***Asal Ishq Ki Baat***

by AVTAR RAYAT on January 09, 2010, 11:47:29 AM
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Apni Hokar Bhi Nahi Hai Ye Dunia Apni,
Kyo Na Apni Ek Alag Se Dunia Basaayi Jaye,

Zindagi Mein Gam Hein, Khushia Hein Bahut Kam,
Kyo Na Gamo Mein Hi Khushia Manaayi Jaye,

Yu To Hoti Hai Unse Har-Roj Kisi Na Kisi Baat Par Baatein
Kyo Na Aaj Unse Asal Ishq Ki Baat Chalaayi Jaye,

Chaahte Huye Bhi Unhein Apna Kyo Nahi Bana Paate
Kyo Na Mandir Jakar Bhagwan Ji Tak Ye Baat Pahuchaayi Jaaye.
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«Reply #1 on: January 09, 2010, 01:14:51 PM »
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kya baat hai avtar ji, der na karo ye baat to kar hi lo aap,
bahut aacha likha hai aap ne
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«Reply #2 on: January 09, 2010, 01:17:09 PM »
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GUD AR Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 10, 2010, 12:29:28 AM »
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Wow bahut hi khoob Avtar ji.marvelous creation.excellent. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2010, 11:17:15 AM »
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Nice Avtaar JI
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2010, 11:03:15 AM »
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Baadal Ji,,,Khamosh Ji,,,Madhu Ji,,,Rishi Ji...
Bahut-Bahut Shukria Aap Sab Ka,,,,
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