***Aisi Meri Kismat Kaha'n***

by AVTAR RAYAT on July 16, 2010, 10:46:52 AM
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Ek Din Mere Pyar Ne Mujhse Poocha:
Main Kaha'n Hu'n.....

Maine Kaha:
Mere Jism Mein...
Meri Jaan Mein...
Mere Dil Mein...
Mere Imaan Mein...
Meri Dhadkno'n Mein...
Meri Shaan Mein...
Meri Sanso'n Mein...
Jaane Kaha'n Kaha'n Mein...

Phir Usne Pucha...
Kaha'n Nahi Hu'n Main,

Maine Sar Jhuka Kar Jawaab Diya....
Meri Kismat Mein...!!!

AVTAR RAYAT
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2010, 11:10:16 AM »
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hmmmm.........

ek yehi wojagah hai jahan hona chahti thi main
aur dekho meri kismat wahin nahin hun main
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2010, 02:01:58 PM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Avtar ji....!!!
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2010, 04:52:11 AM »
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Quote from: AVTAR RAYAT on July 16, 2010, 10:46:52 AM
Ek Din Mere Pyar Ne Mujhse Poocha:
Main Kaha'n Hu'n.....

Maine Kaha:
Mere Jism Mein...
Meri Jaan Mein...
Mere Dil Mein...
Mere Imaan Mein...
Meri Dhadkno'n Mein...
Meri Shaan Mein...
Meri Sanso'n Mein...
Jaane Kaha'n Kaha'n Mein...

Phir Usne Pucha...
Kaha'n Nahi Hu'n Main,

Maine Sar Jhuka Kar Jawaab Diya....
Meri Kismat Mein...!!!

AVTAR RAYAT

Nice poetry........Avtar Ji ! dil se daad !
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«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2010, 03:11:36 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 16, 2010, 11:10:16 AM
hmmmm.........

ek yehi wojagah hai jahan hona chahti thi main
aur dekho meri kismat wahin nahin hun main

Bahut Bahut Shukria...Kasak Ji...Thanx....
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«Reply #5 on: July 21, 2010, 03:13:33 AM »
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Quote from: Anshumali on July 17, 2010, 04:52:11 AM
Nice poetry........Avtar Ji ! dil se daad !

Bahut Bahut Shukria...Anshu Ji...Thanx....
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«Reply #6 on: July 21, 2010, 03:14:39 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on July 16, 2010, 02:01:58 PM
bahut khoob likha hai aapne Avtar ji....!!!
Bahut Bahut Shukria...Klaskar Ji...Dhanyabaad....
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