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Pardes mein
Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..
Dil rota he, ankh bhar ati he..
Kya gunah kiya tha hamne?
Pardes mein yaad jab teri ati he..

Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..
Yaad bhi teri ek pareshani he..
Kabhi to sakoon milega dil ko
Kesi yeh ajeeb pareshani he..

Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..
Yaad mein hosh bhula bethe hein..
Talaash ki justujo kise nehi
Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..

Dil ke darwaze pe dastak ho rahi he..
Aaj pirr ek yaad sata rahi he..
Dil ki gehrayon me jhaank ke dekh..
Pardes me aaj phirr teri yaad aa rahi he..
:cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:


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myheart_ursonly

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Re: pardes mein........

«Reply #1 on: January 19, 2006, 07:04:51 PM »

Quote from: "chanda"

bahot hi achcha likha hai chanda, very touching!


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chanda

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pardes mein........

«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2006, 05:54:11 AM »

thanxx for liking it myheart_ursonly...thank u


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shayar_dildaar

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pardes mein........

«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2006, 05:57:49 AM »

OOooooooooooo
Thats ok chandajiiii....There are many like you in this forum....


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urs4evasomdev

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pardes mein........

«Reply #4 on: January 22, 2006, 04:29:29 PM »

bauhat acha likha aapne.........chanda ji,
and no dildaar ji there are not many ppl like dat........
everyone is different.......
everyone has their own style........
everyone has their own personality of writing..... and thats shows in thier shahiri..........

anywayz chanda ji keep writing.......... very nice.....
especially jab kaha...........

Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..
Yaad mein hosh bhula bethe hein..
Talaash ki justujo kise nehi
Din lambe, Raaten bhi lambi hein..


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shrinathmr

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same state of mind

«Reply #5 on: January 24, 2006, 12:44:47 PM »

I was just browsing and this poem of yours showed up. And you know what, at this moment my state of mind is exactly the same.

I felt better after reading it.

Thanks,
Shrinath


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chanda

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pardes mein........

«Reply #6 on: February 07, 2006, 09:08:08 AM »

oh really...i feel good now, becoz i made someone feel better than what they felt like....thanx for all ur comments....
thank u


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D K

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pardes mein........

«Reply #7 on: February 11, 2006, 11:17:40 PM »

how true

nice chanda


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isha_verma7

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pardes mein........

«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2006, 11:27:25 PM »

bahut achaa likha chanda!!!!!!!!!


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Pooja

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pardes mein........

«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2006, 12:03:39 AM »

GOOD ONE CHANDA


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