raaton ko chand mei hamei tum hi nazar aye...

by hameeda on December 28, 2010, 10:28:09 PM
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as salamu alekum
 




 
raaton ko chand mei hame tum hi nazar aye
gin gin ke hei  taare shabe gam he guzara
 
awaz deke ham ko kabhi tum bhi pukaro
he aarzoo hamei . es dil ko dedo  sahara
 
mar jaye na lekar ke tere pyar ka gam ham
aja o tadap kar he  es dil ne pukara

 
kab se liye huwe hei ye dil mei aarzoo
dam ye na nikal jaye. kahi  deed ka maraa
 
written by hameeda ameer
apna khayal rakhna
ALLAH HAFIZ
 
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«Reply #1 on: December 28, 2010, 10:28:38 PM »
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as salamu alekum
 




 
raaton ko chand mei hame tum hi nazar aye
gin gin ke hei  taare shabe gam he guzara
 
awaz deke ham ko kabhi tum bhi pukaro
he aarzoo hamei . es dil ko dedo  sahara
 
mar jaye na lekar ke tere pyar ka gam ham
aja o tadap kar he  es dil ne pukara

 
kab se liye huwe hei ye dil mei aarzoo
dam ye na nikal jaye. kahi  deed ka maraa
 
written by hameeda ameer
apna khayal rakhna
ALLAH HAFIZ
 
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«Reply #2 on: December 28, 2010, 10:29:47 PM »
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Walaikum As Salaam,.

Bohat Achchi Sharing Hai Hameeda Ji,
Yunhi Likhte Rahein,.

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«Reply #3 on: December 28, 2010, 10:33:11 PM »
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walekum salaam
bahut achha likha hai aapne Hameeda ji..

mujhe awaaz na de ki main tujh tak aa na jaaun
log kehte hain ki kisi ke kaabil nahi hai Intezar !

Intezar !
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«Reply #4 on: December 29, 2010, 06:09:15 AM »
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Nice work Hameeda jee....kuch toota foota humne bhi likh diya aapke sath.

Aarzoo dil me sambhal ke rakhna
Gum sare zindagi se nikaal ke rakhna
Marzi ho mere Rabb ki main laut aaoo yara
Tum dua koi aisi uchaal ke rakhna...

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«Reply #5 on: December 29, 2010, 06:57:42 AM »
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bht achhci peshkash hameeda ji...yunhi lihte rahiye
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«Reply #6 on: December 29, 2010, 06:59:58 AM »
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walekum salaam
bahut achha likha hai aapne Hameeda ji..

mujhe awaaz na de ki main tujh tak aa na jaaun
log kehte hain ki kisi ke kaabil nahi hai Intezar !

Intezar !

kaun hai tu aur kya hai ye tujhe kya khabar
ek baar khud ko meri nazar se dekh to intezar...
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«Reply #7 on: December 29, 2010, 07:02:58 AM »
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Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on December 29, 2010, 06:09:15 AM
Nice work Hameeda jee....kuch toota foota humne bhi likh diya aapke sath.

Aarzoo dil me sambhal ke rakhna
Gum sare zindagi se nikaal ke rakhna
Marzi ho mere Rabb ki main laut aaoo yara
Tum dua koi aisi uchaal ke rakhna...

SG

bht khubbb sajid ji....
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«Reply #8 on: December 29, 2010, 06:35:09 PM »
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Hameeda Jee Aadaab!

Behad khoob ashaar kahe hai dil se daad kabool kijiye..
Likhate rahiye.....

Khush O aabad rahiye..
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Tamaam raateN humne khaaboN meiN guzaari
Key woh aaye jo dafatan nindeN udaa gaye         

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«Reply #9 on: December 31, 2010, 10:21:30 AM »
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Nice Sharing Hameeda JI
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