अव्वल वतन

by suman59 on January 21, 2013, 08:49:01 AM
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नज़रों में हमारी रहती हर एक शय
कभी तो इसमें अव्वल वतन करो
अपने लिए हुए  कोल्हू के बैल हम
वतन के वास्ते भी कोई जतन करो
फ़िक्र  अपने कल की सबको है मगर
कभी-कभी तो किया फिक्रे वतन करो
अपने वजूद  के लिए क्या नहीं किया
अपनी रिदा कभी इस पर गगन करो
काम तो हजारों है हमारी हयात में
काम इसका भी लगाकर जहन करो
सब कुछ दिया पर कुछ मांगता नहीं
किरदार में अपने इसके लिए वजन  करो
वजूद से इसके तुम्हारा वजूद है
सरहदों पे इसकी फ़िदा जानों तन करो
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #1 on: January 21, 2013, 09:25:45 AM »
bahut khoob , patriotism se labrez kalaam . bahut mubarakbaad .
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azad mishra
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«Reply #2 on: January 21, 2013, 10:33:05 AM »
wah wah bahoot khoob sumanji
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«Reply #3 on: January 21, 2013, 11:31:22 AM »
Quote from: suman59 on January 21, 2013, 08:49:01 AM
नज़रों में हमारी रहती हर एक शय
कभी तो इसमें अव्वल वतन करो
अपने लिए हुए  कोल्हू के बैल हम
वतन के वास्ते भी कोई जतन करो
फ़िक्र  अपने कल की सबको है मगर
कभी-कभी तो किया फिक्रे वतन करो
अपने वजूद  के लिए क्या नहीं किया
अपनी रिदा कभी इस पर गगन करो
काम तो हजारों है हमारी हयात में
काम इसका भी लगाकर जहन करो
सब कुछ दिया पर कुछ मांगता नहीं
किरदार में अपने इसके लिए वजन  करो
वजूद से इसके तुम्हारा वजूद है
सरहदों पे इसकी फ़िदा जानों तन करो

bahut khoob......!
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«Reply #4 on: January 21, 2013, 12:19:49 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai bahut khoob suman jee
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«Reply #5 on: January 21, 2013, 02:59:45 PM »
waah waah waah bahut khoob dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: January 21, 2013, 03:05:33 PM »
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, bahut hi khoob Suman Jee, dheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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M.S Azam
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«Reply #7 on: January 22, 2013, 02:37:28 AM »
good ......
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2013, 10:49:31 AM »
Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 21, 2013, 09:25:45 AM
bahut khoob , patriotism se labrez kalaam . bahut mubarakbaad .

shukriya siddeiqui sb
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2013, 10:50:03 AM »
Quote from: azad mishra on January 21, 2013, 10:33:05 AM
wah wah bahoot khoob sumanji

thank you mishra jee
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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2013, 10:50:30 AM »
Quote from: aqsh on January 21, 2013, 12:19:49 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya baat hai bahut khoob suman jee

shukriya aqsh
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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2013, 10:51:04 AM »
Quote from: sksaini4 on January 21, 2013, 02:59:45 PM
waah waah waah bahut khoob dheron daad

shukriya aapka dr sb
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2013, 10:52:45 AM »
Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 21, 2013, 03:05:33 PM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, bahut hi khoob Suman Jee, dheroN daad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.


aapne pada aur tarif kiya aapka bahut bahut dhanyawad ahmad sb
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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2013, 10:53:11 AM »
Quote from: M.S Azam on January 22, 2013, 02:37:28 AM
good ......

thanks azam jee
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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2013, 11:14:16 AM »
waah, kya jazba hai watan parasti ka...bahut pasand aaya kalaam aapka...bahut bahut mubaarakbaad aapko Suman ji!!
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