashram me rakhte hain unko aise to santaan hain,

bin vyaahe hi maa ban jaati aaj ki naari mahaan hai,
pyaar k naam pe chhal karna aaj k yuva ki pehchaan hai,

kahin pe chori, kahin pe loot, kahin pe qatl-e-aam hai,
aasmaan me khauff k baadal subah se lekar shaam hai,

kahin pe bhasha, kahin pe jaati, kahin dharm k naam hai,
aaj insaano k zulm ka shikaar hota sirf insaan hai,

kabhi kabhi to sochta hoon main ki badal gaya insaan hai,
itni nafrat, itna vinaash, usi ka to pramaan hai,

aaj nafraton ki aag me dekho jal raha hinduatan hai,
aap hi kaho main kaise kahun ki mera desh mahaan hai...
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«Reply #1 on: April 21, 2010, 11:42:21 PM »



haqeeqat ko lafzao'n main bade hi kamaal se dhala hai aap ne .bahot khoob janaab


aaj dharm k naam pe uth raha har taraf toofaan hai,
koi hai hindu, koi hai sikh, koi hota musalman hai,

dharam k naam pe bhed bhaw q karta aaj insaan hai,
ek gagan k niche hi rehte, sabka ek bhagwaan hai,

insaano k khoon ka pyaasa ban gaya aaj insaan hai,
kal tak jisko nar kehte the aaj bana haiwaan hai,

bin vyaahe hi maa ban jaati aaj ki naari mahaan hai,
pyaar k naam pe chhal karna aaj k yuva ki pehchaan hai,

kahin pe chori, kahin pe loot, kahin pe qatl-e-aam hai,
aasmaan me khauff k baadal subah se lekar shaam hai,

aaj nafraton ki aag me dekho jal raha hinduatan hai,
aap hi kaho main kaise kahun ki mera desh mahaan hai...
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2010, 12:03:29 AM »
I hv no words 4 u !!!!!!!!!!!!

Dis is d one f d best thing i ever read....
Ur too gud !!!!!!!!!!!

I think dis is ur best creation !!!!!!!!!!!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Usual Smile icon_salut

I LUV MY INDIA!!!!!!!!!!!
Mera DEsh MAHAN HAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I miss my country very very much .... icon_silent crybaby2
I relly missing ......Voh Jiasa b hai MEra hai>..... sad7
Quote from: klaskar on April 21, 2010, 06:48:44 PM
pyaar, mohabbat aur dard .... bas inhi vishayon pe likhta hoon main... socha is baar kuch alag likhne ki koshish karun...


bachpan me kabhi suna tha ki mera bharat mahaan hai,
aajkal koi ye nahi kehta ki sach mein desh mahaan hai,

bhool k jung san sattawan ki bhool gaye sab balidaan hai,
dharm k naam pe baant k aaj ek bharat ek pakistan hai,

kal tak ye suna tha ki hamara ek hi hindustan hai,
aaj usi ke tukde hoke koi punjab koi rajasthan hai,

aaj dharm k naam pe uth raha har taraf toofaan hai,
koi hai hindu, koi hai sikh, koi hota musalman hai,

koi bible, koi bhagwat geeta , kisi ka naam quraan hai,
kehne ko sab kitaaben hain par sabka alag alag naam hai,

dharam k naam pe bhed bhaw q karta aaj insaan hai,
ek gagan k niche hi rehte, sabka ek bhagwaan hai,

insaano k khoon ka pyaasa ban gaya aaj insaan hai,
kal tak jisko nar kehte the aaj bana haiwaan hai,

kal tak naari maata thi, aaj karte uska apmaan hain,
zulm-o-sitam wo seh nahi paati, deti wo apne praan hai,

takshashila naalanda tha kal, aaj yahaan agyaan hai,
pita ki jama punji ko lutana aaj bachcho ki shaan hai,

chhote me kabhi suna tha humne maata pita bhagwaan hain,
aaj vriddhashram me rakhte hain unko aise to santaan hain,

bin vyaahe hi maa ban jaati aaj ki naari mahaan hai,
pyaar k naam pe chhal karna aaj k yuva ki pehchaan hai,

kahin pe chori, kahin pe loot, kahin pe qatl-e-aam hai,
aasmaan me khauff k baadal subah se lekar shaam hai,

kahin pe bhasha, kahin pe jaati, kahin dharm k naam hai,
aaj insaano k zulm ka shikaar hota sirf insaan hai,

kabhi kabhi to sochta hoon main ki badal gaya insaan hai,
itni nafrat, itna vinaash, usi ka to pramaan hai,

aaj nafraton ki aag me dekho jal raha hinduatan hai,
aap hi kaho main kaise kahun ki mera desh mahaan hai...
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«Reply #3 on: April 22, 2010, 01:26:33 AM »
     Roj ki shayariron se alag aapne bahut achha likha hai klaskar ji.Aur aaj k daur k haalaton ko lafzo me behatareen tareeqe se dhala hai.aapki koshish bahut pasand aai. Haan ek chhoti si baat aur aaj ki naari ki mahanta jo aapne batai hai uspe main aapse sehmati to rakhti hoon par thodi si tareef agar aap aaj k mardo ki bhi kar lete to kya baat hoti aakhir taali ek haath se to nahi baja karti. Giggle  Kher ye sab to bekar ki baatein hai par mujhe aapki kuch alag karne ki koshish bahut achhi or nai lagi. yun hi likhte rahiy.  Applause
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«Reply #4 on: April 22, 2010, 10:40:44 AM »
Wah wah Kapil ji apne vichar bade achhe tareeqe se is kivita mein zahir kiye hain. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #5 on: April 22, 2010, 12:18:02 PM »
Bahut bahut shukriya Nazar ji... jaanke humein khushi mili ki aapko hamari kavita pasand aayi... tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon main aapka... bahut bahut shukriya Nazar ji...!!!

Quote from: nazar ghouri on April 21, 2010, 11:42:21 PM


haqeeqat ko lafzao'n main bade hi kamaal se dhala hai aap ne .bahot khoob janaab


aaj dharm k naam pe uth raha har taraf toofaan hai,
koi hai hindu, koi hai sikh, koi hota musalman hai,

dharam k naam pe bhed bhaw q karta aaj insaan hai,
ek gagan k niche hi rehte, sabka ek bhagwaan hai,

insaano k khoon ka pyaasa ban gaya aaj insaan hai,
kal tak jisko nar kehte the aaj bana haiwaan hai,

bin vyaahe hi maa ban jaati aaj ki naari mahaan hai,
pyaar k naam pe chhal karna aaj k yuva ki pehchaan hai,

kahin pe chori, kahin pe loot, kahin pe qatl-e-aam hai,
aasmaan me khauff k baadal subah se lekar shaam hai,

aaj nafraton ki aag me dekho jal raha hinduatan hai,
aap hi kaho main kaise kahun ki mera desh mahaan hai...
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«Reply #6 on: April 22, 2010, 01:02:47 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... maine itni achchi ye kavita nahi likhi hai jitni jyaada aapne iski taarif kar di hai... bahut jyada taarif kar diya aapne hamare is kavita ki... bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji.

same here... I also love my country... aur aapki condition main samajh sakta hoon... bahut mushkil hota hai apne desh ko chhodke itne lambe time tak bahar rehna paraye mulk me... kabhi dil kare to aap aana jarur laut k apne ghar apne desh...

Quote from: neelgold on April 22, 2010, 12:03:29 AM
I hv no words 4 u !!!!!!!!!!!!

Dis is d one f d best thing i ever read....
Ur too gud !!!!!!!!!!!

I think dis is ur best creation !!!!!!!!!!!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Usual Smile icon_salut

I LUV MY INDIA!!!!!!!!!!!
Mera DEsh MAHAN HAI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I miss my country very very much .... icon_silent crybaby2
I relly missing ......Voh Jiasa b hai MEra hai>..... sad7
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«Reply #7 on: April 22, 2010, 01:54:09 PM »
Bahut Hi chubti Hui Topic Par Aapne Likha..

Aur Aapne Apni Lekhni ke Saath Poora Insaaf Kiya..

Bahut Ache Klaskar Ji..

Aapne Iss Kavita Mein Bahut Hi Sehaj Tareeke se Aaj Ke Halaat Bayaan Kiye Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: April 22, 2010, 03:03:00 PM »


Sabse pehle to main tahe dil se aapka shukriya adaa karna chahunga Tamanna ji ki aapne hamari kavita k liye apne keemti waqt me se thoda sa waqt nikala aur ise padh k ise pasand kiya. Aagr meri ye koshish aapko achchi lagi to mere liye isse khushi ki baat kya ho sakti hai. bahut bahut shukriya Tamanna ji. bahut bahut shukriya.

Ab baat aati hai hamari un lines ki jisme maine aaj k naari ki mahaanta k baare me likha hai. Aapne shayad dhyaan nahi diya ya shayad main hi dhang se nahi likh paya. Darasal dusri line me maine aaj k purush ki hi taarif ki hai. Pyaar k naam pe aaj ka purush chhal karta hai tabhi to aaj ki naari mahaan banti hai. Taali na to kabhi ek haath se baji thi na kabhi bajegi... Usual Smile

bin vyaahe hi maa ban jaati aaj ki naari mahaan hai,
pyaar k naam pe chhal karna aaj k yuva ki pehchaan hai...

Is second line me "Yuva" ki jagah agar "purush" likh deta hoon to aapki ichcha poori ho jaati hai. Par chhal to ladkiyaan bhi karti hai aajkal pyaar k naam pe.... Usual Smile

Ek baar fir se aapka shukriya adaa karna chahunga main Tamanna ji. Bahut bahut shukriya.

Quote from: tamanna.pt on April 22, 2010, 01:26:33 AM
     Roj ki shayariron se alag aapne bahut achha likha hai klaskar ji.Aur aaj k daur k haalaton ko lafzo me behatareen tareeqe se dhala hai.aapki koshish bahut pasand aai. Haan ek chhoti si baat aur aaj ki naari ki mahanta jo aapne batai hai uspe main aapse sehmati to rakhti hoon par thodi si tareef agar aap aaj k mardo ki bhi kar lete to kya baat hoti aakhir taali ek haath se to nahi baja karti. Giggle  Kher ye sab to bekar ki baatein hai par mujhe aapki kuch alag karne ki koshish bahut achhi or nai lagi. yun hi likhte rahiy.  Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 22, 2010, 07:11:21 PM »
 :icon_salut:Wah wah Kapil ji,aapne bahut sachai,khoobsurti aur alag andaaz mein pesh kiya ye kavita,great creation.arey maie toh socha tha aap sirf dard aur mohobat mein likhte hai.bahut pasand aayi .keep up the good work. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft Shocked Even More Shocked Even More
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«Reply #10 on: April 22, 2010, 10:18:33 PM »
bahut bahut shukriya Riyaz ji... !!!

Quote from: riyaz106 on April 22, 2010, 10:40:44 AM
Wah wah Kapil ji apne vichar bade achhe tareeqe se is kivita mein zahir kiye hain. Bahot khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: April 22, 2010, 10:57:30 PM »
u knoe evry1 has sum soft cornr in hi/her heart/lef dis is myn soft cornr
voh kehthe hai na jo cheez pass na ho voh jiada kareeb hoti hai ... u cn take frm ur xperince also..

well done gud jobbbbbbbbbbbb
Quote from: klaskar on April 22, 2010, 01:02:47 PM
bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji... maine itni achchi ye kavita nahi likhi hai jitni jyaada aapne iski taarif kar di hai... bahut jyada taarif kar diya aapne hamare is kavita ki... bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji.

same here... I also love my country... aur aapki condition main samajh sakta hoon... bahut mushkil hota hai apne desh ko chhodke itne lambe time tak bahar rehna paraye mulk me... kabhi dil kare to aap aana jarur laut k apne ghar apne desh...
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«Reply #12 on: April 22, 2010, 11:23:42 PM »
Thanks a lot again Neel ji... sach kahaa aapne koi cheez jab dur ho tabhi uski importance samajh me aati hai... main bhala aapka dard kaise samajh paunga... aapka dard aap hi behtar samajh sakte hain... koshish ki hai jahan tak main aapke dard ko samajh paaya usey kuch shabdon me utaarne ki.... jaane aapko pasand bhi aayega ki nahi....

jinme mera bachpan beeta, aaj wo galiyaan yaad aati hai,
jinme mera yowan beeta, aaj wo ghadiyaan yaad aati hain,

jin pedo ki shaakhon me hum bachpan me khela karte the,
un shaakhon ki yaad me ab hum aksar roya karte hain,

peele sarso k kheton ki wo khushboo humko yaad aati hai,
maa k haath k bane khaane ki aaj bhi humko yaad aati hai,

chhoot gaya wo bachpan mera, chhoot gayi wo jawani meri,
chhoot gaya wo aangan mujhse, chhoot gaya mera desh bhi mujhse,

apne ghar jaane k liye ab barso se hum taras rahein hain,
desh hai mera bharat pyara jiske liye hum tadap rahe hain,

kaash koi farishta aaye, mujhko mere ghar le jaaye,
mere hothon ki muskaan wo mere hothon ko de jaaye....

Quote from: neelgold on April 22, 2010, 10:57:30 PM
u knoe evry1 has sum soft cornr in hi/her heart/lef dis is myn soft cornr
voh kehthe hai na jo cheez pass na ho voh jiada kareeb hoti hai ... u cn take frm ur xperince also..

well done gud jobbbbbbbbbbbb
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«Reply #13 on: April 23, 2010, 12:03:29 AM »
Bhut ache kapil ji u touchd my soft cornr ...so hre s d reply hope u vll lyk it

i trid bt dont knoe.... Apke jaisa to nhi likh sakti ....

Voh galiya voh chubare
voh mera sara bachpan
voh humari sari yadian
aaj bi muze yaad aate hai voh guzre hue saab paal

Voh choti choti baat pe ladna zagrna
Mera ruthna unka manana
voh doston ke saath gappe lagana
Ajj b muze yaad aate hai voh masti ke saab paal

Voh ganto chaat ke uppr bethe rehna
saara saara din gali main kissi ka rasta dekhna
anakhon hi ankhon voh ishara kaar dena
aaj b muze yaad aate hai voh sharart ke saab paal

kaha gaye voh fursat ke din
Kaha gaye voh masti ke paal
Na yeh desh mera na yeh log mere
Na hi hai voh dost mere
paar Fir bi
Aaj b muze yaad aate hai voh guzre hue saab paal..

Quote from: klaskar on April 22, 2010, 11:23:42 PM
Thanks a lot again Neel ji... sach kahaa aapne koi cheez jab dur ho tabhi uski importance samajh me aati hai... main bhala aapka dard kaise samajh paunga... aapka dard aap hi behtar samajh sakte hain... koshish ki hai jahan tak main aapke dard ko samajh paaya usey kuch shabdon me utaarne ki.... jaane aapko pasand bhi aayega ki nahi....

jinme mera bachpan beeta, aaj wo galiyaan yaad aati hai,
jinme mera yowan beeta, aaj wo ghadiyaan yaad aati hain,

jin pedo ki shaakhon me hum bachpan me khela karte the,
un shaakhon ki yaad me ab hum aksar roya karte hain,

peele sarso k kheton ki wo khushboo humko yaad aati hai,
maa k haath k bane khaane ki aaj bhi humko yaad aati hai,

chhoot gaya wo bachpan mera, chhoot gayi wo jawani meri,
chhoot gaya wo aangan mujhse, chhoot gaya mera desh bhi mujhse,

apne ghar jaane k liye ab barso se hum taras rahein hain,
desh hai mera bharat pyara jiske liye hum tadap rahe hain,

kaash koi farishta aaye, mujhko mere ghar le jaaye,
mere hothon ki muskaan wo mere hothon ko de jaaye....
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«Reply #14 on: April 23, 2010, 12:35:17 AM »
bahut bahut shukriya Khwaish ji... haan sach hai ye topic chubti hui hi hai... par yahi aaj ki sachchai hai... har taraf aisi hi mahaanta k gungaan hai... ek baar fir se aapka shukriya ada karna chahunga ki aapne hamari kavita ko apna waqt diya... bahut bahut dhanyawaad...!!!


Quote from: khwaish on April 22, 2010, 01:54:09 PM
Bahut Hi chubti Hui Topic Par Aapne Likha..

Aur Aapne Apni Lekhni ke Saath Poora Insaaf Kiya..

Bahut Ache Klaskar Ji..

Aapne Iss Kavita Mein Bahut Hi Sehaj Tareeke se Aaj Ke Halaat Bayaan Kiye Hai..

Bahut Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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