kash koi wo pal lauta de...

by Anamika Dwivedi on September 01, 2010, 08:07:10 PM

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Anamika Dwivedi

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Kyo hui ye raat hai...
Baadlo ne chand ko ghera hai...
Dhadkano ki gati tez hai...
Har taraf neeravta ka dera hai...

Jane kyo unke intzar me...
Ye nayan ratjaga karte hain...
Unke aane ki aahat ko...
Ye karn sannata harte hain...

Kash koi wo pal lauta de...
Jo humne saath bitaye hain...
Ya fir koi naye pal de jaye...
Jo unki yaad hume na aaye...


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Re: kash koi wo pal lauta de...

«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2010, 08:18:33 PM »

waahhhhhhhh....kya khub kaha hai anamika ji.....bht pyara hai..yunhi likhte rahiye


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Re: kash koi wo pal lauta de...

«Reply #2 on: September 02, 2010, 12:39:59 AM »

Anamika ji bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... and welcome to Yoindia.... aap yunhi likhte rahiye aur humein apne khoobsurat lekh padhne ka mauka dete rahiye... intezaar rahega aapke agle post ka ... thanks in advance...!!!


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Re: kash koi wo pal lauta de...

«Reply #3 on: September 02, 2010, 03:42:48 AM »

Anamika jee. akhri do lines toh humare dil ki baat likhdi apne..Behad khubsoorat..Badi anokhi tamanna hai kay koi woh pal lauta de ya ek naya haath zindagi dila de..! Bahaut khoob..!

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Re: kash koi wo pal lauta de...

«Reply #4 on: September 04, 2010, 09:35:50 PM »

Thanks to all of u to consider it....
Thanks a lot...


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Re: kash koi wo pal lauta de...

«Reply #5 on: September 04, 2010, 10:02:13 PM »

Achche ashaar hai Anamikaa Jee Daad ....

Likhati rahiye.... Khush rahiye.....

Woh laute nahi kabhi guzare huye lamhoN ki tarha
Hum bhool nahi paaye nikle huye lafzoN ki tarha