-------/// Mera Bharat Mahaan Hai ///------ -Panna 2:Shairy-E-Watan

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«Reply #15 on: April 23, 2010, 12:39:37 AM »

bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... humko jaanke khushi mili ki aapko hamara ye alag andaaz pasand aaya... bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji... aisa nahi hai ki hum alag nahi likhna chahte par dikkat ye hai ki hum alag likh nahi paate hain... ab jab aapko ye kavita pasand aa hi gayi hai to ab se hum koshish karenge in sab topics pe bhi likhne ki... thanx again...!!!

Quote from: madhuwesh on April 22, 2010, 07:11:21 PM

:icon_salut:Wah wah Kapil ji,aapne bahut sachai,khoobsurti aur alag andaaz mein pesh kiya ye kavita,great creation.arey maie toh socha tha aap sirf dard aur mohobat mein likhte hai.bahut pasand aayi .keep up the good work. Hats off to you!


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Re: -------/// Mera Bharat Mahaan Hai ///------Klaskar

«Reply #16 on: April 23, 2010, 03:42:01 AM »

Bahut hi khoobsurat rachna hai Kapil Ji
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye


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Re: -------/// Mera Bharat Mahaan Hai ///------Klaskar

«Reply #17 on: April 23, 2010, 01:21:39 PM »

bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji... bahut pasand aaya humko aapka jawab... aap hum jaisa nahi likh paate sach par saath hi ye bhi sach hai ki aap humse bahut jyada achcha likhte hain... bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. sach... main kuch aur likh k aapko kaam pe nahi laga raha hoon warna aap hi shikayat karoge ki kaam pe laga diya ... Usual Smile

ek baar fir se kehna chahunga ... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on April 23, 2010, 12:03:29 AM

Bhut ache kapil ji u touchd my soft cornr ...so hre s d reply hope u vll lyk it

i trid bt dont knoe.... Apke jaisa to nhi likh sakti ....

Voh galiya voh chubare
voh mera sara bachpan
voh humari sari yadian
aaj bi muze yaad aate hai voh guzre hue saab paal

Voh choti choti baat pe ladna zagrna
Mera ruthna unka manana
voh doston ke saath gappe lagana
Ajj b muze yaad aate hai voh masti ke saab paal

Voh ganto chaat ke uppr bethe rehna
saara saara din gali main kissi ka rasta dekhna
anakhon hi ankhon voh ishara kaar dena
aaj b muze yaad aate hai voh sharart ke saab paal

kaha gaye voh fursat ke din
Kaha gaye voh masti ke paal
Na yeh desh mera na yeh log mere
Na hi hai voh dost mere
paar Fir bi
Aaj b muze yaad aate hai voh guzre hue saab paal..


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Re: -------/// Mera Bharat Mahaan Hai ///------Klaskar

«Reply #18 on: April 23, 2010, 02:54:57 PM »

bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...aap jaise paathakon ka saath rahega to hamari kalam yunhi chalti rahegi... tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon mai aapka... bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on April 23, 2010, 03:42:01 AM

Bahut hi khoobsurat rachna hai Kapil Ji
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye


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«Reply #19 on: April 23, 2010, 11:27:24 PM »

:thanks:THAnxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Tons of trhanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Quote from: klaskar on April 23, 2010, 01:21:39 PM

ek baar fir se kehna chahunga ... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Neel ji...!!!


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Re: -------/// Mera Bharat Mahaan Hai ///------

«Reply #20 on: April 24, 2010, 12:06:50 AM »

Quote from: neelgold on April 23, 2010, 11:27:24 PM

:thanks:THAnxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Tons of trhanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx


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