ye sahar......

by NETRAPAL on December 02, 2008, 10:00:58 AM
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NETRAPAL
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kaise ye sahar najar aa rahe hai
badle badle haalaat najar aa rahe  hai
raat kee roshnee me jagmane wale
andhkaar me dube najar aa rahe hai

madhoshe ka aalam jahaa hotaa tha
madeerao kaa dor jahaa chaltaa tha
thirkte the badan gunth kar aaps me
waha murde jism najar aa rahe hai
deewaro par jhaalar hotee thee jaha
khoone-nishaan najar aa rahe hai..

ye haalaat kyaa badal jaayenge
kyaa ye sahar fir jagmagaayenge
uthee gee tarange kya fir dilo me
kya sajegee mafile aashiyaano me
kyaa pyaale fir khankhaayenge
ye hallat kya fir badal jayenge

apne hee ghaav se fir ro utha hai bhaarat
apne pe kyo sharminda hai aaj bhaarat
kyaa wo wakt bhee ayegaa
tirangaa shaan se lahraayegaa
nahi dekhengee arhthiyaa shamsaan me
kabristaan bhee veeraa najar aayegaa..

kya ye hallat najar aa rahe hai
sawaal hai kai jahan me hamare tumhare
rahnumano se ham kar rahe hai
fir rahe hai chupaa kar muh aapnaa
ye begairaat aaj bhee muskaraa rahe hai..



netra..
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2008, 10:02:18 AM »
Nice Netrapal Ji
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: December 02, 2008, 10:38:09 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Khoob likha hai aapne Netra Ji..
Aap ke likhe ki tareef karne lageinge, toh shayad waqt ki aur shabdon ki kami pad jaaye...
Haan.. Itna jaroor kaheinge.. "Subhaan-Allah"

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«Reply #3 on: December 02, 2008, 10:49:29 AM »
Netra

Excellent! Applause Applause Applause

Keep the fire of revolutionary writing burning Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: December 02, 2008, 11:07:48 AM »
Bohata Badhiya Netrapal Bhai,.
Har Baar Ki Tarah Badhiya Likha Hai,.
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asma zehra
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«Reply #5 on: December 02, 2008, 11:37:39 AM »

HAR DIL KE AB JAZBAAT EK HAIN
DIL MEIN LAGI AAG AUR HAALAAT EK HAIN
WOH SAMJHEINGE HUM KO KAMZOR MAGAR
HUM-VATAN, HUM-HINDUSTAAN EK HAIN

IS GHAAV SE PHIR UBHREGAA BHARAT
KHUD PE NA SHARMINDA  HOGA BHARAT
NA JALENGI CHITAAEN PHIR SHAMSHAANON MEIN
HUM-SANKALP, HUM-HINDUSTAAN EK HAIN


Don't you worry Netrapal Bhai, India is one and we will defeat our enemies. Thumbs UP



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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #6 on: December 02, 2008, 11:39:44 AM »
thanks rajesh harish ji, mahiya ji, rajbir ji, jansheen bahyee
for replies...

netra...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #7 on: December 02, 2008, 11:41:10 AM »
HAR DIL KE AB JAZBAAT EK HAIN
DIL MEIN LAGI AAG AUR HAALAAT EK HAIN
WOH SAMJHEINGE HUM KO KAMZOR MAGAR
HUM-VATAN, HUM-HINDUSTAAN EK HAIN

IS GHAAV SE PHIR UBHREGAA BHARAT
KHUD PE NA SHARMINDA  HOGA BHARAT
NA JALENGI CHITAAEN PHIR SHAMSHAANON MEIN
HUM-SANKALP, HUM-HINDUSTAAN EK HAIN


Don't you worry Netrapal Bhai, India is one and we will defeat our enemies. Thumbs UP

thanks aasmaa zehera ji

netra..


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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #8 on: December 02, 2008, 02:44:31 PM »
Bohat khoob Netra jee jitni tareef ki jay kam hain  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


HAR DIL KE AB JAZBAAT EK HAIN
DIL MEIN LAGI AAG AUR HAALAAT EK HAIN
WOH SAMJHEINGE HUM KO KAMZOR MAGAR
HUM-VATAN, HUM-HINDUSTAAN EK HAIN

IS GHAAV SE PHIR UBHREGAA BHARAT
KHUD PE NA SHARMINDA  HOGA BHARAT
NA JALENGI CHITAAEN PHIR SHAMSHAANON MEIN
HUM-SANKALP, HUM-HINDUSTAAN EK HAIN

Don't you worry Netrapal Bhai, India is one and we will defeat our enemies. Thumbs UP


Tum kaha chupi thi ab tak hame to netra jee ki rachna kheech layee thi lekin jab tumhe pada to aisa laga SONE PE SUHAGA beautiful aasma Keep writing hame bhi seekhne milega tumse
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«Reply #9 on: December 02, 2008, 07:05:25 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
Bohat khoob Netra ji kamaal ka likha hai
hamesha ki tarha badhiya keep it up...


Very nice lines asma ji Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: December 02, 2008, 08:42:56 PM »
YAAD aa rahi hai, teri yaaad aa rahi hai
yaad aaney sey, tere janey sey, jaan ja rahi hai
teri yaad aa rahi hai
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: December 02, 2008, 09:07:10 PM »
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahoot khoob Netra ji and Asma ji!!, kamal ka likha hai app dono ne!!
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2008, 04:38:15 AM »
thanks sajid ji, honey ji, jasbir singh ji, pooja ji.....for reply....

netra...
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NETRAPAL
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2008, 04:47:50 AM »
jaane kyoo udaas hoo mai
ansoo baha rahaa hoo mai
tees bakee thee poorane
ghaavo kee hee abhee
fir ghaayal ho gayaa hoo mai

jeeta tha sar udha kar kabhee
lahraataa tha pawan ke saath
kesariya or hare rang ke saath
maan badhaate the jawaan
seemao par lahraa kar mujhe

ro rahaa hoo aaj mai tirangaa
lipta kar saheedo ke khoon se
mai kasoor waar ho gayaa hoo
arthiyo se lipat gayaa hoo
kaise ajeeb hai janmdaataa mere
unhee se mai aaj jhuk gayaa hoo

lo aaj jhuk gayaa hoo mai
sharmsaar ho gyaa hoo mai
lahraayaa tha kabhee olampic me
aaj fir jhuk gayaa hoo mai..



netra..
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Pooja
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«Reply #14 on: December 03, 2008, 05:06:52 AM »
bahoot khoob netra ji
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