mai aaj baitha sochta hu

by amit.koc on December 28, 2012, 02:28:38 PM
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Mai aaj baitha sochta hu,
kya mujhe tabse hua hai,
ik jhalak dekhu na unko,
kya wo pal maine jiya hai,
her taraf mere base wo,
meri to bus ye dua hai,
rog jo mujhko laga tha,
kya wahi unko hua hai,
jab nahi wo baat kerte,
ye jaha sab ruk gaya hai,
meri sanse chhup gai hai,
mera dil bhi tham gaya hai,
dekhle wo ik jhalak jo,
kya kahu kaisa laga hai,
dekhker youn ishq unka,
mera ik aansu gira hai,

aaj paker unko jana,
Ishq ke is silsile mai,
her gali jannat basi hai
her kadam phulon saja hai.....
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2012, 02:29:16 PM »
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Mai aaj baitha sochta hu,
kya mujhe tabse hua hai,
ik jhalak dekhu na unko,
kya wo pal maine jiya hai,
her taraf mere base wo,
meri to bus ye dua hai,
rog jo mujhko laga tha,
kya wahi unko hua hai,
jab nahi wo baat kerte,
ye jaha sab ruk gaya hai,
meri sanse chhup gai hai,
mera dil bhi tham gaya hai,
dekhle wo ik jhalak jo,
kya kahu kaisa laga hai,
dekhker youn ishq unka,
mera ik aansu gira hai,

aaj paker unko jana,
Ishq ke is silsile mai,
her gali jannat basi hai
her kadam phulon saja hai.....
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2012, 03:05:39 PM »
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Mai aaj baitha sochta hu,
kya mujhe tabse hua hai,
ik jhalak dekhu na unko,
kya wo pal maine jiya hai,
her taraf mere base wo,
meri to bus ye dua hai,
rog jo mujhko laga tha,
kya wahi unko hua hai,
jab nahi wo baat kerte,
ye jaha sab ruk gaya hai,
meri sanse chhup gai hai,
mera dil bhi tham gaya hai,
dekhle wo ik jhalak jo,
kya kahu kaisa laga hai,
dekhker youn ishq unka,
mera ik aansu gira hai,

aaj paker unko jana,
Ishq ke is silsile mai,
her gali jannat basi hai
her kadam phulon saja hai.....

good one sir
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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2012, 03:23:22 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: December 28, 2012, 07:05:35 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  waah waah.. nice sharing Amit ji....!!!Agar ye aapki apne likhi hui hai to Shared section me post naa karein. Abhi aapne ise shared section me post kiya huwaa hai.
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2012, 03:22:15 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  waah waah.. nice sharing Amit ji....!!!Agar ye aapki apne likhi hui hai to Shared section me post naa karein. Abhi aapne ise shared section me post kiya huwaa hai.
actually i am new here. so i am sure ki kaha post kerna chahiye. thanks for your valuable advise
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Jab aap koi post submit karne k liye 'Submit Poetry' pe click karte hain, ek drop down aataa hai jahaan se aap category select karte hain. Uske andar 'Shayri (Poetry) or Shayari' me kai saare options hai.. aap apne poem ke hisaab se sahi category select kar ke wahaan daal dijiyega.
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