~ * MARTE DAM TAK * ~ _DeV

by thinkhattk on February 02, 2010, 11:00:05 AM
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KASH ME TUMHE BATA PATI KI ME TUMHE KITNA PYAR KARTI HU,
ME AANKHEN BANDH KARTI HU TO TUMHE DEKHTI HU,

AANKHEN KHOLTI HU TO TUMHE HI DEKHNA CHAHTI HU,
TUM PASS NAHI HOTE TO TUMHE CHARO TARAF MEHSUS KARTI HU,

HAR GHADI,HAR PAL,HAR WAQT MERI AANKHE MERI 'JAAN' KO DHUNDHTI REHTI HE,
IS PYAR KAHU YA PAGAL PAN KE MERE DIL KI DHADKAN MERE LIYE EK HI BAAT HE,

PYAR TO BAHOT LOG KARTE HE MERE JESA PYAR KOI NAHI KAR SAKTA,
KYUKI KISI KE TUM NAHI HO,ME TUMHE BHUL NAHI SAKTI KYUKI TUM MERE HO,

ME TUMHE ZINDGI BHAR PYAR KARUNGI,
MARTE DAM KARUNGI OR USKE BAAD HI KARTI RAHUNGI....


                       
                  N_M
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«Reply #1 on: February 02, 2010, 11:54:58 AM »
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Good One... Keep writing... !!

Tum aur acha kar sakti ho.. yuhin likhti raho..Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: February 02, 2010, 12:05:49 PM »
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Wah wah Think ji, bahut achhi poem lagi aapki. Continue making efforts.
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«Reply #3 on: February 02, 2010, 01:13:24 PM »
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GUD THK Applause Applause
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brokenbyluv
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«Reply #4 on: February 02, 2010, 11:08:12 PM »
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Moved to appropriate section!

Thnx...
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«Reply #5 on: February 03, 2010, 12:26:16 AM »
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Nice effort Devangi-di...... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Naa karo itna pyaar kisi se
Ye mard hote nahi kaabil iske

Beech bhawar chhod jaate ye
Naa karo bharosa tum in pe
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«Reply #6 on: February 03, 2010, 05:22:29 AM »
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good one
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«Reply #7 on: February 03, 2010, 06:06:46 AM »
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Bahut khoob Deevangi ji and Koyal ji,beautiful lines. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: February 03, 2010, 08:27:11 AM »
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Nice One Devangi Ji & Koyal JI
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«Reply #9 on: February 03, 2010, 08:48:19 AM »
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Thanks a lot Madhu-di....

Quote from: madhuwesh on February 03, 2010, 06:06:46 AM
Bahut khoob Deevangi ji and Koyal ji,beautiful lines. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: February 03, 2010, 08:51:35 AM »
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Thank you SKji....

Quote from: Shayaries_King on February 03, 2010, 08:27:11 AM
Nice One Devangi Ji & Koyal JI
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«Reply #11 on: February 03, 2010, 08:54:45 AM »
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Nice creation
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #12 on: February 03, 2010, 09:00:20 AM »
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Aapka shukriya Aakaashji...


Quote from: @kaash on February 03, 2010, 08:53:30 AM
nicely written Devangi ji n good lines Koyal ji
bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: February 03, 2010, 09:04:34 AM »
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aap sabhi ka bahot bahot sukriya....

good responce koyal.... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: February 03, 2010, 09:33:07 AM »
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You are always welcome Dewangi-di....you wrote so good...

Quote from: thinkhattk on February 03, 2010, 09:04:34 AM
aap sabhi ka bahot bahot sukriya....

good responce koyal.... Clapping Smiley
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