Intizaar

by tamanna1 on September 05, 2011, 05:52:18 AM
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Jab bi darwaaza koyi kat kataaye
Tho mein sochthi thi ke woh mere liye waapas aageye

Jab bi mere cell mein message aaye
Tho mein sochthi thi ke shaayad usne humko yaad kiya

Jab bi telephone ke ring sunaayi de
Tho mein sochthi thi ke shaayad woh mujse baat karna chathehein

Jab bi koyi chitti aathi he
Tho mein sochthi ke shaayad meri yaad mein kuch likha he woh

Yahin soch kar baiti rehethi hun
ke shaayad mere intizaar sacchayi mein badal jaaye.
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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2011, 05:59:20 AM »
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boht khoob .

Har awaaz main tere aane ki aahat mehsoos karta hoon .

Har shayari mein tujhe likhne ki koshish karta hoon .

Mehfil mein rehta hoon tanha tanha . Tanhai mein tuje apne pas mehsoos karta hoon.

Tere intzar mein maut bhi nahin aa sakti har roj khuda ko kitna preshan karta hoon
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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2011, 06:07:04 AM »
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hmm--
kuch apellings ka mistake hai.

Tamanna ji--ehsaas bht ache hain aapke
keep writing

khus rahiye

sukriya
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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2011, 06:22:19 AM »
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KIllBill ji...

I am not good in hindi...I am trying..never learnt that language...so please help me correct my spellings...i can change it and learn too..thank you.
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«Reply #4 on: September 05, 2011, 06:38:55 AM »
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Dear Tamanna
Never mind. Language and speech is not a problem.
Expression is the key.
Very good.
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«Reply #5 on: September 05, 2011, 06:45:49 AM »
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MKV JI....Thanks a ton for your kind words!! icon_flower
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«Reply #6 on: September 05, 2011, 07:05:36 AM »
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KIllBill ji...

I am not good in hindi...I am trying..never learnt that language...so please help me correct my spellings...i can change it and learn too..thank you.

Tamanna ji--
mkv ji ne sahi kaha xpression hi aham hota hai--
likhte rahiye aapki hindi bhi baht jald sudhar jayegi Usual Smile

sukriya
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«Reply #7 on: September 06, 2011, 03:42:07 AM »
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KillBill JI

Thank you
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«Reply #8 on: September 06, 2011, 10:13:40 AM »
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Jab bi darwaaza koyi kat kataaye
Tho mein sochthi thi ke woh mere liye waapas aageye

Jab bi mere cell mein message aaye
Tho mein sochthi thi ke shaayad usne humko yaad kiya

Jab bi telephone ke ring sunaayi de
Tho mein sochthi thi ke shaayad woh mujse baat karna chathehein

Jab bi koyi chitti aathi he
Tho mein sochthi ke shaayad meri yaad mein kuch likha he woh

Yahin soch kar baiti rehethi hun
ke shaayad mere intizaar sacchayi mein badal jaaye.



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«Reply #9 on: September 06, 2011, 10:50:08 AM »
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Bahut khoob Tamanna jee !

Achche ahsaas kaheN hai aapne ...
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...

Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez           

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