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chod sari duniya hum kahin or hi ji rahe the tanha kabhi akele khud ko hasaa rahe the jab tak tu nahi thi meri zindagi mein hum har Lamhe ko badi shidat se ji rahe the.... Anil R Bhardwaj mail at:- anilrbhardwaj@gmail.com
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«Reply #1 on: December 16, 2010, 07:56:33 AM » |
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nice keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: December 16, 2010, 08:16:17 AM » |
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thanx Saahil i'll do my best
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«Reply #3 on: December 16, 2010, 08:24:53 AM » |
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apni koshish ko hameshan anjaam dete rehne kalam ko apni jubaan dete rehna na samhna ke tum ho tanha is jahaan mein bas apne shayar hone ki pehchaan dete rehna
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«Reply #4 on: December 16, 2010, 08:27:55 AM » |
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pehchann toh abhi hum dhundh rahe hain kabhi kissi kabhi kahin hum ghum rahe hain tanha hain ye keh nahi sakte, sath sab hain Phir bhi tabha rehne ki wajah dhundh rahe hai
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«Reply #5 on: December 16, 2010, 09:45:57 AM » |
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tabahi-barbaadi ki wajah kya dhoondta hai samandar me ek boond kya dhoondta hai swikaar le uss khuda ki khudai na khalega tujhe fir'nirala' yaar ki judai
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«Reply #6 on: December 16, 2010, 09:50:07 AM » |
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judaai ka gham aisa hai jo sahaa nahin jaata kya karieyn juda hokar raha nahin jaata kartey hain koshish lakh dil se use nikaalne ki dil ka to koi kasoor nahin khud hi behlaana nahin aata
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«Reply #7 on: December 16, 2010, 09:55:59 AM » |
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pehchann toh abhi hum dhundh rahe hain kabhi kissi kabhi kahin hum ghum rahe hain tanha hain ye keh nahi sakte, sath sab hain Phir bhi tabha rehne ki wajah dhundh rahe hai
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kuch kuch apni baat lagi....bht khub adik ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 16, 2010, 09:56:54 AM » |
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judaai ka gham aisa hai jo sahaa nahin jaata kya karieyn juda hokar raha nahin jaata kartey hain koshish lakh dil se use nikaalne ki dil ka to koi kasoor nahin khud hi behlaana nahin aata
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«Reply #9 on: December 16, 2010, 09:57:13 AM » |
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samandar bhi kissi ke intejaar mein rehta hai jab nahi aata koi toh woh uffan mein rehta hai kitna dard hai kissi ke dil mein kaun kehta hai "Anil" toh bus apne dard ko lafzoin mein likhta rehta hai
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«Reply #10 on: December 16, 2010, 10:02:07 AM » |
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uth ti hai lehar saagar mein to ehsaas yeh hota hai phir se koi toofan aaj saahil se takraayega phir se doob jayengi chahat ki kashtiyan phir se koi bewafai ke sagar mein doob jayega har baar yehi sochkar hum samandhar mein jaate hain is baar shayad pyar ka saahil humein mil jayega
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«Reply #11 on: December 16, 2010, 10:44:10 AM » |
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kuch kuch apni baat lagi....bht khub adik ji
thanks kasak ji khata kis ki thi kya pata naam hamara aaya khushi kissi ko milli Gum mere daman mein aaya jitni baar koshish ki maine khud ko hasane ki, har baar koi naya chehra mujhe rulane aaya..... Anil R Bhardwaj
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«Reply #12 on: December 16, 2010, 10:51:46 AM » |
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zahir tha humein ke woh mera nahi hai phir bhi koshish ki humne usse pane ki samandar mein utar kar sahil par jaane ki Dhub gaya "Anil" or usne kaha ye meri chahat thi
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«Reply #13 on: December 16, 2010, 10:56:32 AM » |
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samandar bhi kissi ke intejaar mein rehta hai jab nahi aata koi toh woh uffan mein rehta hai kitna dard hai kissi ke dil mein kaun kehta hai "Anil" toh bus apne dard ko lafzoin mein likhta rehta hai
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mast h anil
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«Reply #14 on: December 16, 2010, 11:02:08 AM » |
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na jane kyun teri ankhon mein koi khayal rehta hai jawab nahin jiska koi hothon par woh sawaal rehta hai tere dil ke samandhar mein koi toofan uth ta rehta hai kar le koi haasil mujhko saahil bhi tarasta rehta hai ho jaye jo nazriyn inaayat apki is na cheej par apke do lafzon ko parhne dil betaab sa rehta
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