~*~*NoW tHiS iS oUr CoUnTrY~*~*

by ghayal_shayar on July 08, 2005, 09:32:33 AM
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ghayal_shayar
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doston ye meri dusari waisi post hai jo ki main english me post kar raha hoon.pehle ko jyada response nahi mila tha par umeed hai ki ise milega.doston main ek class 12 ka student hoon aur jo bhi dekhta hoon use analyse karne ki koshis karta hoon aur maine jo apne desh ki condition dekhi hai main usike anusar apni feelins likh raha hoon.main ye janta hoon ki yahan bahut log is se sehmat nahi honge par main chahunga ki jo bhi ise padhe wo reply jaroor kare.


all our government n politics is most messy,
meet the world's biggest democracy.

seeing our youth every1 will say india will shine,
in the drops of wine.

here we have thousands of students in the group of ellite,
more r there not knowing how to write.

here u can find each n every kind of bomb,
but not a single comb.

we all live our beautiful n interesting lives,
on the edges of knife.

every1's in a very ud mood,
without ne food.

people hav not got there wages,
since wages.

here people r daily cul into piece,
so we rest in peace.

the country is polution free,
without ne tree.

every1 here enjoys a very gud health,
without ne wealth.

this thing can only b true that we don't hav crime,
if sweet is the taste of lime.

i know that after all this also ne1 says that INDIA will die,
then its a white lie.

but my frnz how can i console my mind bcoz it knows that if it continues like this then our country is going 2 die.

urs LUCKY
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tushar_4u_im
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2005, 10:04:53 AM »
Quote from: "ghayal_shayar"



all our government n politics is most messy,
meet the world's biggest democracy.

seeing our youth every1 will say india will shine,
in the drops of wine.

here we have thousands of students in the group of ellite,
more r there not knowing how to write.

here you can find each n every kind of bomb,
but not a single comb.

we all live our beautiful n interesting lives,
on the edges of knife.

every1's in a very ud mood,
without ne food.

people hav not got there wages,
since wages.

here people r daily cul into piece,
so we rest in peace.

the country is polution free,
without ne tree.

every1 here enjoys a very gud health,
without ne wealth.

this thing can only b true that we don't hav crime,
if sweet is the taste of lime.

i know that after all this also ne1 says that INDIA will die,
then its a white lie.

but my frnz how can i console my mind bcoz it knows that if it continues like this then our country is going 2 die.

urs LUCKY


aapne likha to aacha hai magar isse aaisi gajah send kerna chaiye jaha per hum aapne contry k bare me likhte hai


jaise sheryi e watan me ye koi funny sher nahi hai mere khayal se or aapne is mood se bhi nahi likha ,....

shayad meri bat ka bura lage magar aage se funny shers me watan k naamm per koi sher na bhajiyega ,...

kahi koi humare watan ko badnaam na kere isse per ker,...

plZ sir if i heart u 4give me,.....
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Suhas
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2005, 10:15:25 AM »
Quote from: "tushar_4u_im"


aapne likha to aacha hai magar isse aaisi gajah send kerna chaiye jaha per hum aapne contry k bare me likhte hai


jaise sheryi e watan me ye koi funny sher nahi hai mere khayal se or aapne is mood se bhi nahi likha ,....

shayad meri bat ka bura lage magar aage se funny shers me watan k naamm per koi sher na bhajiyega ,...

kahi koi humare watan ko badnaam na kere isse per ker,...

plZ sir if i heart you 4give me,.....


Yes tushar u r right!!!
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2005, 05:06:46 AM »
1st of all thanks tushar ji ise pasand karne ke liye.aur dusari baat ek dusari site pe meri is kavita ko logon ne humourous me daal diya tha isliye maine ise humourous me post kiya iske liye main maafi chahta hoon.aur rahi baat bura maan ne ki to bhai agar hum bura man jayenge to is site ke bare me aur kaise jaan payenge.
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2005, 05:07:53 AM »
thanks suhas ji for reading it keep coming and reading like this.
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gham.e.dil
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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2005, 08:01:01 AM »
very good man
u showed us the true face of india
go on


and for those who offend:

sach hamesha kadva hi lagta hain, chalta hain.
har kisiko har cheez pasand aaye yeh zaroori nahi par zara pyaar se thukraye to bura bhi nahi lagta
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2005, 12:37:36 PM »
thanks for appreciating my thoughts gam e dil sahab.keep reading.
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isha_verma7
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2005, 07:27:26 AM »
Umm yeh achaa hai lucky.... good one... but yaar dont u think no one wants to know bad thing abt their country ......everyone want to look at good things!!!
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ghayal_shayar
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«Reply #8 on: September 07, 2005, 03:08:51 PM »
isha ji main aapki baat se poori tarah sehmat hoon par baat darasal ye hai ki main logon ko sachhai yaad dilana chahta tha yahi to baat hai.kyunki yahi ahcha sunne ki menlality ke karan hi to hum pragati nahi kar pa rahen hain.
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Pooja
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2005, 09:45:46 PM »
gOOD ONE ghayal_shayar!!
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captainyr
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«Reply #10 on: September 28, 2005, 02:00:19 PM »
:lol:  :lol:  :lol:
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raj_sensitive
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«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2005, 06:07:09 PM »
Ae mere pyare watan
Ae mere bichhade chaman
tujh pe dil qurbaan

tu hi meri aarzu
tu hi meri aabru
tu hi meri jaan
ae mere pyare watan....

maa ka dil banke kabhi
seene se lag jaata hai tu
aur kabhi nanhi beti
banke yaad aata hai tu
jitna yaad aata hai mujhko
utna tadpata hai tu
tujh pe dil qurbaan
ae mere pyare watan...

tere daaman se jo aaye
un hawaon ko salaam
choom lu mei us zabaan ko
jis pe aaye tera naam
sabse pyari subah teri
sabse rangi teri shaam
tujh pe dil qurbaan
ae mere pyare watan...

chhod kar teri zameen ko
door aa pahunche hain hum
phir phi tamanna yahi
tere zarrey zarrey ki kasam
hum jahan paida hue hain
us jagah nikle ye dum
tujh pe dil qurbaan

ae mere pyare watan
ae mere bicchade chaman
tujh pe dil qurbaan

it is very easy to critisize something
this is our country and only we can make it a better
place to live.  If something is going wrong with our
nation then only all of us those are responsible.
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anitha
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2005, 06:24:53 AM »
wah raj ji kya koob kahi hai aap ne apne watan ke baarein mein

keep up the good work


"chhod kar teri zameen ko
door aa pahunche hain hum
phir phi tamanna yahi
tere zarrey zarrey ki kasam
hum jahan paida hue hain
us jagah nikle ye dum "

nikhle dum apne desh mein
shaayad yehi hogi sab ki tammanna
dekein apne watan ko uunchaayi chadna
na karsake kuch apne bharat maa keliye
to kya kar sakeinge apne aap keliye
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raj_sensitive
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«Reply #13 on: October 10, 2005, 08:08:30 AM »
Thanx anitha ji

maana ki is jameen ko na gulzaar kar sakey
kutch khaar (kaante) toh kam kar gaye
guzare jidhar se hum

presently I am thousands miles away from my beloved country but
this is a fact I LOVE MY COUNTRY much more than anybody in this world

SHAHEEDON KI CHITAAON (SAMAADHI) PAR
LAGENGAY HAR BARAS (YEAR) MELE
WATAN PAR MITNE WAALON KA,
YAHI BAAKI NISHAAN HOGA


Quote from: "anitha"
wah raj ji kya koob kahi hai aap ne apne watan ke baarein mein

keep up the good work


"chhod kar teri zameen ko
door aa pahunche hain hum
phir phi tamanna yahi
tere zarrey zarrey ki kasam
hum jahan paida hue hain
us jagah nikle ye dum "

nikhle dum apne desh mein
shaayad yehi hogi sab ki tammanna
dekein apne watan ko uunchaayi chadna
na karsake kuch apne bharat maa keliye
to kya kar sakeinge apne aap keliye
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raj_sensitive
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«Reply #14 on: October 10, 2005, 08:13:40 AM »
THANKS ANITHA JI

AS I AM PRESENTLY THOUSANDS MILES AWAY FROM MY BELOVED COUNTRY BUT THIS IS A FACT THAT I LOVE MY COUNTRY MUCH MORE THAN I LOVE ANYBODY.

SHAHEEDON KI CHITAAON (SAMAADHI) PAR
LANGENGAY HAR BARAS (YEAR) MELE (FAIRS)
WATAN PAR MITNE WAALON KA
YAHI BAAKI NISHAAN HOGA

MAANA KI IS ZAMEEN KO NA GULZAAR KAR SAKEY
KUTCH KHAAR (KAANTE) TO KAM KAG GAYE
GUZARE JIDHAR SE HUM


Quote from: "anitha"
wah raj ji kya koob kahi hai aap ne apne watan ke baarein mein

keep up the good work


"chhod kar teri zameen ko
door aa pahunche hain hum
phir phi tamanna yahi
tere zarrey zarrey ki kasam
hum jahan paida hue hain
us jagah nikle ye dum "

nikhle dum apne desh mein
shaayad yehi hogi sab ki tammanna
dekein apne watan ko uunchaayi chadna
na karsake kuch apne bharat maa keliye
to kya kar sakeinge apne aap keliye
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