***Patthar DiL***

by AVTAR RAYAT on May 18, 2010, 04:08:09 AM
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Ret Par Naam Likhne Se Kya Fayida...
Koyi Lehar Aayegi Kuchh Bachega Nahi,
Aur Tumne Mujhe Patthar Dil Keh Diya...
Lekin, Patthro'n Par Likhoge Mitega Nahi...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 18, 2010, 04:15:18 AM »
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Bahut khoob Avtar ji.kamaal ke aur ek alag andaaz ji.great work.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: May 18, 2010, 05:09:49 AM »
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Good one Avtar Ji
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«Reply #3 on: May 18, 2010, 06:02:34 AM »
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Bahot achhae ahsaas likhe hain Avtar ji. Main bhi try karta hun

Fayeda kuchh nahi,mat naam likho ret pe tum
Aayegi koi lahar aur bikhar jaayega
Tumne pathar to mujhe keh diya lekin socho
Jo bhi pathar pe likhoge nahi mit paayega       
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«Reply #4 on: May 18, 2010, 12:05:49 PM »
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Bahaut khoob Avtar jee aur Naushad jee..
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«Reply #5 on: May 18, 2010, 04:20:33 PM »
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buhat khoob.. Avtar Rayat jee n Nashad jee !

hum bhe qalam aazmaatay hain...

Rate par naam likhnay say kya fayda
jub leher ayay ge, kuch bachay ga nahi
dil hay pather mera, tum ne keh tu diya
patheron par likhoge, mitay ga nahi..
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«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2010, 06:10:06 PM »
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MERA DIL AAJ USKE LIYE NA ROTA
GAR USKA DIL PATHAR KA NA HOTA
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«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2010, 09:36:37 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Avtar ji...!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 19, 2010, 01:36:15 PM »
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Aap Sabka Shukria,,,,Madhu Ji,,,Rajesh Ji,,,Nashad Ji,,,
Rahim Ji,,,vb Ji,,,Manoj Ji,,,&,,,Klaskar Ji,,,,Thanx Alot
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«Reply #9 on: May 19, 2010, 05:27:48 PM »
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avtar g umda gazel to aap likhte hai
aur shukariya khamkha hamara karte hai
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