Ek Baar.........Tamanna1

by tamanna1 on September 13, 2011, 02:18:46 PM
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Ek baar mud kar hummari taraf tho dekhlo
Muje wahan aapke intizaar mein dekenge

Ek baar mere aankhon mein aankhen milaakar tho dekhlo
Aapko har ek sapna nazar aayenge

Ek baar meri aur do kadam badaakar tho dekhlo
Mera har ek kadam aapke saat honge

Ek baar meri haat thaam kar tho dekhlo
Hum jeevan bar aapke haath phir na chodenge

Ek baar dil lagaakar tho dekhlo
Mere dil ki darkan mein aapke naam sunaayi denge

Ek baar humara pyaar kubool karke tho dekhlo
Zindagi mein der saara pyaar
hum aapke kadmom mein barsaayenge
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«Reply #1 on: September 13, 2011, 02:57:11 PM »
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kya khoob kaha hai apne tamana ji
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«Reply #2 on: September 13, 2011, 04:05:45 PM »
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Tamanna Jee Aadaab!

Bahut khoob, behad achche ahsaas kahe hai aapne..
Humari daad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. Lekhni meiN sudhaar aata raheNga
Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez..           

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«Reply #3 on: September 14, 2011, 06:16:06 AM »
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 Thank you Saahill ji and Parvaaz ji.

Please do help me correct my lines if u find grammatical errors..I am learning still
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«Reply #4 on: September 14, 2011, 06:24:59 AM »
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very nice
every line has strength, full of emotions..let it be true...
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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2011, 06:34:59 AM »
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mkv JI...full of kind words from you yet again...Thank you icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: September 14, 2011, 06:43:49 AM »
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bahut ache ehsaas Tamanna1 ji --
keep writing
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«Reply #7 on: September 14, 2011, 06:57:00 AM »
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BEhad Achche Ehsas Tamana Ji Applause Applause
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