Mu Kebala Tumara

by shubhransu on August 12, 2013, 02:02:12 AM
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Jibana re aneka dekhichhy ...
Dekhi nahi tuma pari..............
Tumaku dekhile lage
Anya mane tuchhha pari.....

Emity kahin hela boli
jebe pachare mu tumaku.........
Khali kuha "kahin Ete bhala hela ?
Pachara ta nijaku.........."

Sara Rati anidra rahe je
Gote tuma miss call paeen........
"Apekhya" re puni ki kasta thaee je
Jama soi pare naheen.............

Kana paaen dekheila tuma
Bhala paeeba ra namuna..........
Ebe Hrudaya magile
Karibani jama manaaaa.............

Emity kahili..ragibani jama
Tume pa ati nijara.........
Kahaku kahibi aee sabu katha
Mu para eka tumara......kebala tumara.........
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«Reply #1 on: August 12, 2013, 08:30:58 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 12, 2013, 09:08:41 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2013, 11:58:33 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2013, 01:52:51 PM »
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I believe this is in Oriya, bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne, mujhe kaafi had tak samajh mein aa gayaa magar pooraa nahi, agar aap translation bhi saath mein de de to aur log samajh paayenge...!!!
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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2013, 04:02:42 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2013, 07:57:49 PM »
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Mujhe samajh mein nahi aaya...
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«Reply #9 on: August 13, 2013, 02:02:56 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
I believe this is in Oriya, bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne, mujhe kaafi had tak samajh mein aa gayaa magar pooraa nahi, agar aap translation bhi saath mein de de to aur log samajh paayenge...!!!


"Jiban mein bahut dekha hun
Lekin tumsa nahi dekha
tumko dekhne ke baad
aaur koi bhi achhha nahi lagte....

aaise kyon huae ho
jab bhi tumko puchta hun
tum sirf bolte ho "etne achhe kyon
 hue ho jara khud ko puchhoo.....?"

sari Raat bechan rehta hun
Ek tumhara miss call ke liye...
"Intezar" mein phir kaisa dard hota hai
sooo nahi pata hun ....

Kis liye dikhayee
tumari pyar ka sample
ab agar dil mangu to
mana nahi karna...

aaisa sab mein bol raha hun..gusha nahi karna
tum mere apne ho...
Kisko bolu eea sab batein..
Mu sirf tumara...only tumara"

If something mistake in my hindi...then SORRYY
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«Reply #10 on: August 13, 2013, 03:54:29 AM »
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thank u soo much... bahut bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne... Hindi me thoda bahut upar niche chalta hai, magar aapke thoughts bahut achche hain.. so sweet..!!!



"Jiban mein bahut dekha hun
Lekin tumsa nahi dekha
tumko dekhne ke baad
aaur koi bhi achhha nahi lagte....

aaise kyon huae ho
jab bhi tumko puchta hun
tum sirf bolte ho "etne achhe kyon
 hue ho jara khud ko puchhoo.....?"

sari Raat bechan rehta hun
Ek tumhara miss call ke liye...
"Intezar" mein phir kaisa dard hota hai
sooo nahi pata hun ....

Kis liye dikhayee
tumari pyar ka sample
ab agar dil mangu to
mana nahi karna...

aaisa sab mein bol raha hun..gusha nahi karna
tum mere apne ho...
Kisko bolu eea sab batein..
Mu sirf tumara...only tumara"

If something mistake in my hindi...then SORRYY
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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2013, 04:53:25 PM »
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Mujhe samajh mein nahi aaya...

"Jiban mein bahut dekha hun
Lekin tumsa nahi dekha
tumko dekhne ke baad
aaur koi bhi achhha nahi lagte....

aaise kyon huae ho
jab bhi tumko puchta hun
tum sirf bolte ho "etne achhe kyon
 hue ho jara khud ko puchhoo.....?"

sari Raat bechan rehta hun
Ek tumhara miss call ke liye...
"Intezar" mein phir kaisa dard hota hai
sooo nahi pata hun ....

Kis liye dikhayee
tumari pyar ka sample
ab agar dil mangu to
mana nahi karna...

aaisa sab mein bol raha hun..gusha nahi karna
tum mere apne ho...
Kisko bolu eea sab batein..
Mu sirf tumara...only tumara"

If something mistake in my hindi...then SORRYY
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«Reply #12 on: August 14, 2013, 01:29:38 AM »
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thank u soo much... bahut bahut achchaa likhaa hai aapne... Hindi me thoda bahut upar niche chalta hai, magar aapke thoughts bahut achche hain.. so sweet..!!!




So sweet of you....Thank you........
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