PAYAAR

by Amit Janglan on August 15, 2004, 11:13:33 AM
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Amit Janglan
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Bharaa nhin jo bhaon se,
Bhahati jisamen rasdhaar nhin.
Aadami nhin vah patthhar hai ,
Jisamen sav desh se payaar nhin.
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2004, 10:36:47 PM »
bahoot khoob Amit.
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sanju
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2004, 05:26:31 AM »
:thumb:  ^^
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nishita
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2004, 07:05:43 AM »
cool !!
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #4 on: August 18, 2004, 07:50:12 PM »
"ae mere pyaarey vatan
ae mere bichhdey chaman
tujhhpey dil kurbaan
tu he meri aarzoo
tu he meri aabroo
tu he meri jaan."
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Beena Jain
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«Reply #5 on: August 18, 2004, 08:02:24 PM »
Amit ji aap please apni kavita ko quotes mein kariye kyunki vo kavita kisi aur ne india ki independence ke duraan likhi hei aur is tharhaa se hei,

"bharaa nahin jo bhhaavon se
behthi jismein rasdhhaar nahin
vo hridhei nahin hei patthhar hei
jismein swadesh ka pyaar nahin."

Aapney hridhei (dil) ki jagha aadmi karkey kavita ko apna kaisey bana liya? Kya mein samjhoon ki aap mein dil nahin hei? Please excuse me for correcting you!
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mateen govindvi
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«Reply #6 on: August 19, 2004, 11:07:00 AM »
watan pe marne walo ki kami nahi hai yahape
har ek marne ko tayaar hai yahape
dushmano ab koi aur jagah dhoondlo jahaan me
ab tumhari nahi chalegi yahape
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2004, 07:09:01 AM »
Quote from: "Beena Jain"
Amit ji aap please apni kavita ko quotes mein kariye kyunki vo kavita kisi aur ne india ki independence ke duraan likhi hei aur is tharhaa se hei,

"bharaa nahin jo bhhaavon se
behthi jismein rasdhhaar nahin
vo hridhei nahin hei patthhar hei
jismein swadesh ka pyaar nahin."

Aapney hridhei (dil) ki jagha aadmi karkey kavita ko apna kaisey bana liya? Kya mein samjhoon ki aap mein dil nahin hei? Please excuse me for correcting you!

Beena Ji.....

Milna hou tou mil,magar hum to desh ki pargati ko taras te hain.
Na tum hou khuda jayse, na hum farishte hain.

Aap boli sahi, kayaa apako apane desh se payaar nhin,
Humare purkhon ke raste par,aage badne ke huqdaar nhin.

Dil laakh 84 yoniyon main hota hai, par aadami sabse alag hota hai .usmen dil bhi hai, dhadkan bhi, sabase badi baat wo azaad hai desh ke bhale ya bure aur aage badne ke bare main sabse jayadaa soch sakata hai.Agar apako ye baaten buri lagen to I M VERY SORRY.
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Pooja
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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2004, 10:10:40 PM »
Nice Amit!!!
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #9 on: November 08, 2004, 01:59:21 PM »
Thanx.............. Pooja.
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #10 on: November 08, 2004, 02:00:39 PM »
Quote from: "mateen govindvi"
watan pe marne walo ki kami nahi hai yahape
har ek marne ko tayaar hai yahape
dushmano ab koi aur jagah dhoondlo jahaan me
ab tumhari nahi chalegi yahape


mateen g bahut khub
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #11 on: November 08, 2004, 02:06:47 PM »
Thanx.....nishita.............. ,sanju,......... Pooja.
duniyan main hai to bas ek pyaar hai
bakee sabh hai to wo udhaar hai
 udhaar hai,  udhaar hai,  udhaar hai.
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Pooja
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«Reply #12 on: November 08, 2004, 05:51:54 PM »
apki yah baat
saweekar hai, saweekar hai, saweekar hai!!!!!!!!
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Amit Janglan
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«Reply #13 on: November 09, 2004, 12:56:17 PM »
hum bhi lachaar hain, hum bhi lachaar hain,hum bhi lachaar hain.
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sharmaarunkumar
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«Reply #14 on: December 01, 2004, 09:20:31 AM »
Very Nice all!
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