कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?--------सृष्टिराज चिंतक

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कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?

गलियों के मुहानों पर
लग गए दरवाजे
बैठ गए गार्ड
कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?
चारों तरफ़ सी. सी. टीवी
मैटल डिटेक्टर
का जाल
कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?
कहीं सड़क रुकी
कहीं रेल रुकी
कहीं दंगा, कहीं बवाल
कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?
अपने ही घर में देते
आई. डी. प्रूफ
दिखलाते अपनी पहचान
कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?
छोटे - बड़े सेठ
खोल कर बैठे दुकान
सरकारी अफसरों सा ताम - झाम
कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?
उद्योगपतियों, फ़िल्म एक्टरों, नेताओं
क्रिकेटरों, धर्म-स्थानों के पास
दौलत रखी जंग खाए, कोई भूखा सो जाए
कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?
सदभावना के नाम पर
आक्रांता को बिरयानी खिलवाये
पेशेवर देश चलाएँ
कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?
वर्ष में दो बार
फुलाते सीना, गाते गाथाये
बाद में सब भूल जाएँ
कैसे आज़ाद हैं हम आज ?

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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2013, 04:48:26 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne Srishti Raj ji, bahut hi umdaa likhaa hai aapne aur ek ek shabd cheekh cheekh ke sachchaai bayaan kar rahaa hai, bahut khoobsoorat rachnaa... bahut umdaa...!!!
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2013, 01:48:16 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2013, 02:37:52 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2013, 08:45:45 AM »
bahut sunder
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2013, 08:48:38 AM »
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2013, 09:00:59 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2013, 10:54:39 AM »
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Bahut hi umda peshkash shrishtiraj ji.. har sher gehri soch aur sach se saji hui hai. dheron dheron daaaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #8 on: August 16, 2013, 11:07:16 AM »
achhi kavita hai shrishtiraj ji...daad sweekar kareN
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2013, 01:30:45 PM »
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very true..
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2013, 11:48:37 PM »
Many many thanks to all.
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