Swadheenata ke adheen 61 saal !

by CHARVI_BOHARA on October 12, 2008, 04:19:10 AM
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 Swadheenata ke adheen 61 saal !
 Kaisi mand ye pragtee vishal ?
 Prarambh the janha se, aaj bhi wanha,
 Wo vishva guru bharat na jane kanha ?
 Bagdor bhavishya ke hatho.n me.
 Wo vartaman kanha ? jiski bhoot hai chatta.n,
 Har pal marti samvedana,
 Ankho.n se jhalkati bas vedana,
 Bhrashtachar ka ye khel saara.
 Phir bhi shishtachar ke liye, bhrashtachar ka sahara ?
 Har roj bikata iman, badi safai se imandar hota be-iman,
 Ro ro kar ab to bharat maa bhi haar chuki,
 Lokatantra ke daman ko-
 Be-imano.n ki goliya.n kai bar daag chuki,
 Khone paane ki udhed bun me,
 Abhinav bharat ka ye palata sapana,
 Kanhi sapana na rah jaaye !
 Chalo jaage ! phir se vishva guru kahalaye


 Charvi Bohara
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2008, 08:23:32 AM »
Nice One Charvi Ji,.
Achcha Laga Pardkar,.
Aur Bhi Achcha Hota, Agar Aap Aasaan Hindi Ke Shab Prayog Karte,.
Nice One,.
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2008, 05:01:20 AM »
Nice One Charvi Ji,.
Achcha Laga Pardkar,.
Aur Bhi Achcha Hota, Agar Aap Aasaan Hindi Ke Shab Prayog Karte,.
Nice One,.

shukriya aapko meri koshish achhi lagi,
saral hindi shabdo.n ka prayog isliye nahi kiya kyonki mene swadheenata par likhane ki koshish ki jo khud bahut majboot hai.

ese hi sath dete rahe

charvi
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2008, 05:04:16 AM »
accha likha hai aapne Charvi ji  Applause aap eisa hi kalam pesh karte rehna  Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: October 19, 2008, 07:42:17 AM »
Noder Aapka Signature Achcha Laga,.
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«Reply #5 on: October 22, 2008, 01:22:04 PM »
kareeb 2 sal ke bad aap logo ke samne,meri kuch rachanaye rakh rhi hu,aasha karti hu aap logo ka sath milega...

 
 Swadheenata ke adheen 61 saal !
 Kaisi mand ye pragtee vishal ?
 Prarambh the janha se, aaj bhi wanha,
 Wo vishva guru bharat na jane kanha ?
 Bagdor bhavishya ke hatho.n me.
 Wo vartaman kanha ? jiski bhoot hai chatta.n,
 Har pal marti samvedana,
 Ankho.n se jhalkati bas vedana,
 Bhrashtachar ka ye khel saara.
 Phir bhi shishtachar ke liye, bhrashtachar ka sahara ?
 Har roj bikata iman, badi safai se imandar hota be-iman,
 Ro ro kar ab to bharat maa bhi haar chuki,
 Lokatantra ke daman ko-
 Be-imano.n ki goliya.n kai bar daag chuki,
 Khone paane ki udhed bun me,
 Abhinav bharat ka ye palata sapana,
 Kanhi sapana na rah jaaye !
 Chalo jaage ! phir se vishva guru kahalaye


 Charvi Bohara

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