Shudhh Hindi Kavita Thread : Deshbhakit pe -Panna 2:Shairy-E-Watan

Shikha12

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«Reply #15 on: February 19, 2008, 10:07:50 AM »

Wow... That's So Perfect Zakhmola...


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Pooja

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Re: Shudhh Hindi Kavita Thread : Deshbhakit pe

«Reply #16 on: February 19, 2008, 04:52:36 PM »

bahoot khoob Ricky, Roja and Zakhmola ji!!


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punam

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Re: Shudhh Hindi Kavita Thread : Deshbhakit pe

«Reply #17 on: February 21, 2008, 12:25:22 PM »

Bahot khoob Ricky ji..Bahot hi acha likha Maa Tujhe praanam...

Quote from: Ricky on February 18, 2008, 06:57:34 PM

So no one else tried!

I found my this thread again via "More Similar Poetry and Posts" .
I will try to go more Hindi on Deshbhakti soon!

chalo let me try... pata nahi kitna safal hungi..par try kar rahi kuch..

mandir jab koi upasak jaate hai
seva me kuch bhent woh saath laate hai

Maa dekh teri iss santan ko
tere paas aaj khaali haath aayi hai

kaise karun teri jay gaan main
mere swar me maadhurya bhi nahi hai

prakat karun kaise tere saamne mann ke bhav
prakat karne meri vani me chaaturya bhi nahi hai

main prem ki pyasi hriday(dil) dikhane aayi hun
hai isme tere liye shradha bhakti bas wahi saath main layi hun...


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Roja

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Re: Shudhh Hindi Kavita Thread : Deshbhakit pe

«Reply #18 on: February 22, 2008, 12:29:56 AM »

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vytha suno koyi meri bhi
mujko meri raah bata do
bhatak raha hai kyon mann mera
mujko koyi aaj bata do...

main man ko kaise samjhaun...

zakhmola ji... bahut accha likha hai aapne.


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Roja

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Re: Shudhh Hindi Kavita Thread : Deshbhakit pe

«Reply #19 on: February 22, 2008, 12:32:06 AM »

Quote from: punam on February 21, 2008, 12:25:22 PM

Bahot khoob Ricky ji..Bahot hi acha likha Maa Tujhe praanam...

Quote from: Ricky on February 18, 2008, 06:57:34 PM

So no one else tried!

I found my this thread again via "More Similar Poetry and Posts" .
I will try to go more Hindi on Deshbhakti soon!

Last four lines mujhe bahut accha laga padkar. Good efforts dear.
Accha likhi hai Punam.. Keep up.


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