meri dadhkan dil se

by saahill on May 29, 2011, 04:52:50 PM
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jab se meri jaan mujse juda si ho gayee hai .
Tab se mere dil se meri dadhkan kahin kho gayee hai ,

jindagi hai bejan si dunya hai veeran si.
 dil ke toot jane se dadhkan hai preshan Si .
Isi liye to dil ki mere haalat aisi ho gayee hai.
Jab se mere dil ki dadhkan kahin kho gayee hai .

Toot ke main bikhar raha hoon . Khud se hi yeh zikar kar raha hoon .
Itna tanha ho gaya hoon ke tanhayee bhi kahin kho gayee hai .

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«Reply #1 on: May 29, 2011, 05:00:38 PM »
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jab se meri jaan mujse juda si ho gayee hai .
Tab se mere dil se meri dadhkan kahin kho gayee hai ,

jindagi hai bejan si dunya hai veeran si.
 dil ke toot jane se dadhkan hai preshan Si .
Isi liye to dil ki mere haalat aisi ho gayee hai.
Jab se mere dil ki dadhkan kahin kho gayee hai .

Toot ke main bikhar raha hoon . Khud se hi yeh zikar kar raha hoon .
Itna tanha ho gaya hoon ke tanhayee bhi kahin kho gayee hai .


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«Reply #2 on: May 29, 2011, 05:41:37 PM »
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thx manoj ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 29, 2011, 06:20:45 PM »
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good poem Saahill ji......... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ja manaale usse jo tujhse rooth kar juda ho gayee hai
Ja ke bayaan kar ussse kaisi teri haalat ho gayee hai


jab se meri jaan mujse juda si ho gayee hai .
Tab se mere dil se meri dadhkan kahin kho gayee hai ,

jindagi hai bejan si dunya hai veeran si.
 dil ke toot jane se dadhkan hai preshan Si .
Isi liye to dil ki mere haalat aisi ho gayee hai.
Jab se mere dil ki dadhkan kahin kho gayee hai .

Toot ke main bikhar raha hoon . Khud se hi yeh zikar kar raha hoon .
Itna tanha ho gaya hoon ke tanhayee bhi kahin kho gayee hai .


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«Reply #4 on: May 29, 2011, 06:43:02 PM »
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thx koyal ji sath dene ke liye
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