watan ke bachhe

by ashutosh singh on December 05, 2009, 11:10:18 AM
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 :'(jab se sansein mili jeene ki
ek khwab samne aaya;
sewa karu us maa ki;
jisne jeena sikhaya,
jab tha nadan kewal samaj raha tha jise;
aaj samaj samaj ke un rah par;
jisne jeena sikhaya;
hum jis watan ke
us mitti ki saugandh
karenge sewa uski
jisne gir ke uthna sikhaya;
mere bhaiyo ek sandesh hai us maa ka;
jisse aaj mai kehna chata hu;
prem se rishto ki jholi bhar lo
sare gile shikwe dur kar lo;
na majhab na jati ho;
bas hoto ek awaaz;
hum sab bhai bhai ho,
aage maa ne kaha
"us din mai chaain ke neeend lungi
jis din mere bache dhartimata ke sache bachche honge;





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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2009, 05:39:02 AM »
 :icon_salut:Ashutosh ji bahut acha soch hai aapke .excellent creation,bahut khoob Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2009, 08:20:59 AM »
Nice
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riyaz106
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2009, 10:28:38 AM »
Bahut achhi creation hai Singh Sahab. Thanks for creation.
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rkswatian
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2009, 10:31:31 AM »
Very Very Nice Bro
Lagey rahu Mere Bhai
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aakadere29
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2009, 09:01:09 AM »
Bahut achhi creation hai Singh Sahab. Thanks for creation.
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