kiya na phir bhi koi shikva

by nandbahu on August 04, 2012, 12:11:49 AM
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वो आज आये अपने घर, में केसे हम यकीन करे
जागते हुए में जेसे हम, सपना कोई नया देखे

घर का कोना कोना चमका, आज उनके आने से
दरवाजे लगी लता बेल भी, झुक के उनके कदम चूमे

उनकी हसी से गुजां घर, अल्हर सी मस्ती छाई आज
मासूम रूप को देख देख, अपने पे इतरायें आज

बचपन की बातें करों याद, रेत के महल बनाते थे
सागर किनारे बैठे हम, डूबते सूरज को तकते थे

अब तो जाओगे न साथी, हमसे करो ये वादा
तरसाया तुमने हमको मगर, किया न फिर भी कोई शिकवा

Woh aaj aaye apne ghar mein, kaise hum yakeen karey
Jagtey huye mein jaise hum, sapna koi naya dekhey

Ghar ka kon kona chamka, aaj unkey aaney se
Darvaje kagee lata bel bhi, jhuk keu unkey kadam chumey

Unki hasi se gunja ghar, alhar si masti chhayee aaj
Masoom roop ko dekh dekh, apne pey itraye aaj

Bachpan ki batein karo yad, ret key mahal banatey thhey
Sagar kinarey baithey hum, doobtey suraj ko taktey thhey

Ab toh jaogey na sathi, humse karo ye vada
Tarsaya tumney humko magar, Kiya na phir bhi koi shikwa
 
 
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«Reply #1 on: August 04, 2012, 03:49:28 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 04, 2012, 04:59:59 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 04, 2012, 06:19:18 AM »
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वो आज आये अपने घर, में केसे हम यकीन करे
जागते हुए में जेसे हम, सपना कोई नया देखे

घर का कोना कोना चमका, आज उनके आने से
दरवाजे लगी लता बेल भी, झुक के उनके कदम चूमे

उनकी हसी से गुजां घर, अल्हर सी मस्ती छाई आज
मासूम रूप को देख देख, अपने पे इतरायें आज

बचपन की बातें करों याद, रेत के महल बनाते थे
सागर किनारे बैठे हम, डूबते सूरज को तकते थे

अब तो जाओगे न साथी, हमसे करो ये वादा
तरसाया तुमने हमको मगर, किया न फिर भी कोई शिकवा

Woh aaj aaye apne ghar mein, kaise hum yakeen karey
Jagtey huye mein jaise hum, sapna koi naya dekhey

Ghar ka kon kona chamka, aaj unkey aaney se
Darvaje kagee lata bel bhi, jhuk keu unkey kadam chumey

Unki hasi se gunja ghar, alhar si masti chhayee aaj
Masoom roop ko dekh dekh, apne pey itraye aaj

Bachpan ki batein karo yad, ret key mahal banatey thhey
Sagar kinarey baithey hum, doobtey suraj ko taktey thhey

Ab toh jaogey na sathi, humse karo ye vada
Tarsaya tumney humko magar, Kiya na phir bhi koi shikwa
 
 

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«Reply #4 on: August 04, 2012, 08:50:42 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:bahut sundar bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne nandbahu ji... bahut achcha lagaa padh ke... do line likhe bina raha nahi gayaa.... ummeed karta hoon aapko bura nahi lagega ...!!!

aaaye hain to naa jaayenge,
ab saath ta-umra nibhaayenge,
tumse shuru ho tumpe khatam ho,
zindagi ab hum yun bitaayenge...
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«Reply #5 on: August 04, 2012, 10:04:10 AM »
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धन्यवाद सैनी जी
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धन्यवाद आरिश जी
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धन्यवाद खामोश जी
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«Reply #8 on: August 04, 2012, 10:08:40 AM »
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dhanyavad hirday ji, Aap ney kavita key aagey ki lines ko pura karney ki sochi, aise hi hausal badhatey rahiyega
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«Reply #9 on: August 04, 2012, 10:14:11 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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