ye sahar...... -Panna 2:Shairy-E-Watan

jasbirsingh

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«Reply #15 on: December 03, 2008, 06:30:39 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on December 03, 2008, 04:47:50 AM

jaane kyoo udaas hoo mai
ansoo baha rahaa hoo mai
tees bakee thee poorane
ghaavo kee hee abhee
fir ghaayal ho gayaa hoo mai

jeeta tha sar udha kar kabhee
lahraataa tha pawan ke saath
kesariya or hare rang ke saath
maan badhaate the jawaan
seemao par lahraa kar mujhe

ro rahaa hoo aaj mai tirangaa
lipta kar saheedo ke khoon se
mai kasoor waar ho gayaa hoo
arthiyo se lipat gayaa hoo
kaise ajeeb hai janmdaataa mere
unhee se mai aaj jhuk gayaa hoo

lo aaj jhuk gayaa hoo mai
sharmsaar ho gyaa hoo mai
lahraayaa tha kabhee olampic me
aaj fir jhuk gayaa hoo mai..

netra..

Very nice Netra

Jasbir Singh


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NETRAPAL

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Re: ye sahar......

«Reply #16 on: December 03, 2008, 07:15:42 AM »

thanks jasbeer ji and pooja ji

netra...


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Prateek Mardia

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Re: ye sahar......

«Reply #17 on: December 05, 2008, 03:42:30 AM »

Aapki kalam sada satya ke atyant nazdeek rehti he aur bahut sashakt hein. Bahut acchi rachna.


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Deepati

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Re: ye sahar......

«Reply #18 on: December 05, 2008, 05:30:44 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on December 02, 2008, 10:00:58 AM

kaise ye sahar najar aa rahe hai
badle badle haalaat najar aa rahe hai
raat kee roshnee me jagmane wale
andhkaar me dube najar aa rahe hai

madhoshe ka aalam jahaa hotaa tha
madeerao kaa dor jahaa chaltaa tha
thirkte the badan gunth kar aaps me
waha murde jism najar aa rahe hai
deewaro par jhaalar hotee thee jaha
khoone-nishaan najar aa rahe hai..

ye haalaat kyaa badal jaayenge
kyaa ye sahar fir jagmagaayenge
uthee gee tarange kya fir dilo me
kya sajegee mafile aashiyaano me
kyaa pyaale fir khankhaayenge
ye hallat kya fir badal jayenge

apne hee ghaav se fir ro utha hai bhaarat
apne pe kyo sharminda hai aaj bhaarat
kyaa wo wakt bhee ayegaa
tirangaa shaan se lahraayegaa
nahi dekhengee arhthiyaa shamsaan me
kabristaan bhee veeraa najar aayegaa..

kya ye hallat najar aa rahe hai
sawaal hai kai jahan me hamare tumhare
rahnumano se ham kar rahe hai
fir rahe hai chupaa kar muh aapnaa
ye begairaat aaj bhee muskaraa rahe hai..

netra..

Very nice, Netrapal Ji


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Deepati

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Re: ye sahar......

«Reply #19 on: December 05, 2008, 05:32:54 AM »

Quote from: asma zehra on December 02, 2008, 11:37:39 AM

HAR DIL KE AB JAZBAAT EK HAIN
DIL MEIN LAGI AAG AUR HAALAAT EK HAIN
WOH SAMJHEINGE HUM KO KAMZOR MAGAR
HUM-VATAN, HUM-HINDUSTAAN EK HAIN

IS GHAAV SE PHIR UBHREGAA BHARAT
KHUD PE NA SHARMINDA HOGA BHARAT
NA JALENGI CHITAAEN PHIR SHAMSHAANON MEIN
HUM-SANKALP, HUM-HINDUSTAAN EK HAIN

Bahut khoob, Asma Ji


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Deepati

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Re: ye sahar......

«Reply #20 on: December 05, 2008, 05:35:20 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 02, 2008, 08:42:56 PM

YAAD aa rahi hai, teri yaaad aa rahi hai
yaad aaney sey, tere janey sey, jaan ja rahi hai
teri yaad aa rahi hai

Jasbir Ji, aapko kiski yaad aa rahi hai?


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NETRAPAL

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Re: ye sahar......

«Reply #21 on: December 05, 2008, 10:46:53 AM »

thanks prateek ji, deepti ji for reply

netra....


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jasbirsingh

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Re: ye sahar......

«Reply #22 on: December 05, 2008, 11:08:39 AM »

Quote from: Deepati on December 05, 2008, 05:35:20 AM

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 02, 2008, 08:42:56 PM

YAAD aa rahi hai, teri yaaad aa rahi hai
yaad aaney sey, tere janey sey, jaan ja rahi hai
teri yaad aa rahi hai

Jasbir Ji, aapko kiski yaad aa rahi hai?

DEEPATI,

Yeh galti sey yaha paste ho gaya. Yeh Antaksri meh paste karna tha par sach toh yeh hai,

YAAD AATI REHTI HAI, DI TADAPTA REHTA HAI
KAHA KHO GAYE HO TUM, DIL TARASTA REHTA HAI

JASBIR SINGH


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Re: ye sahar......

«Reply #23 on: December 07, 2008, 11:36:36 AM »

Bohat Badhiya Netra Bhai,.


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«Reply #24 on: December 08, 2008, 03:55:33 AM »

Quote from: Jaanasheen on December 07, 2008, 11:36:36 AM

Bohat Badhiya Netra Bhai,.

bahut bahut shukriya Jaanasheen ji,

netra...


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«Reply #25 on: December 08, 2008, 08:14:39 AM »

Quote from: NETRAPAL on December 08, 2008, 03:55:33 AM

bahut bahut shukriya Jaanasheen ji,

netra...

U Are Welcome Bhai,.
Jab Aap Watan Ke Baare Mein Likhte Ho,.
Mujhe Pardhna Bohat Achcha Lagta Hai,.'
Aap YUnhi Likhte Raho,.
Mohabbat Phailaate Raho,.


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«Reply #26 on: December 09, 2008, 10:24:26 PM »

Jaha Jaanasheen aor Netrapal ji dono ho.. wah kamal@dhamal ho jaata hai...


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Re: ye sahar......

«Reply #27 on: December 15, 2008, 01:49:32 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on December 09, 2008, 10:24:26 PM

Jaha Jaanasheen aor Netrapal ji dono ho.. wah kamal@dhamal ho jaata hai...

[b}Shukriya Didi,.

Waise Humne Kuch Likha Hi Nahi,.


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