tanhaai

by sumir on September 23, 2010, 08:35:13 AM
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 in aankhon mei khwabon ke siva kuch bhi nahi,,,,,
is dil mei yaadon ke siva kuch nahi,,,
koi pooche to lagta hai jinda hun mai,,,
varna bin tere mai ab kuch bhi nahi,,,
 kuch bhi nahi........
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2010, 09:32:23 AM »
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very nice..........heart touching lines
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2010, 09:38:28 AM »
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hmm sumirr jiii achhi lines heee...umda likha he apne~likhte rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2010, 12:35:24 PM »
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Bahot achhe Sumir ji. Nice creation.
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2010, 01:48:39 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2010, 04:05:54 PM »
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thxx klaskar ji!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2010, 04:07:48 PM »
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thxx riyaz ji!!!
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«Reply #7 on: September 23, 2010, 04:08:31 PM »
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thxx abhi ji!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2010, 04:09:10 PM »
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thxx krishan ji!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2010, 05:48:54 PM »
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Achha likha hai ji....sumir..... Applause Applause Applause

Dekh nahi sakta khud ko Mein aaina hu. tou kya kuchh bhi nahi
Samne jab tu aa khada ho,tu he tu hai bas mein kuchh bhi nahi




 in aankhon mei khwabon ke siva kuch bhi nahi,,,,,
is dil mei yaadon ke siva kuch nahi,,,
koi pooche to lagta hai jinda hun mai,,,
varna bin tere mai ab kuch bhi nahi,,,
 kuch bhi nahi........
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2010, 08:49:54 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 24, 2010, 04:27:59 AM »
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thx neelgold ji!!!
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«Reply #12 on: September 24, 2010, 04:28:43 AM »
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thx anaam g!!!!!
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