$*&*&*$*UNWAN$*&*&*$

by shad on March 13, 2010, 09:48:44 AM
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Aadab Ummed hai mere ye gazal aap ke dil ko chojane ke had tak pasand aaye .Maine es me ek Baap ke zazbat ko perone ke koshish ke hai.Mere Likhe huye ye gazal jo mujhe bahut pasan aaye .Aur Mai eska UNWAN Nahi likh paya.Aap he koye name den esko.
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Jo baat ho sahe wo he baat tum kerna
Mere Bety mere name ko badnam na kerna
Raho kahen bhi mere duaayen hai sath
kabhi bhi tum koye galat kam na kerna
Apne waqt per gher aajaya karo bety
Ker ke tum deer hame preshan na kerna
Tunme basta hai mere wazud ka ek hessa
Hoker alag mujhse mujhe hairan na kerna
Rah chalte huye jo ungle thama kerte ho
Tum chood ker usko mujhe hairan na kerna
SHAD,mere bety tumse mai pyaar kerta hun
Khoker mera pyaar mujhe mushmmar na kerna
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«Reply #1 on: March 13, 2010, 09:51:29 AM »
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bahut hi badhya shad

pahlki 4 lines to kamal ki lagi
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«Reply #2 on: March 13, 2010, 03:11:52 PM »
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GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2010, 08:59:42 AM »
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Wah wah Shad ji,very touching and beautiful gazal.bahut achi soch ke saath likha aapne.bahut pasand aayi.keep it up.excellent Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2010, 09:39:14 AM »
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thanks madhuwish
Mere koshish yahe hai kuch achche soch ke sath kuch achcha lik sakun jo haqeqat ke qareeb ho.
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