dadhkan

by saahill on December 08, 2009, 11:00:46 AM
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na jaane kyun aaj jindagi thoda rum si gayee
na jaane kyun aaj aankh gham mein nam si gayee
hum kehtey they use apni jindagi is tarah
jabse dil lekar woh humse dhoor chale gaye 
tab se hi is dil ki dadhkan tham si gayeee
na jaane kyun aaj phir aankh nam si gayee
na jaane kyun aaj dadhkan tham si gayee
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«Reply #1 on: December 08, 2009, 11:49:46 AM »
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its to good.... tearyeyed
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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2009, 01:13:40 PM »
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dharkanaen hain shull, palkaen nam see lagti hain
madhosh hai gham me zindigi apni, sansaen kam see lagti hain.

roklo begaanay, dard k fasaane tum, hum phir se jeena chaahte hain,
aajao paas, k tum bin adhoori raahaen khatm see lagti hain
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2009, 02:10:16 PM »
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Saahillji achhi lines hain aapki... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ek ehsaas eysa bhi hai...mulheja farmaiye...

Aahat se unki Dil ki Dhadkan badh si jaati hai
Chhuan se unki ek pal ko tou wo ruk si jaati hai
Garm sanso k milan se fir behadd badh jaati hai
Lub chup hain par ye haale-dil sunnati jaati hai


Quote from: saahill on December 08, 2009, 11:00:46 AM
na jaane kyun aaj jindagi thoda rum si gayee
na jaane kyun aaj aankh gham mein nam si gayee
hum kehtey they use apni jindagi is tarah
jabse dil lekar woh humse dhoor chale gaye 
tab se hi is dil ki dadhkan tham si gayeee
na jaane kyun aaj phir aankh nam si gayee
na jaane kyun aaj dadhkan tham si gayee
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2009, 03:28:10 PM »
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Nice creation Sahil and Good Responce Sidraah Sister & Koyal ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2009, 05:07:06 PM »
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Thanks Rishi-bhai......


Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on December 11, 2009, 03:28:10 PM
Nice creation Sahil and Good Responce Sidraah Sister & Koyal ji
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«Reply #6 on: December 14, 2009, 05:19:46 PM »
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Bahoot achhi lines likhi hain aapne Sidraji urf Aarjuji.. Applause Applause Applause

Jajba-ey-zindagi ko bkhoobi pehchana hai tune
Ab aaj phir se jeene ka dhunda bahaana hai tune

Dharkano aur jeevan k palon ka mat gin yu hisaab tu
Intzaar ki ghadiyen khtam se lagti hain,g-bhar g tu
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on December 08, 2009, 01:13:40 PM
dharkanaen hain shull, palkaen nam see lagti hain
madhosh hai gham me zindigi apni, sansaen kam see lagti hain.

roklo begaanay, dard k fasaane tum, hum phir se jeena chaahte hain,
aajao paas, k tum bin adhoori raahaen khatm see lagti hain
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«Reply #7 on: December 15, 2009, 02:22:28 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 14, 2009, 05:19:46 PM
Bahoot achhi lines likhi hain aapne Sidraji urf Aarjuji.. Applause Applause Applause

Jajba-ey-zindagi ko bkhoobi pehchana hai tune
Ab aaj phir se jeene ka dhunda bahaana hai tune

Dharkano aur jeevan k palon ka mat gin yu hisaab tu
Intzaar ki ghadiyen khtam se lagti hain,g-bhar g tu
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same to you, very nice words indeed

ye naam aapko kaise maloom hua? (aarzu?)
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«Reply #8 on: December 15, 2009, 07:51:25 AM »
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Kahti hu Shukriya aur dhanyawaad aapko Sidraji....for your kind words..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Jaanasheenji(Azeem...aaj kal..) ne jikra kiya tha kabhi....
Unhone Aarzu ki aarjoo ki thee kabhi...
Ajab ittefaaqe thaa India se duur USA mai they aap dono....
Yoindia par he huaa tha Rooh ka Rooh se milan....
Aage ka haal aap bataiyega..... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!



Quote from: anjaan dharkan on December 15, 2009, 02:22:28 AM
same to you, very nice words indeed

ye naam aapko kaise maloom hua? (aarzu?)
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«Reply #9 on: December 15, 2009, 01:11:21 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 15, 2009, 07:51:25 AM
Kahti hu Shukriya aur dhanyawaad aapko Sidraji....for your kind words..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Jaanasheenji(Azeem...aaj kal..) ne jikra kiya tha kabhi....
Unhone Aarzu ki aarjoo ki thee kabhi...
Ajab ittefaaqe thaa India se duur USA mai they aap dono....
Yoindia par he huaa tha Rooh ka Rooh se milan....
Aage ka haal aap bataiyega..... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Is it SO! Is it SO! Is it SO!




mere baare me itna sab kuch aap ko kaise maloom?

kya unse baat huwi aapki?
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«Reply #10 on: December 15, 2009, 04:19:39 PM »
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Kab aur kis-se hui baat Es raaj ko raaj he rehne do Aarzu-aapa
Hum tou be-taab hain anjaan dharkan ka haale-jigar jaan-ne ko love9 love9 love9 Winking Winking Winking

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on December 15, 2009, 01:11:21 PM
mere baare me itna sab kuch aap ko kaise maloom?

kya unse baat huwi aapki?
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«Reply #11 on: December 15, 2009, 04:48:01 PM »
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Bahut accha likha aapne saahil ji  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob Koyal ji & Ad ji...bahut badhiya... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: December 15, 2009, 05:11:46 PM »
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Thanks Pooja-di.....

Aaj kal paav jami par nahi padte hai tere Nikhaar-di
Na Jaane kin-kinke khayalo main udti-firti ho Pooja-di

Kuchh tou bataao kya haal hai teri Dhadkano ka.....

Quote from: Nikhaar on December 15, 2009, 04:48:01 PM
Bahut accha likha aapne saahil ji  Applause Applause Applause

Bahut khoob Koyal ji & Ad ji...bahut badhiya... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: December 15, 2009, 05:48:28 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on December 15, 2009, 05:11:46 PM
Thanks Pooja-di.....

Aaj kal paav jami par nahi padte hai tere Nikhaar-di
Na Jaane kin-kinke khayalo main udti-firti ho Pooja-di

Kuchh tou bataao kya haal hai teri Dhadkano ka.....

Btaayege tumhe apne dil ka haal, jo jaanne ko tu betaab hai
Par abhi btao tum,tumhari palkon mein kiska khwaab hai
Kaun hai wo jiske liye tumhari dhadkan gaa rahi ek naya raag hai... Winking

btao dear koyal....... Winking Winking Winking Winking
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«Reply #14 on: December 15, 2009, 06:10:58 PM »
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Haaye..haaye mar javan gur kha ke....ye kya puchh liya di.... Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking Winking

Tere he nakshe kadam par chal rahi hu pyari sakhi
Palkon mai jiska khawaab hai wo Aaftaab hai sakhi.... sunny sunny sunny

Roj usha ki sunhari kirno par baith kar aata hai wo
Nazren jhuki rehti hain,apni ushnta se gale lagta hai wo.... hello2 hello2

Sakhi kaise kahu kya kahu,khumaar kohra ban chha jaata hai
Mera mann bas oosi ke geet gaata-gungunaata chala jaata hai... love4 love4 love4

Quote from: Nikhaar on December 15, 2009, 05:48:28 PM
Btaayege tumhe apne dil ka haal, jo jaanne ko tu betaab hai
Par abhi btao tum,tumhari palkon mein kiska khwaab hai
Kaun hai wo jiske liye tumhari dhadkan gaa rahi ek naya raag hai... Winking

btao dear koyal....... Winking Winking Winking Winking
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