tere piyaar me kuch bhi kar jaungi

by hameeda on May 11, 2010, 03:59:29 AM
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as salamu ale kum
 

tere piyar me kuchbhi kar jaungi
me sari haddon se guzaar jaungi
 
tu dunia he meri ...mera piyaar  he
or  kya kahun tujhe  me mar jaun gi
 
 
dukhon ko bhi hans kar seh jaun gi
magar tujh se wada mujhe chahiye
 
tu rehna mera  warna mar jaun gi
me teri hun sajan ye man le tu
 
hun me teri khushi me ye  jan le
teri rah me apni palken bichadu
 
ho kante jo  teri raho me wo sare hata dun
teri khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar jaungi
 
mohabbat me had se guzaar jaungi
khushi se mohabbat me mar jaungi
 
apna khyal rkhna
written by hameeda ameer
allah hafiz
 
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2010, 09:52:25 AM »
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buhat khoob !
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2010, 12:30:10 PM »
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dil ki har baat ko sabdo mai piro diya aap ne hameeda ji Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 11, 2010, 01:01:13 PM »
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bahut khoob Hameeda ji... bahut khoob likha hai...!!!
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2010, 01:11:51 PM »
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Hameedaji achha kalaam hai aapka.... Applause Applause Applause
Par ek aur alag soch hai...soch kar dekhiyega.....


Pyaar tou sakhee zindagi hai
Kyu dhamki deti ho marne ki

Sharto par kabhi pyaar kiya nahi jaata
Vishwaas bina pyaar nibhaya nahi jaata

Samarpan he sacha pyaar hai sakhee
Maangna nahi dena pyaar hai sakhee
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2010, 01:23:07 PM »
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bahut bahut pyaara likha hai aapne Koyal ji... aur sach kaha hai .... bahut sundar kavita hai... bahut khoob...!!!

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Quote from: KOYAL46 on May 11, 2010, 01:11:51 PM
Hameedaji achha kalaam hai aapka.... Applause Applause Applause
Par ek aur alag soch hai...soch kar dekhiyega.....


Pyaar tou sakhee zindagi hai
Kyu dhamki deti ho marne ki

Sharto par kabhi pyaar kiya nahi jaata
Vishwaas bina pyaar nibhaya nahi jaata

Samarpan he sacha pyaar hai sakhee
Maangna nahi dena pyaar hai sakhee
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2010, 05:04:47 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hameeda JI
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2010, 05:06:11 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on May 11, 2010, 01:11:51 PM
Hameedaji achha kalaam hai aapka.... Applause Applause Applause
Par ek aur alag soch hai...soch kar dekhiyega.....


Pyaar tou sakhee zindagi hai
Kyu dhamki deti ho marne ki

Sharto par kabhi pyaar kiya nahi jaata
Vishwaas bina pyaar nibhaya nahi jaata

Samarpan he sacha pyaar hai sakhee
Maangna nahi dena pyaar hai sakhee


Good response Koyal Ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 12, 2010, 06:55:06 AM »
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Shukriya Klaskar-ji.....for appriciating my lines......

Quote from: klaskar on May 11, 2010, 01:23:07 PM
bahut bahut pyaara likha hai aapne Koyal ji... aur sach kaha hai .... bahut sundar kavita hai... bahut khoob...!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: May 12, 2010, 07:09:28 AM »
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Thanks Rajesh-ji......for appriciating my lines....

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on May 11, 2010, 05:06:11 PM
Good response Koyal Ji
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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2010, 11:45:33 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hameeda ji bahut khoobsurti se likhi aapne,Koyal sis aapne bhi khoob saath diya .great creation Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2010, 06:51:07 AM »
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Thanks mADHU-DI.....
Quote from: madhuwesh on May 23, 2010, 11:45:33 PM
Bahut khoob Hameeda ji bahut khoobsurti se likhi aapne,Koyal sis aapne bhi khoob saath diya .great creation Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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